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Post by nabusan on Nov 13, 2006 1:23:49 GMT -5
Mine are medium. I'm oddly turned on ^^
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Post by johnnys on Nov 13, 2006 2:09:36 GMT -5
nice work, Levelord! btw, did u book a Wacom Intuos about two months ago? If yes, is it really good? I saw one being booked by "Chun" in MacAsia store at One Utama. I assume it was you.
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Post by nabusan on Nov 13, 2006 2:13:27 GMT -5
lol, wow - do you work there?
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Post by johnnys on Nov 13, 2006 2:39:56 GMT -5
Nope, One Utama is a shopping mall. I was there shopping (obviously!), but was also browsing around / window shopping at some of the entertainment and computer equipment outlets. It was then that I saw one Wacom Intuos booked by "Chun" in the MacAsia store.
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Post by cloudmonet on Nov 13, 2006 12:21:54 GMT -5
Move Kim's right eye (on our left) a little bit closer to her nose, and enlarge the left eye so it's a liitle bit closer to the same size as the right one and it should look perfect.
Kim's tricky that way. Never mind that they don't always make her look the same. A slight mispositioning of something, the wrong curve in her hair (from several possible styles), and suddenly she looks off.
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Nov 13, 2006 15:49:09 GMT -5
Well.. you're the only one who critiqued him...
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Post by Levelord on Nov 14, 2006 8:04:37 GMT -5
Well.. you're the only one who critiqued him... Yeah, but Cloud's got the right idea. I need to iron out whatever errors I have out of my system
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Nov 14, 2006 8:47:12 GMT -5
But you're awesome!
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Post by Levelord on Nov 14, 2006 9:45:40 GMT -5
Correction: Kp is awesome! ;D
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Nov 14, 2006 9:46:51 GMT -5
HELL YEAH!
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Post by Levelord on Nov 14, 2006 12:30:14 GMT -5
I was trying to get another half assed sketch colored in for fun. It looks really wierd. Also, I put Ron our to the far right side, so it's actually mustard he sprayed on Kim's stomach. I'm thinking of dropping the technique of changing line thickness. It worked wonderfully with the Shego bikini pic, but I really forgot how to master it for this one. So maybe future pics will be back to the single thickness lines. Like in the pic, os "it's raining something'.
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Post by nabusan on Nov 14, 2006 12:40:10 GMT -5
No no, keep that line thickness thing! I really like it! Gah, I have to learn how to do that! What's that technique called so I can find a tutorial on DA?!? It rawks my pink sox!
PS. Awesome picture! Simple shapes, yet very in tune with the show.
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Post by Baroque on Nov 14, 2006 12:59:58 GMT -5
It looks really good...I like your style.
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Nov 14, 2006 13:06:36 GMT -5
That's kinda hot.
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Post by enigmawing on Nov 14, 2006 13:54:27 GMT -5
Perhaps... I guess it's because I'm terrified of losing it because I went on hiatus for months. I always thought talent degrades with time when you don't use it :-/ Try not drawing for years, like I did quite a while back. :-[ I also went through a severe case of artist's block myself not too long ago. . . I think I must have gone three months without posting anything new because I was already having serious doubts when I let someone's negative comment get the better of me. I was also very nervous about a big collaboration I had agreed on and was so afraid of letting my partner down. I finally just bit the bullet and dove back in. Don't worry, it comes back to you, kinda like riding a bike. And besides, you've still got it. The only thing I'd really suggest on the first pic is to not make her eyes so circle-shaped. . . they seem to look more natural as a flattened oval. Despite this very small criticism, it's top-notch as always. :) I'm not seeing any problems at all with the varying of the line thickness and I know how hard that is to master. . . I think you do an awesome job with it! I'd say keep going unless you don't feel the outcome is worth the extra time you have to put in to it. Great to see you drawing again!!! ;D
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Post by cloudmonet on Nov 14, 2006 16:12:45 GMT -5
Of course he is, but he didn't think the first picture looked quite right, and I tried to figure out why. I don't see anything wrong with the thicks and thins on the bikini pic. Looks good to me.
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Nov 14, 2006 18:13:39 GMT -5
The bikini stuff is good
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Post by assumedrisk on Nov 14, 2006 20:43:24 GMT -5
That bikini es muy pequeno!
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Post by Carbon on Nov 15, 2006 0:13:35 GMT -5
The varied line thicknesses look good to me, personaly I'd make her shoulders the same line thickness, or make the one closer to us thicker than the one further if at all different. I guess if you're looking for critique, I would do something different with her lip, its way too thick where it meets her lower lip. It doesn't have to taper off to nothing but it looks a little odd the same thickness all the way across. Also something about her body shape and her right shoulder bothers me just a bit as if it's sticking out too far.
The chin line runing up past where the bottom part of her ear comes out looks a little funny to me. To my eye it makes her ear look pinned back. I could see it look like that if she was just turning her head to look the other way, but it's like her ear is facing right and her face is pointing left. It's not all the time but a lot of the time her wisp of hair in front of the ear and that chin line almost point at each other.
Also in my opinion you could look at making her hair on her left side less poofy. I think it generally tends to lay a bit differently and match the shape of her head a little bit more than how you have it there.
also her hand shape looks great but you might make the fingers skinnier or more feminine. all of this is just my suggestions of course.
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Post by Levelord on Nov 15, 2006 1:17:59 GMT -5
The varied line thicknesses look good to me, personaly I'd make her shoulders the same line thickness, or make the one closer to us thicker than the one further if at all different. I guess if you're looking for critique, I would do something different with her lip, its way too thick where it meets her lower lip. It doesn't have to taper off to nothing but it looks a little odd the same thickness all the way across. Also something about her body shape and her right shoulder bothers me just a bit as if it's sticking out too far. The chin line runing up past where the bottom part of her ear comes out looks a little funny to me. To my eye it makes her ear look pinned back. I could see it look like that if she was just turning her head to look the other way, but it's like her ear is facing right and her face is pointing left. It's not all the time but a lot of the time her wisp of hair in front of the ear and that chin line almost point at each other. Also in my opinion you could look at making her hair on her left side less poofy. I think it generally tends to lay a bit differently and match the shape of her head a little bit more than how you have it there. also her hand shape looks great but you might make the fingers skinnier or more feminine. all of this is just my suggestions of course. Hmm... yes the ear does seem like it's facing another direction. The hands do indeed look quite big... I should have resized it... if I can find out how It does make sense to have thicker lines in areas of the body which are closer to the viewer. I have to disagree with the hair though. Doesn't really look that puffy compared to the show's. Yay! I feel much better now. After a bit more practise, I should be making better pics for everyone to enjoy! Thanks for the critique!
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