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Post by Donne on Jan 5, 2009 15:03:41 GMT -5
explode. He only
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Post by nakedmoledogg on Jan 5, 2009 19:52:40 GMT -5
had 30 seconds
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Post by Donne on Jan 5, 2009 20:00:50 GMT -5
! [ending the sentence]
As he sprinted
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Post by KillerBebe Obeys Zita on Jan 6, 2009 14:30:17 GMT -5
with Shego for
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Post by Donne on Jan 6, 2009 18:23:27 GMT -5
the exit, a
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Post by nakedmoledogg on Jan 6, 2009 22:49:01 GMT -5
loud shriek of
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Post by Donne on Jan 6, 2009 22:51:37 GMT -5
pain split the
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Post by KillerBebe Obeys Zita on Jan 7, 2009 13:21:24 GMT -5
air, it was
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Post by Donne on Jan 7, 2009 17:13:23 GMT -5
the buffoonish sidekick,
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Post by KillerBebe Obeys Zita on Jan 9, 2009 14:37:12 GMT -5
Ron Stoppable who
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Post by Donne on Jan 9, 2009 17:31:35 GMT -5
was apparently dead.
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Post by nakedmoledogg on Jan 10, 2009 0:03:57 GMT -5
..at least, Drakken
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C'mon, don't kill Ron yet! We're only a little ways in. Where's the fun in that? Still, if you want him dead, I'll be OK with it. By the way, you are welcome to post little messages like this to give ideas/suggestions for future posts. Just try not to write out your entire prospected storyline here. After all, the idea is to write it without consideration of where it is going; only where it has come from.
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Post by Donne on Jan 10, 2009 12:11:25 GMT -5
thought he seemed
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I was feeling sadistic. ;D I didn't think you guys would let me actually kill him off anyway. I'm fine either way.
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Post by KillerBebe Obeys Zita on Jan 12, 2009 3:03:40 GMT -5
less lively than
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Post by Donne on Jan 12, 2009 19:28:14 GMT -5
a comatose chipmunk. --- XD XD XD I am feeling mean!
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Post by garnetblack on Jan 15, 2009 20:39:39 GMT -5
Drakken took Ron's
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Post by Donne on Jan 15, 2009 20:47:01 GMT -5
wallet and scampered
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Sorry. I guess I should get serious soon? ^^;
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Post by nakedmoledogg on Jan 17, 2009 1:05:22 GMT -5
--- You don't have to be serious. This was never expected to play out like a serious novel. After all, you never know what might happen, and people do not normally have the same idea for a plot (glittery heart horror, what?). Still, we want the story presentable to the audience on fanfiction.net, so it at least has to keep reader entertained long enough for them to realize we ninja'd their precious minutes.
This is how we've done so far. Evaluate it as you wish.
As Drakken screamed, he reached for Shego's hand, which was hovering waveringly by the Big Red Button. He had just finished his last scheme, but it had failed in a horrible glittery-heart horror when Kim Possible appeared and kicked the button. His heart thumped wildly, because he knew that his lair was about to explode. He only had 30 seconds! As he sprinted with Shego for the exit, a loud shriek of pain split the air; it was the buffoonish sidekick, Ron Stoppable, who was apparently dead...at least, Drakken thought he seemed less lively than a comatose chipmunk. Drakken took Ron's wallet and scampered away, counting the pennies left from...
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Post by Donne on Jan 17, 2009 11:13:50 GMT -5
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;D I am so proud of us so far. Great idea.
"...ninja'd their precious minutes"... *writes that down in list of awesome phrases to use*
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Post by KillerBebe Obeys Zita on Jan 28, 2009 14:09:45 GMT -5
away counting the
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