Post by Dr. Feelgood on Feb 4, 2011 17:20:35 GMT -5
I like it! The whole time I was reading I pictured it as a Tim Burton-esque stop motion short. Good mix of camp and horror for my tastes. Only detractions were a few spelling errors, a few adjacently repeated adjectives, and the ending could maybe have been a little more ambiguous about whether "Daniel" really were the one who ate those people.
- Name changes, but title & personal text are permanent. Formerly Dr. von Braun, Dr. Bakaizen etc. etc.