Nice Infinit1. Read it and there's a lot of promise to your story. Shego and Drakken is an interesting relationship to explore and of course it's a lot different from Kim and Ron's. Though there's definitely something there between Shego and Drakken. Though I couldn't see Drakken and Shego get married that quickly, let along even get that far. If they even started to date, it would be awkward at best. It could turn out to become something really cute and sweet like Kim and Ron's relationship if they give it a chance to blossom and grow. But with Shego and Drakken it would take time at best.
Kim and Ron however are ready for the next step that their relationship will lead them too...and that is marriage.
Anyways Infinit1 you should join us here at Ron Stoppable site.
Yeah, I think we can cut the wedding out without impacting the story much. It was a throwaway idea from the onset anyway.
I don't want to join right now because I don't have any other ideas to contribute at the moment. I don't want to be a one-trick pony I mean, you and EddyBob15 have a whole bunch of good ideas for episodes, and I want to contribute just as much if I can.
I will sign the petition though, because I think KP can go on for about three or four more seasons (with them in college) before ending with them graduating from college, and possibly getting married. College can still be a good place to have KP episodes - look at how the Sweet Valley books switched from high school to college (not that I read them, my sister does).
Post by eddybob15 on Sept 27, 2007 23:15:51 GMT -5
Thanks for the compliments, Infint1, and don't sell yourself short, you've got writing potential. You might have what it takes to write good fan fics. Unfortunately, I'm running low on ideas at the moment, but I'll write as soon as something comes to me.
Last Edit: Sept 27, 2007 23:30:10 GMT -5 by eddybob15
Post by eddybob15 on Sept 28, 2007 23:45:56 GMT -5
Okay, I've got a new one. Kim and Ron investigate a break-in at lab that is studying sonic waves. While searching the lab, they come face to face with Gill. At first, Ron is freaked to see Gill, but then remembers that he is a monkey master. Gill asks why Ron isn't running scared, Ron replies that he's got some new skills. Gill chuckles and says "Me too". Gill lets out a rapid fire of slime, Kim and Ron dodge it. Ron sneaks up behind Gill and gives him a powerful kick, only to see it goes through Gill's back. Laughing evilly, Gill says "That tickles". Ron is horrified to see an arm grow out Gill's back, which throws Ron into a wall. Kim takes the opportunity to knock over a giant shelf, causing it collapse on Gill. At first, they think Gill is gone, but watch in horror as slime slithers out from under the collapsed shelf and reforms into Gill. Gill explains that he has been working with his mutant powers since Kim and Ron faced him last. Gill shows off more of power by stretching his arm like rubber and pins Ron to the wall. Using her laser, Kim cuts Gill's slimy appendage and frees Ron. Kim and Ron then see Gill's arm regenerate. Gill then returns the favor Kim gave him by morphing his hand into a giant hammer. Just as he swings at her, Ron knocks Kim out of the way. Gill then mocks how close Kim and Ron are, saying "If you two were any closer, you'd be..." he stops when he sees the way Kim and Ron are embracing. Gill can't believe that Kim and Ron are together. He tries to stiffle a giggle, but soon he is on all fours laughing his head off. Just when it looks like Gill is going to die laughing, he regains his composer. First he mockingly congratulates Ron for finally getting a girlfriend, then insults Kim by stating that he thought she of all people had better taste. Upset that Gill insulted Ron and her taste in boys, Kim gives Gill a punch to stomach.... and watches as it turns to water. Gill then explains that he can also morph into water. Gill then takes a deep breath and exhales a blast of freezing air. Kim and Ron jump out of the way and see the blast freeze the wall behind them. Gill decides to stop toying with Kim and Ron and reveal his greatest power. Gill raises his arms above his head and brings them down swiftly. Kim and Ron hear a noise above and look up to see the sprinkler system bust and water comes down over them. Gill points at Kim and Ron, who are shocked to see the water charge at them. Gill waves his arms, and as if by his command, the water begins to circle Kim and Ron. As Gill brings his hands to together, the circle of water closes in on Kim and Ron. Gill then reveals that he has the power to control all forms of liquid.....provided he is within five feet of it. Just before Gill can command the water to crush Kim and Ron, Ron grabs Kim and throws her over the circle. Kim knocks Gil over, causing the water to crash to the floor. Tired of playing, Gill spots the main support beam to the lab. Stretching out his arm, Gill grabs the beam and his muck melts through it. With the beam cut, the roof begins to collapse. Gill then pins Kim and Ron to the wall with slime, grabs his bag of stolen goods and runs out the door, believing Kim and Ron are finished. With Rufus's aid, Kim and Ron are freed from the wall and escape just as the lab caves-in. Wade has no idea what Gill wanted with the components he stole from the sonics lab, but tells Kim he'll alert her when he discovers where Gill is hiding. Meanwhile, Ron's confidence has taken a nose dive. His monkey powers failed to even stop Gill. Kim comforts Ron by telling him they will stop Gill. After much searching, Wade locates Gill's lair in the middle of the ocean (Kim and Ron figured that was obvious). Using the aquatic capability of Kim's car, the duo soon arrives at Gill's lair. Inside, they hear Gill's plan: Using the items he has stolen, Gill has created a device that will amplify his aquatic powers, enabling him to control all the water in the world. At that moment, Kim and Ron bust in and confront Gill. Gill is surprised Kim and Ron survived the destruction of the sonics lab, but intends to finish them for good. Placing the device on his head, Gill prepares to fight Kim and Ron. With his powers amplified, Gill seems to have the advantage, but Kim and Ron trick him into firing a multiple rapid fire attack that brings down his lair. Kim and Ron escape in Kim's car, just as the lair explodes. Kim and Ron begin to wonder what happened to Gill. Just then, storm clouds begin to form. A stream of water rises out of the ocean with Gill on top of it. Gill raises his arms and at his command, ocean water rises and wraps around him like a cocoon and begins to take a weird shape. In moments, Kim and Ron face a giant aqua creature, Gill in the center of it. Wade calls, saying the best way to stop Gill was too destroy his power amplifier. With Ron at the wheel and Kim at on the roof of the car, the two go into battle. Dodging Gill's water attacks, Kim tries to get a shot at his amplifier, only to knock off the car by an aquatic blast. Gill spins his hands and creates a giant water sprout that traps Kim. With Kim on the verge of drowning, Ron has to act fast. Gill raises his hands again and creates a giant tidal wave. Just before the wave hits, Ron spots a piece of metal from the lair explosion. Grabbing it and taking careful aim, Ron chucks the the piece at Gill's amplifier, damaging it. With his powers rapidly diminishing, Gill's tidal wave collapses and Kim is freed. Ron drives the car underneath Kim, safely catching her. Electricity begins to spark from Gill's amplifier, giving him the shock of a lifetime. Kim and Ron safely drive away as Gill's giant sea creature body is electrified and explodes. Later, Wade does a search, but there is no sign of Gill. Though it looks like Gill is gone forever, Kim and Ron believe he is still out there. After their conversation with Wade, Kim gives Ron an affectionate kiss for saving her life- and the world. Elsewhere, green muck washes up on a beach. The slime stirs and begins to slither away like a snake, angry yellow eyes on the front of it.
Last Edit: Sept 29, 2007 11:35:21 GMT -5 by eddybob15
Here's an idea I've been working on for awhile. If you guys are into ADJL/KP crossovers, you'll like this. Though all the living members of the huntsclan were eradicated, the bodies of the huntsmen that have been long since dead remain intacted. A supernatural event occurs and the huntsmen from the past live again. They plan to restore the huntsclan to it's former glory, but first they must revive their first leader- the founder of the huntsclan. Elsewhere, Kim and Ron are attending college in New York City. Things are going well for them, including their love life. While walking through the city on a date, they see what seems to be a giant winged-lizard fighting a group of ninjas. Little do they realize, they are witnessing a battle between Jake and the reminants of the of the huntsclan. Jake is in possession of a jar that the huntsmen want. During the fight, pieces of the roof begin to fall to the ground, directly over Kim and Ron! The two teens dodge the falling bricks. Becoming curious, Kim and Ron climb to the roof and see Jake do battle with the huntsclan. A stray shot from a huntsman staff comes at them. Jake grabs the two teens and pulls them to safety. Kim and Ron don't know what to make of this. Seeing that this mysterious creature saved their lives, Kim and Ron decide to help. Jake tells not to get involved, saying it's too dangerous. Jake doesn't believe it when he sees Kim knock down half a dozen huntsmen with one kick. Meanwhile, Ron shows off his mystical monkey powers, throwing Jake and the huntsclan for a loop. Realizing Jake cares about the safety of these humans, form a plan. The huntsmen surround Kim on all sides. As the huntsmen figure, Jake runs to Kim's aid and they blast him on all sides, knocking him out. The huntsmen claim the jar from Jake and leave. Kim and Ron watch as the dragon changes into a boy. Knowing that Kim and Ron have seen too much, Jake reluctantly takes them back to his grandpa's shop. Jake's grandpa is upset for two reasons: 1) Jake lost the jar to the huntsclan and 2) He let two humans discover his secret. Jake tries to explain that neither incident was his fault, saying Kim and Ron got involved in the battle. Trixie, Spud, and Fu Dog recognize Kim and Ron are honored to meet them. After a long discussion, Kim and Ron are informed on the magical world's existence. They take this discover well, considering they've had a few encounters with supernatural forces themselves. Kim even mentions that Ron is a monkey master. Hearing this, Grandpa realizes that Ron has a direct connection to the magical world, meaning that he was entitled to knowledge of it's existence. Jake and the others explain the situation with the huntsclan and the purpose of the jar they took from Jake. The jar contains the spirit of the first huntsman, the founder of the clan. The huntsclan plans to perform a ritual to revive their first leader, but first they need a host for his spirit. Feeling responsible for this mess, Kim and Ron offer to help, Jake convinces his grandpa to accept. Knowing the huntsclan will be seeking a strong human to house their leader's spirit, the group splits into four teams: Kim and Jake will watch the north section of the city, Grandpa, Fu Dog, and Rufus will patrol the west section, Trixie and Spud will guard the south section, and Ron and Rose will stakeout the east. All goes well until Ron and Rose are ambushed. Though they hound their own in battle, the huntsclan over power Ron and capture him. Rose contacts the others saying the huntsclan has Ron. Fu Dog figures the huntsclan became fascinated by Ron's monkey powers when he fought them. If the huntsfounder takes over Ron's body, the magical world is history. According to Fu's research, the huntsclan can only perform the ritual at the stroke of midnight, giving them one hour to save Ron. Kim expresses her concern for Ron. Jake reassures her by saying it's his job to help those connected to the magical world. Working together, Wade and Spud find the huntsclan's hideout. The team arrives just as the huntsmen begin the ritual. Just as the jar containing the huntsfounder's spirit is opened, Kim, Jake and the others spring into action. They defeat all the huntsmen and free Ron, just as he goes through a bizarre transformation. They were too late. The first huntsman's spirit now lives inside Ron. The huntsman decides to try out his new body against Jake. With Ron's monkey powers and Jake's desire not to hurt Ron, the huntsman has the advantage. Fu says there's still a chance to free Ron, but they must hurry because the spell will become permanent in five minutes. While Fu, Trixie, and Spud work on the spell to remove the huntsman's spirit, Jake keeps him busy. Jake is soon overpowered and knocked out. Just before the huntsman slays Jake, Rose jumps between them. Realizing that Rose is a traitor to the clan, the huntsman fights her. The huntsman is appalled that a member of the clan has fallen for a dragon. He believes that emotions like love are weak and pathetic. Rose is soon beaten and thrown aside, but jumps in front of Jake when the huntsman's staff when he points it at Jake. The huntsman decides to destroy Jake and Rose in one shot. Just before he fires, Kim knocks the staff out of his hand. The huntsman knows that Kim cares for his host and refuses to harm him, but Kim will do what it takes to get Ron back. The huntsman is impressed with Kim's skills and offers her a chance to be with Ron again- by joining the huntsclan. Kim refuses, so the huntsman decides to tap into more of Ron's monkey power. During the fight, Jake regains consciousness and asks Fu how the spell is coming. Fu says that it's almost ready. Kim's skills are no match for full strength of Ron's monkey powers and she is soon beaten. At first, the huntsman intended to eliminate Jake and Rose first, but since Kim insisted on getting in the way, he'll destroy her first. As the huntsman charges his weapon up to full power, Spud throws the last spell ingredient into Fu's cauldron. There's a flash of light and a puff of smoke. Just before the huntsman discharges his weapon, he begins to struggle. Ron begins to regain control and fights back, refusing to let the huntsman hurt Kim. With his control over Ron's body weakening at a great rate, Ron is able to expel the huntsman's spirit from him. Kim embraces Ron, relieved that he's safe. However, the huntsman's spirit is still around and plans to find a new, more powerful host. Just before it can escape, Jake recontains the spirit in the jar that held him. Grandpa will take the jar to the dragon council where it'll be safe. Jake thanks Fu for saving the day with his spell. Unfortunately, Fu can't take the credit. It seems that the last ingredient that Spud threw in was the wrong one, which completely ruined the spell. Jake is puzzled: If the spell didn't work, how did Ron manage to throw off the huntsman's spirit? Grandpa knows the answer to that is simple: It was Ron's good heart and love for Kim that allowed him to regain control and expel the spirit from his body. With the crisis over, Kim and Ron return to college, promising not to say a word about their latest adventure.
Last Edit: Sept 30, 2007 0:37:52 GMT -5 by eddybob15
I'm glad everyone thinks I've got potential to write fan fics. Unfortunately, I am currently unable to do so. You will be informed when I finally write a fan fic, but in the meantime, I'm going to continue writing season five episode ideas on this post.
As Steve said in a chat, it would be most likly NYCm or something.. That;s why I'm sayin if Amdrag got a third season Kim should like soo guest star!!! ;D BTW I am currently begining to write the fanfic...
Their love will outlast everything.. Jake is HOT!!!