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Post by cadmus on Oct 4, 2007 3:34:43 GMT -5
Eh, Yori became a lame character after her revelation about her feelings towards K/R.
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Post by Robbie Valiant, P.I. on Oct 4, 2007 11:11:39 GMT -5
Hmm.... delete GSM, extend Graduation to a full movie, and restore the college ending. That's all I'd change.
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Post by maetch on Oct 4, 2007 11:21:11 GMT -5
I'd change quite a bit:
*More emphasis on Kim, less on Ron. *Rufus isn't as much of a deus ex machina, plus baddies actually account for him every now and then. *More appearences from Camille and Electronique. Why couldn't they have been introduced sooner? *Get rid of the Yamanouchi subplot, or at least not make it as hamfisted into the series as it was. *Dr. Director appears more. I like her and her mentor-like character. *The current villains are alright, but I'd like a villain that is actually intelligent enough to avoid standard cliche mistakes. *Ron keeps his S1 voice. I swear, every time I hear him whine in his high-pitched voice (and he whines a lot), I want to... hurt him. *While we're at it, keep Ron's character a little more consistant. None of this random maturing/regression.
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Post by AvinashTyagi on Oct 4, 2007 11:50:18 GMT -5
Eh, Yori became a lame character after her revelation about her feelings towards K/R. What by showing she was totally selfless? see i'm the oppsosite, I feel there is too much emphasis on Kim as it is, Ron is what made the show good
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Post by maetch on Oct 4, 2007 11:56:20 GMT -5
see i'm the oppsosite, I feel there is too much emphasis on Kim as it is, Ron is what made the show good Not to me. What they need is some balance between the two. Equal partners, neither Kim or Ron getting all the glory.
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Post by cadmus on Oct 4, 2007 14:01:18 GMT -5
Eh, Yori became a lame character after her revelation about her feelings towards K/R. What by showing she was totally selfless? Responding to a situation absolutely perfectly doesn't make you an interesting character. Maybe if Yori had shown some level concern, about Ron being with Kim, she would've shown more depth, thus more believable. I'm not asking for this to be over the top, its just that Yori's chemistry with Ron is really the only definitive reason I had to care about her. Once her chance with Ron was gone so was my interest in her. They completely botched the chance they had to give Yori a little depth, by having her respond to the Ron/Kim situation like a Mary Sue, her being totally fine with them smacked of convenience. At this point she was just a two-dimensional character.
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Post by AvinashTyagi on Oct 4, 2007 15:27:10 GMT -5
What by showing she was totally selfless? Responding to a situation absolutely perfectly doesn't make you an interesting character. Maybe if Yori had shown some level concern, about Ron being with Kim, she would've shown more depth, thus more believable. I'm not asking for this to be over the top, its just that Yori's chemistry with Ron is really the only definitive reason I had to care about her. Once her chance with Ron was gone so was my interest in her. They completely botched the chance they had to give Yori a little depth, by having her respond to the Ron/Kim situation like a Mary Sue, her being totally fine with them smacked of convenience. At this point she was just a two-dimensional character. I disagree, it showed that she is more concerned about others than herself, truly a deep and wise person, the perfect choice to take over as Master of Yamanuchi once Sensei passes on
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Post by NewSkool101 on Oct 4, 2007 16:24:58 GMT -5
What by showing she was totally selfless? Responding to a situation absolutely perfectly doesn't make you an interesting character. Maybe if Yori had shown some level concern, about Ron being with Kim, she would've shown more depth, thus more believable. I'm not asking for this to be over the top, its just that Yori's chemistry with Ron is really the only definitive reason I had to care about her. Once her chance with Ron was gone so was my interest in her. They completely botched the chance they had to give Yori a little depth, by having her respond to the Ron/Kim situation like a Mary Sue, her being totally fine with them smacked of convenience. At this point she was just a two-dimensional character. For the record, a Mary Sue would've just stolen Ron from Kim and pwnt her with her madd sue-rific SKEEWLZ~! Personally, I think Yori's "You and Kim rz da DESTINEH~!" comment was thrown in by the writers to reassure K/R fans that Kim and Ron are 'un-breakupable'.
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Post by The_Shadow on Oct 4, 2007 18:20:44 GMT -5
nothing in the past, but for the future, focus on the partnership of KP and RON. make ron a touch more serious in missions make ron more masculine, about 4 inches taller make ron edgy with his power, and maybe longer hair, or change his clothes
Kim: give her more weapons make her a more dangerous fighter
I guess i'm saying make these two more like MR. and MRs SMITH
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Post by Luke Danger on Oct 4, 2007 20:02:10 GMT -5
see i'm the oppsosite, I feel there is too much emphasis on Kim as it is, Ron is what made the show good Not to me. What they need is some balance between the two. Equal partners, neither Kim or Ron getting all the glory. Agree, while my position might seem more leaned toward Ron, I'm trying to balance Kim and Ron out, I'm trying to give every character a chance to shine in my fics, trust me, even Monkey Fist will get to shine. Heck, even BONNIE will. Now, another thing I'd change is durring graduation, first of all, have more then one unit type for the Lorwardians, and of course, have Kim, Ron,Shego, Drakken, Warhok, Warmonga weaving through a massive battle, like for example, a pair of US F-15 Eagles chasing down a Lorwardian Star Bomber or a walker being taken out by Kim, saving a tank squad, or Warmonga destroying a missile launcher, Kim stealing a Lorwardian Fighter and strafing Lorwardian troops, and blowing enemy fighters down, more invasion ships etc.
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Post by Alexlayer on Oct 4, 2007 21:50:23 GMT -5
I'd change K/R for Kigo.
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WHAT!? What did you expect me to say?
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Post by AvinashTyagi on Oct 5, 2007 4:10:22 GMT -5
I'd change K/R for Kigo. ... .. . WHAT!? What did you expect me to say? I'm all for it, Kigo and Rori for the win
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Post by ninjanaco on Oct 5, 2007 6:42:08 GMT -5
I'm all for it, Kigo and Rori for the win Ummm ... no.
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Post by NewSkool101 on Oct 5, 2007 6:48:26 GMT -5
I'm all for it, Kigo and Rori for the win Ummm ... no. Kigo and Rori for the loss, then. FOR THE LOSS~!
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Post by Luke Danger on Oct 5, 2007 6:53:33 GMT -5
LOL, well, at least it wasn't flaming. Glad to see we can still mess around with eachother without flaming.
Now, let's see, one thing I'd change, is make Warhok a hell lot more dangerous, no classic off-switch ok? I had high hopes for him like maetch, so this is one thing I'd change.
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Post by mike on Oct 5, 2007 7:07:55 GMT -5
I give Monty an ultimate showdown with Ron for a proper send-off ;D
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Post by NewSkool101 on Oct 5, 2007 7:55:12 GMT -5
I give Monty an ultimate showdown with Ron for a proper send-off ;D What are you talking about? Losing to a baby is the most proper send-off a villain can have. ;D I'd dispose of 'the accursed switch' as well, but I think the only reason it was even there to begin with was to save time that it would've taken to bring the ship down the hard way. (frickin' time constraints... )
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Post by mike on Oct 5, 2007 7:57:10 GMT -5
Well I'd still want to see Monty glow in furious Red against Ron glowing in cool blue... OMG that would rock!!!... Monty gets his proper share of the MMP and an all out fight.... haha, then Ron saves the day ;D BOO-YAH!!!
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Post by NewSkool101 on Oct 5, 2007 8:11:47 GMT -5
Well I'd still want to see Monty glow in furious Red against Ron glowing in cool blue... OMG that would rock!!!... Monty gets his proper share of the MMP and an all out fight.... haha, then Ron saves the day ;D BOO-YAH!!! All-out DBZ-style battle for the win! You know, that's probably the first time I've ever used a 'for the win' that actually made sense in the context of the sentence...
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Post by mike on Oct 5, 2007 8:27:19 GMT -5
Not DBZ more like Matrix: The Revolution ;D
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