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Post by rd on Jun 17, 2008 14:52:35 GMT -5
Good LORD, you guys have totally put up some fantastic work here. I am so totally blown away by all of this! This contest is turning out to be one of the most beautiful ideas that have ever been done on this site, or on ANY other I know of for that matter. I want to take an opportunity to thank our own LORD VICTORINO for posing the idea in the first place! THANK YOU, TONY!!! You SO ROCK in every kind of Dolby imaginable!!! YAAAAAAY!!! All of you reading this page, PLEASE take a few minutes to read the first 2 pages of this thread, and marvel at the work of these fine entrants, OK? THIS will make it easy for ya... ronstoppable.proboards89.com/index.cgi?board=contest&action=display&thread=14554&page=1Please and THANK YOU ALL! ;D ;D ;D RD
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Post by rd on Jun 17, 2008 20:11:28 GMT -5
here we have another offering by
MANGAFANGIRL!
Soon Together
There’s ash falling From far above Explosions beating Battered love
A hand that’s pulling Endless tears Drawn and mastered Through the years
Smiles soft spoken Red crushed lips Never ceasing Swaying hips
Reddened hair Slow faded blush Leading to A helpless crush
So invisible Unforeseen A future waiting Boy, girl, team
In the angel’s Whispered call He hoped, forgetting Hope was small
Found his courage Found his edge Gave his promise Gave his pledge
So in the end The envy fails Giving way To happy tales.
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Post by rd on Jun 19, 2008 13:34:14 GMT -5
YEAH, we are now graced by not just one but TWO offerings by a relatively new member to RS, Cody MacArthur Fett! YAAAAAY! DIG it, Gang... _______________________________________________________ Youth is destroyed,
Worlds burn,
Heroes flee,
Hope . . . becomes unsealed._______________________________________________________ #2 Fires burn their ethereal flames, Born in flesh, Dripped in spite.
Hammers fall upon the anvil, Fire clashes with steel, Passion fans the flames of war.
The gates open, Roads form, Fury marches forth.
Slaves return, Wielding brimstone and fire, Burn their masters upon the pyres.
Light breaks forth into the night, Bound by chains, too petty and light.
Nova rises with dawn's new day, Lotus blooms with night's new fray, Valkyrie soars under the demons' gaze, Knight destroys the liar's haze, Heroes unite to finish the fight.
Born in sin, Forged in strength, Truth is realized upon the length._______________________________________________________ Truly a pair of deep and heartfelt offerings, Cody. THANKS for submitting these great works! RD
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Post by Kaiokken on Jun 20, 2008 18:33:58 GMT -5
I couldn't help it.... Here's one I had written before... but changed it specifically for Kim and Ron... "While you Sleep"
Close your beautiful green eyes and rest your head on my chest It’s so wonderful to see you all relaxed and unstressed
Let me feel your heartbeat… as it beats with my own Like a pair of drums beating to a sensual tone
I’ll run my fingers all through your soft auburn hair Caress your face and whisper love to your ear
Drift away KP, let your mind be free While you sleep in my arms… while you’re next to me
As you lay there beautifully, I just noticed your smile Those dreams must be wonderful all the while
I wish that I could join you in it to share Or maybe it’s that I’m already there…
Dream sweet dreams KP, sweet as can be Cause nothing else matters, cause you’re here with me
And I cherish everyday I can hold you near While you sleep in my arms… while I hold you here.
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Post by rd on Jun 20, 2008 18:48:17 GMT -5
Thanks for posting, Kaiokken!
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Post by Blue on Jun 21, 2008 10:18:45 GMT -5
Well, I sent my entry to you, RD!
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Post by rd on Jun 21, 2008 10:27:25 GMT -5
Well, I sent my entry to you, RD! Hiya, BB! Yes, I did receive it in the PM you sent, and here it is... ________________________________________________________ She is the One
By: Baby Blue
She is the one who saves the world She is the one who is the girl Who knows what to do at any time She is the one fights the crime
She knows what's good, bad, right and wrong She knows the path of the destined one Who leads the group to the destination She knows she can overcome temptation
She knows her sidekick is more than that She knows her sidekick is her friend When she feels blue and is getting sad Her sidekick always has her back
She is the one who saves the world She is the one who is that girl Who knows what to do at any time She is the one who fights the crime...________________________________________________________ I tried to post it in the form that you sent it to me, but it copied to here in this way. The colors were very neat! If you'd like to re-post this wonderful work in the way you sent it to me, you certainly may... but I think this work is just fine any way you see it. RD
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Post by Blue on Jun 21, 2008 10:29:22 GMT -5
Well, I sent my entry to you, RD! Hiya, BB! Yes, I did receive it in the PM you sent, and here it is... ________________________________________________________ She is the One
By: Baby Blue
She is the one who saves the world She is the one who is the girl Who knows what to do at any time She is the one fights the crime
She knows what's good, bad, right and wrong She knows the path of the destined one Who leads the group to the destination She knows she can overcome temptation
She knows her sidekick is more than that She knows her sidekick is her friend When she feels blue and is getting sad Her sidekick always has her back
She is the one who saves the world She is the one who is that girl Who knows what to do at any time She is the one who fights the crime...________________________________________________________ I tried to post it in the form that you sent it to me, but it copied to here in this way. The colors were very neat! If you'd like to re-post this wonderful work in the way you sent it to me, you certainly may... but I think this work is just fine any way you see it. RD Sure! She is the one By: Baby Blue
She is the one who saves the world She is the one who is the girl Who knows what to do at any time She is the one fights the crime
She knows what's good, bad, right and wrong She knows the path of the destined one Who leads the group to the destination She knows she can overcome temptation
She knows her sidekick is more than that She knows her sidekick is her friend When she feels blue and is getting sad Her sidekick always has her back
She is the one who saves the world She is the one who is that girl Who knows what to do at any time She is the one who fights the crime...
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Post by rd on Jun 21, 2008 10:33:35 GMT -5
VERY VERY nice work, BB!
THANKS for posting!
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Post by Blue on Jun 21, 2008 10:44:43 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by rd on Jun 24, 2008 13:00:41 GMT -5
Another beautiful work by Star Eva 01 here, guys! Enjoy!
What is it that you see? A poem by Star-Eva01
KPKPKPKP
What is it that you see when you look at me? What is in your mind, your heart, or your soul just what do you see?
Do you look inside myself and find things that I have hidden there? Can you see the things buried deep inside, or is it the things that I share?
Is it my love for you and our family that you see when you look at me? Do you still see that young girl that I keep masked: the one I used to be?
Am I that girl still in your heart the one that fell in love with you back then? Is my hair still down to my waist in your mind when your broken heart I did mend?
You told me then how she hurt you and left you in such pain? She left you standing there and that’s how I found you: crying, in the rain?
She was childish to hurt you and do what she did, To cheat on you and break your heart the way that she did.
It took time to heal your heart and soul so that you could love again, And I waited for you, my love, so that with us we could begin.
Do you see me the way I was when we married and said “I Do”? Am I the way I was when I promised: to you I would be true?
What is it that you see when you look at me? Do you see my love of you in my heart: is that what you see?
Do I look the same way I did that night so long ago? That night you carried me across the threshold, and love showed.
On that night of magic and love that I hold to my heart so dear, Wrapped in your arms and with your love, we both shed a tear.
Do you still see my hair that we used for a blanket late into the night? Is that the image of me in your heart that you see when we turn off the lights?
What is it that you see when you look at me? Am I a woman, a doctor, or a mother to you: tell me what you see?
Do you remember that day I walked down a different kind of aisle, When I became a Doctor along with you though I had been your wife for a while?
When you stood by me in that place in the distance past, When my job forced me to remove our “blanket” and it became part of the past.
Am I the woman you saw with her belly swollen and crying late into the night, As I carried our first child inside me when I was filled with worry and fright?
Do you see the woman covered in sweat and screaming at you and the world? Is that what you see when you look at me when I became the mother of our girl?
Do you see me the way I a few short years down the road, When I was pregnant with our boys and carried an oh-so-heavy load.
Just what do you see when your black eyes look at me in the early morning light, Do you see the mother of our children, a partner maybe, your lover, or your wife?
Tell me, my love, what is in your heart that beats in rhythm with mine? What lives in your soul and pours out of your eyes like rays of sunshine?
Am I the girl from that time long ago in that pouring ran, Am I that girl from the past that loved you without any shame?
Am I the woman that laid with you on our wedding night, Wearing only in my ring and my waist-length hair and loved you with all my might?
Am I the partner that bore our children that we both cherish and love, Am I the woman that holds you and caresses you with the touch of a dove?
Am I the lover that shares you bed and that you desire, The one what alights your passion and that feeds your fire?
I think all these things as we are here with our children beside you and me, And I wonder what I would find if inside your mind heart and soul I could see.
Then I feel a touch like a feather along the side of my face and holding my chin, Then I hear the sound of a voice not mine coming from within.
“Yes, my love, I see all those women when I look into your blue eyes my lovely wife, The mother, the partner, my lover, and my girl, don’t you know you are my life?
For you are all these things and so much more to me, Look at me my love my life and you will surely see.”
I see our daughter and her love setting there with us, and I see into their eyes, And I see the wonder of their love for each other like the sun in a cloudless sky.
What is it that you see when you look at me the question is now mute my love, For us, all the answer is the part of us that lives without and flies like a dove.
Finished Author’s Notes:
I fully intended to have only one entry into the Poem contest over at RS.net that Kt talked about here on forums… But you remember that old line about the “Best laid plans of Mice and Men”, or in this case “best laid plans of Naked Mole Rats and Men.”
A writer here once told me that you can get an idea for something from the most unlikely places, and I get this one from talking to another writer here at FanFiction.net… So I lay this little ditty at your feet.
You know who you are… Thanks my friend to the gift of an idea.
And just to make sure that everything is cool with legal stuff out there: Kim Possible, and its characters, are copyright by Disney Inc. I’m just playing here for the fun of it. Star-Eva01
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Post by Luke Danger on Jun 24, 2008 15:19:29 GMT -5
*claps* Nice work everyone. I have allmost no skill at poetry (and that's being modest), so I won't enter, but heck, these are beautiful!
I seriously think I'm going to scrap book some of this stuff on the board. . .
Let me know when they're finished, I'll go through and put it all into a scrap-book of sorts, it'll probably just be a thread though with it all in one thread Quick Edit: Probably going to scrap book the fic contest and fan art contest as well, I really think this stuff is good!
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Post by screamingphoenix on Jun 30, 2008 9:46:29 GMT -5
I sent mine in.
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wizzkid
Yellow Trout
Some kind of strange guy
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Post by wizzkid on Jun 30, 2008 13:20:38 GMT -5
wow, respect to the writers
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Post by rd on Jun 30, 2008 14:41:53 GMT -5
We have had some breathtaking work submitted here, gang. As I have said, I'm literally blown away at the awesome work that has been publicized here on RS.NET...
I do wish to thank the people from Fanfiction.NET for coming over here and entering this competition.
THANKS, GUYS!!!
Well, four more days before the doors close on the entry gate! Hope the KinginYellows' muse has finally kicked in... as well as a lot of other folks!
See ya in 4 days!
Grandpa RD
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wizzkid
Yellow Trout
Some kind of strange guy
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Post by wizzkid on Jul 1, 2008 11:21:20 GMT -5
even my english is bad, i try my best:
Your 4 Me
My heart and my soul, gonna out of controll,
if you feel the pain, it hurts me that same,
i cant watch in your eyes, when your emerald green shine dies,
we are bounded forever, so we gonna die together,
you for me and im for you, like in old times our clue,
i follow you everywhere, as long as we our hearts share,
into the deepest hole or to the sky, dont matter how much it costs, i gonna try,
as long we fought against crime, we hold together all the time,
our life couldn´t ends, cause im still wearing my pents
hope u could enjoy it a bit.
best regrads,
Wizz
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Post by rd on Jul 1, 2008 11:24:38 GMT -5
Thank You for sharing your work with us, Wizz!
Wunderbar!
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Post by rd on Jul 2, 2008 0:38:19 GMT -5
And now we have a lovely rendering of soulful thoughts put into that ancient art form, the Haiku... Thank You, screamingphoenix! Haiku for two. Flame hair in the night. Green eyes my soul uplifts: Reveals her love now.
He stands tall for me. His gentle brown eyes show me: Devotion, always. Beauty! RD
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Post by rd on Jul 3, 2008 23:10:31 GMT -5
Only 1 more day to enter, Gang! Some people might consider this sort of sad, but I have to say this. This is going to be the last thing that I will instigate on the board. The prize coffers have dried up. No more stuff for give-away. So, you have until midnight tonight PDT to submit for the last hurrah of Grandpa RD's contests. Good luck to ya all! Dave
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Post by rd on Jul 4, 2008 22:04:15 GMT -5
We have another entry, guys. ;D
This work is by Lord Victorino, one of our staunch allies for the Fight for Five.
Here’s the Sitch
When the world is in danger and villains are on the attack, Kim Possible always takes them on, while Rufus and Ron watch her back.
You might not think Kim needs much help, but as a matter of fact, For Rufus just does what he does, while Ron is there to distract.
Got that one in under the wire, Tony!
THANKS for sending that in. Great work there. ;D ;D ;D
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