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Post by captainkodak1 on Jun 12, 2008 7:57:50 GMT -5
Ahhhh mannnn! Ran you beat me to it! Great parody! I had planned something on the Raven before but you did a great job.
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Ran Hakubi
Pink Sloth
2008 Poetry Contest Participant!
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Post by Ran Hakubi on Jun 12, 2008 9:48:20 GMT -5
Sorry Captain, but thank you for the kind words!
Might I suggest, instead, Annabell Lee?
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kaiokken
Pink Sloth
2008 Poetry Contest Participant
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Post by kaiokken on Jun 12, 2008 10:38:40 GMT -5
Ok kaiokken here again with my last entry. Kinda long "The lass and her lad" This is the story of a young teenaged lass with auburn hair With a young blonde lad who always stood near
Facing what looked as a blue devil… his hair tied in strands Balling fists at the two young ones with his little female like hands
And with him was a female… one of the most beautiful I’d ever seen I may have thought of asking her out had she not been green
The lass yelled out to the heavens in a warrior like cry “We’ll stop you no matter what you try!”
The blue devil laughed… the green woman bore an evil smile To my shock her fists lit with green flame after a while
She crouched into a position her green suit forming her body As she yelled “You’ll need more than words to try and beat me!”
The boy stood proudly; pointing to the man he termed “Dude” “You are going DOWN!” was his cry to which the blue devil thought rude
The four stood staring at each other; a battle was about to show The lass pecked a kiss on the lad before she yelled “GO!”
The women lunged at each other with fists and feet in flight It was graceful if not for the fact it was a serious fight
They both would land a punch or a kick now and again But never relented did they… not even to show pain
The blonde lad cowered… he began to run away At least it was what I thought before I saw the devil’s giant ray
He blasted all around, trying to take the lad out “You cannot defeat the likes of me!” was his shout
The lad began to tire, the green lass saw this first And lunged at the boy in a fit of a speedy burst
She grabbed his arms and flung the shocked lad about Towards the giant ray yelling “Dr. D… take him out!”
The auburn lass stopped in her stance as the boy screamed painfully She could almost feel his soul she he shouted “KP!”
The young lass stood shocked as the ray hit the lad square And she fell to her knees in tears holding her head there.
The lass cried loudly; she felt as if it were the end For she lost not only her partner, but her lover and best friend.
Without missing a step the green lass walked her way Boasting to her opponent “Told ya you can’t beat us today”
But before she could laugh she was knocked to the floor Then swung into the cold hard steel of a nearby door.
The young lass’s eyes were filled with tears But with a fire that awoke her one conscious opponent’s fears
But before she could move she found herself in the same way Facing down a beam of light from the blue devil’s evil ray
The devil laughed at his opponent while in the seat he sat And yelled “So long Kim Possible! You really aern’t all that!”
The lass closed her eyes and prepared for her final breath She thought at least she would be with her lover in death
The explosion was loud but she felt nothing by far Then to her shock she heard a familiar sound… BOOYAH!
She opened her eyes to see a sight she forgot so true Her blonde love and partner shrouded in a light of blue
He lunged at the ray… the blue devil ran for his life The boy sliced the ray up with his hands as if it were a knife
The ray exploded in a great plume of smoke Which cause everyone there to begin to choke
But when all the smoke cleared, neither the blue devil or the green lass was found They knew they were defeated so they turned tail and cleared ground. Now the blue, blonde lad looked to turn to the direction the evil couple ran away But a soft hand held his and her voice said “We’ll get them another day”
His glow faded and he returned to his original hue And the lass held his face saying “I thought I had lost you”
He dried the tears on her face and kissed her with all his heart and soul And told her “I’d never leave your side whether part or whole”
And the lass and her beau walked off hands clasped in each other They would be there to fight another day… together.
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Post by Guru Mandi (will return) on Jun 12, 2008 13:50:35 GMT -5
So you can only have one entry?
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Post by rd on Jun 12, 2008 16:39:53 GMT -5
Nope, enter as many as you like.
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Post by Joe Stoppinghem on Jun 12, 2008 17:49:49 GMT -5
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Post by Mike Industries on Jun 14, 2008 13:53:03 GMT -5
Long time no see rs.net. Anyway, I was encouraged by a few to enter, so here is my entry. Picture This Picture this,
A bride walking to her groom,
Her father gently squeezing her hand,
As if she was reaching her doom,
She has love in heart,
And that all her father needed,
Because earlier that year,
He had conceded.
Picture this,
The same bride getting closer to her love,
Her red hair flowing behind her,
Almost as if it was being carried by doves,
Her eyelids are moist and heavy,
The emotions inside of her kept leaking out,
And she kept telling herself,
She was ready.
Picture this,
The groom stood with a small smile on his face,
His palms were sweaty with fear,
Although he was ready to run this race,
He checked his pockets on last time,
For his diamond mounted on a small band,
Which patted lightly saying to himself,
It was time.
Picture this,
Both bride and groom holding hands,
Exiting the emotional battleground,
Now wearing both of their bands,
They were off to their family‘s celebration,
The groom was hoping for the best,
Because the bride was worried,
"How will he handle the rest?"
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Post by Mike Industries on Jun 14, 2008 14:03:19 GMT -5
Can I request my original post be deleted? I screwed up in posting the poem. I forgot one word. Thanks in advanced... Picture This Picture this,
A bride walking to her groom,
Her father gently squeezing her hand,
As if she was reaching her doom,
She has love in her heart,
And that all her father needed,
Because earlier that year,
He had conceded.
Picture this,
The same bride getting closer to her love,
Her red hair flowing behind her,
Almost as if it was being carried by doves,
Her eyelids are moist and heavy,
The emotions inside of her kept leaking out,
And she kept telling herself,
She was ready.
Picture this,
The groom stood with a small smile on his face,
His palms were sweaty with fear,
Although he was ready to run this race,
He checked his pockets on last time,
For his diamond mounted on a small band,
Which patted lightly saying to himself,
It was time.
Picture this,
Both bride and groom holding hands,
Exiting the emotional battleground,
Now wearing both of their bands,
They were off to their family‘s celebration,
The groom was hoping for the best,
Because the bride was worried,
"How will he handle the rest?"
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Post by rd on Jun 15, 2008 1:31:13 GMT -5
No need to delete the original post, Mike. It looks good, too. MORE beautiful heartfelt work here! THANKS for entering! MORE coming up, Gang! Stay tuned for this exciting contest! ;D RD
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Post by rd on Jun 17, 2008 3:43:37 GMT -5
WOW, I am being completely blown away by the entries here, Gang! I sure hope you guys are enjoying this little contest. ;D ;D ;D The entries so far are all so beautiful and heartfelt. I'm lovin' each and every one. . Well, after a little hiatus for my brother Vincents' 63rd birthday and Fathers' Day, here are a couple more entries... Grab another tissue, Hee hee. I'm almost through 1/2 of a box! _________________________________________________ Here's an entry I took the liberty to highjack from a writer over at FF.NET, STAR EVA 01! Enjoy! She walks inside my mind
A poem by Star-Eva01
KPKPKP
She walks inside my mind day after day, night after night,
I know she is there like I know the sparrow can take flight.
I feel her walk among my thoughts and dreams I hold dear,
She moves with a grace that in my heart and soul creates a tear.
As she walks along she picks my dreams like flowers along the way,
A bouquet of my feelings for her there in my mind I can not hold at bay.
Here is one of my love for her that she places in her hair,
There is another that she intertwines in her fingers that are so fair.
Her bare feet trod inside my mind where she has complete control,
She owns a part of me and she keeps it hidden somewhere in her soul.
Her foot prints leave no trace to the world no marks or grooves,
But for me they are there like paintings hanging from the Louvre.
She stops on her travels through my mind to look at one of my dreams,
And I again find myself lost in her beauty that has no seams.
A dream of a time spent with no other but her is what she has found,
Time in her arms and her in mine that I dream would have no bounds.
She picks another one there that springs into her hands,
For her my dream come at her call and like me are her biggest fans.
This dream she hold closest to her heart and in her eye I see a tear,
She as again found the dream that I keep hidden and I hold dear.
A dream I wish with all my heart to make the best day of my life,
The day that she would answer a question with “I do” and become my wife.
She comes to me and takes me into her arms and whispers into my ear,
“I love you so much, you know that so why do you fear?”
In my mind she kisses me and everything falls away leaving just us two,
And my fondest dream comes true and the skies beam bright blue.
“I love you with all my heart and soul” she whispers to me once again,
“And I married you, oh so long ago” she says and smiles without end.
“My love, in your mind I will always walk and gather my flowers” she says,
“for here there are no barriers between us. Nothing to hold us at bay.”
Then she takes my hand and places it over her beating heart,
Then she tells me “I loved you right from the start.”
Then with those last words she pulls me close and I close my eyes,
And we kiss as she holds me and our bond again forms and to us it binds.
And then I open my eyes and I find her laying there with me in our bed,
And on my shoulder she rests her auburn haired head.
I recall that time long ago that we both answered the question with a word,
And how both our hearts took flight and soared like a bird.
I brush some hair from her face and feel my love for her grow again,
And I know that I love her through time without end.
She is my soul, why I live, the mother of our children and my life,
She is the other half of my soul, my world, for she is my wife.
I hold to her and once again close my eyes and say a word of prayer,
Giving thanks that in my life she as always been there.
She walks inside my mind day after day, night after night,
I know she is there like I know the sparrow can take flight.Author’s notes: Hello everyone. Here's my entry for the Poem contest that KT talked about. I hope you like it. And as for who is doing it, and who it's for... Well, that's up to you now... And just to make sure that everything is cool with legal stuff out there: Kim Possible, and its characters, are copyright by Disney Inc. I’m just playing here for the fun of it. THANK YOU for writing this wonderful piece, Star! You are now in the running!RD
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Post by rd on Jun 17, 2008 4:10:52 GMT -5
Here we have prose in the form of the classic Limerick from none other than our own Joe Stoppinghem!
Go Joe!!!
There once was a mole rat named Rufus Who's owner liked to act a like a dufus He said with a grin, as he wiped off his chin I love Nacos especially twofers.
LOL, I could see Rufus saying that in Nancys' squeaky little Rufus voice too, Joe!
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Post by rd on Jun 17, 2008 4:32:42 GMT -5
And now we have the entry sent in by a die-hard NEMO fan, namely: Mangafangirl!!! ;D ;D ;D She Has Your Eyes
I really don’t like To think about it, You know, the way he died. It may have been painless And I’m thankful for that, But he’s still gone.
Now I sit and hold his child Who will never know him Or see him coming home.
But at least she has his eyes.
Maybe she’ll see the world Just the way he did So colorful past childhood…
And whenever I pick her up Or kneel down to hug her So tight My heart bursts from sorrow To joy And I hope that She’ll be just as happy As he was.
My partner My heart, So truly Unstoppable.MORE tissues, please... Wonderful work, Mangafangirl! Thanks!
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Post by rd on Jun 17, 2008 4:39:19 GMT -5
Now we hear from another Denizen of the world of FF.NET I give you... Beaglebub! "Kim Possible"
I met a girl quite ordinary, One who was kind and true.
When you needed a friend, She was right there beside you.
Then I saw something more... A bold heart came into view.
Her wit and skill saved the day! Moving like a storm, in she flew!
She's quick and strong no doubt; There is nothing she cannot do!
Making right of wrong with ease, This hero helps good shine through.
It was so easy to love her, Our friendship grew and grew.
If you just say the word, Kim will be your friend too.Beaglebub, we need to hear more from you, LOL! I was kind of amazed to see you've been a member of RS since August 200 6, but you only have a post count of just over 100 RD
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Post by rd on Jun 17, 2008 5:14:33 GMT -5
Here's the latest info on what's going on, guys...
I decided to cap the entries and stop taking new ones after midnight, 7/4/08.
That's the 4th of July for you Yanks out there. ;D
Grab those crayons! ;D ;D ;D
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Post by rd on Jun 17, 2008 5:23:40 GMT -5
Well, we now have another entry culled from JAKT's FF.NET KP forum poetry thread! I now give you for your enjoyment song lyrics by CAPTAIN IT... (Yes, it can pose as a poem, too. ) Why does your loving got to be so mean?
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You know I met this chick a week or so ago
Everybody called her dangerous, she said,"Call me Shego"
So I took her out 2 or 3 times, man I was in for a surprise
What that woman did to me I cant believe my eyes
Now she came down to the club, where I was playing that night
And what she did in that club, Oh man ! It was out of sight
Why does your loving got to be so mean?
You got the baddess kind of loving that I ever did see
Dressed in black and green, a green magic queen
But why does your loving got to be so mean?
Now she done her thing on the stage, she done her thing on the floor
She done her thing with my bass, then she exit the door
She took a good look at me, and I knew it was going to start
She must have been a 1000 degrees, cause she was melting my heart
I said," Hot mama,what's you trying to do?"
I said, " Hot mama, I'm just trying to please you."
I can see it in her eyes, I can feel it on her skin
She said," It's half pass midnight and i'm going to do it again."
Why does your loving got to be so mean?
You got the baddess kind of loving that I ever did see
Dressed in black and green, a green magic queen
But why does your loving got to be so mean?
That is bad to the bone and you can't go wrong
She is the G-String on my bass, she is the girl in this song
I'm going to rock her world, I'm going to love her all night
She's going to blow up my amps and knock down everything in sight
Well time you did waste, time to make haste
Hitting me square in the eye like a cop and his mace
A lost of a clue, it's not even around
This is something you cant find in a lost and found
Why does your loving got to be so mean?
You got the baddess kind of loving that I ever did see
Dressed in black and green, a green magic queen
But why does your loving got to be so mean?
Don't you go off and cry, don't you sing me the blues
Just get a grip on reality and try on something new
Now I have seen the world and what it did to itself
It happen on the 11th, but we came together on the 12th
We're in the 21st century and the world has gone to hell
If not by the hands of man, mother nature can tell
But I'm glad to be with you, your the best I've ever seen
But why does you loving got to be so mean?
Why does your loving got to be so mean?
You got the baddess kind of loving that I ever did see
Dressed in black and green, a green magic queen
But why does your loving got to be so mean?THANKS, Captain IT! ***SALUTE!*** RD
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jakt
Yellow Trout
He's the real MAN!
Posts: 50
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Post by jakt on Jun 17, 2008 5:48:10 GMT -5
Two Hearts, Two Souls by kt
The moon is out and lights the night, and in the Sloth, two lovers take flight, two lips meet as is their way to satisfy and end the won day.
This loving kiss, while he holds her face, gladdens both hearts, as they embrace but, soon her comm beeps, and they rush away. Another call, to save the day.
The daylight breaks and lights today. The Princess and Master are on their way. They are one, as the story goes, saving the world from villainous foes.
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jakt
Yellow Trout
He's the real MAN!
Posts: 50
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Post by jakt on Jun 17, 2008 5:56:07 GMT -5
KP by JAKT
KP, sometimes I find it hard to say, Just how you make me feel this way, You’re the only one I’ve never told, The love for you which I hold.
You make me laugh, you make me smile, For you I’d walk a million miles, You are so beautiful and amazing, Your emerald eyes simply blazing.
Sometimes I try to describe my feelings for you, And all in my heart I say is true. Never words could truly explain, My feelings for you that always remain.
KP, my mind, my soul, my heart, my head, Now speak harsh words of fearful dread. “Will there ever be,” to them I reply, “At least a hope for season five?”
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Post by captainkodak1 on Jun 17, 2008 11:31:10 GMT -5
Since Ran took off with the idea of the Raven and Naked Mole Rat, I present Kimberly Ann, in the style of Annabelle Lee. The Raven and Annabelle Lee are works by Edgar Allen Poe. One of my fav authors. Kimberly Ann
It was in the bright sun, In a town called Middleton That a girl lived there who everyone knew, By the name of Kimberly Ann; And this girl lived with but one dream Than to love and be loved by me.
I was a child and she was a child, In this town called Middleton; But we loved with a love that was more than love- Me and Kimberly Ann; With a love that the angels of heaven wished for her and me.
And this was how that, not long ago, In this called Middleton, An ill wind blew into our lives, chilling My beautiful Kimberly Ann; So that the angels came weeping And bore her away, To the heaven she deserved over this town called Middleton.
The villains we fought and the families we loved, envied her and me- What was the reason (that all asked, In this town called Middleton) Why the wind came out of the cloud by night, Chilling and killing my Kimberly Ann.
But our love it was stronger by far than the love Of those who laughed at us- Of the many that cheered us- And neither the villains we fought, Nor the friends who supported us, Can ever separate my soul from the soul Of the beautiful Kimberly Ann.
For the suns never shines without bringing me dreams Of the beautiful Kimberly Ann; The moon may never rise but I feel the bright green eyes Of the beautiful Kimberly Ann; And so, all the night, I lie down by the side Of my darling, my love, my life and my bride, For her spirit lies with me, each night one by one In this town called Middleton.
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Ran Hakubi
Pink Sloth
2008 Poetry Contest Participant!
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Post by Ran Hakubi on Jun 17, 2008 12:01:12 GMT -5
*whistles* Wow, that was a nice one, Captain. An A+ to you!
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Post by Donne on Jun 17, 2008 14:40:52 GMT -5
I just signed up for this site, but here's a sonnet I wrote for Fanfiction dot net: (Disclaimer: Disney owns Kim Possible© and all things related in any way to the show.)
Her opponent gloats as she’s fallen, weak Her final battle, her only defeat She has dueled with each crazy superfreak But this blue maniac she can’t beat
His inner demon’s unleashed; he’s possessed The epic struggle inside he has lost When he’s at his worst, he is at his best He’ll take over the world, but at what cost?
She falls with wounded body, heart, and pride For where once was a best friend’s smiling face An enemy’s glare and sneer now reside Indeed, a villain’s has taken its place
Behind foul eyes’ glint, does good still fight Or is it only a trick of the light?
Visit me there under the same username as this one- "Donteatacowman".
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