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Post by ninjanaco on Nov 3, 2009 19:22:16 GMT -5
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Post by ninjanaco on Nov 7, 2009 12:36:48 GMT -5
Nobody wants to comment on my art?  |
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Post by Zephyr on Nov 7, 2009 20:45:57 GMT -5
It's better than I've done
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Post by erdrik on Nov 15, 2009 14:04:07 GMT -5
As I posted in your other thread.
Looks too much like Zita.
Different hair style and different clothes do not a new person make.
Look at various other characters in the show, and try changing chin profile and nose shape to be different than Zita's.
Depending on who all has been in her family line, she could have diffent hair/eye color as well.
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Post by ninjanaco on Nov 15, 2009 17:57:09 GMT -5
As I posted in your other thread. Looks too much like Zita. Different hair style and different clothes do not a new person make. Well, the chin profile is different than Zita's (something of a bell curve ending in a sharp point, as opposed to Zita's sharp incline ending in a rounded chin) and her breasts, while pointy like Zita's, are smaller than her big sister's. Also, the eyes and mouth are based on the faces of other KP girls, not Zita. I dunno, she looks different than Zita to me... |
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Post by erdrik on Nov 15, 2009 23:22:49 GMT -5
Upon reading your reply in the "Zita's Mother" thread I noticed the differences in both pics.
But that is essentialy the problem.
They are a tad too subtle and required being told what the differences were in order for me to notice.
Don't get me wrong, they are your pics and you are free to draw them how ever you wish.
Just remember your drawing cartoons in a style ment for animation.
Which means detail is purposefully left to a minimum to allow for smooth and affordable animation.
It may help to make differences in still pics more noticable while drawing in that style.
Sometimes simply adding freckles, bags under the eyes, or wrinkling the edges of the lips helps.
EDIT: actualy a thought:
A group pic with all three together may help with contrast and bring out those differences more.
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Post by ninjanaco on Nov 23, 2009 18:40:15 GMT -5
Updated the pic a bit. Not sure if I've made her different enough from Zita, but still...  |
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Post by skycan1 on Nov 28, 2009 17:08:53 GMT -5
Cute!
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Post by erdrik on Nov 30, 2009 15:48:52 GMT -5
The hair color change definetly helps.
I would love to see a pic with them all standing together. ;D
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Post by KillerBebe Obeys Zita on Dec 13, 2009 2:13:15 GMT -5
It is a nice piece of art, I saved it to my computer.
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