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Post by Captain Serge Stiles on Jun 8, 2007 1:16:25 GMT -5
Um, LOL. I didn't draw them to please you, just myself. As is is as is, the way I wanted them to be. If I wanted critique, I'd ask for it. Even though your critique isn't at all productive, or even critique, it's just... useless statements that all I can do is say... "...Sorry?"
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Post by Lixa-^_^ on Jun 8, 2007 2:06:32 GMT -5
First off, thank you Nabu for putting both images in one post. Saves me the trouble of having to do that. www.deviantart.com/deviation/57001490/OK, honestly, are the smilies really necessary in the speech bubbles here? We have their faces, so we can read the tone there. It's a minor detraction for me though. ... www.deviantart.com/deviation/57033493/I find this pic disturbing, and not in the "eww, two boys together" sort of way I usually do. Either it's that it's really obvious that Jake is 4 years Ron's junior or how Jake's arm is positioned so that Ron could lick it. Possibly both. ZOMG You CRITICISE teh Serge? You is teh intruder, you must be reeemooved! Serge's art is teh BRILL!
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Post by Rocket on Jun 8, 2007 7:17:02 GMT -5
Now don't kill rognik for critizising Serges pictures. A artist should be able to take some critique. I kinda agree with the smiles-part in the first pic, but aside from that those 2 are great!
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Post by Captain Serge Stiles on Jun 8, 2007 7:19:21 GMT -5
LOL, there's nothing wrong with critique, Rognik's critique wasn't really critique. He just said he didn't like it, so there's nothing for me to register about that except, "Oh, that's too bad."
The smilies were a personal preference, if you knew me you'd understand. And yeah, JAke is four years younger, and it looks obvious, that's not something to fix, that's just a fact he doesn't like. And I don't know what to say about the way Jake's letting him lick the lollipop, but that's jut the way he's doing it, LOL. Too bad you thought it should be a different way?
Btw, there's a difference between constructive criticism, and just plain criticism.
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Post by kpandamdragforever on Jun 8, 2007 7:30:25 GMT -5
I'm interested in strange things like homo's,etc.It's interesting.Anyways,these picks are like they were shot with a camera.Hey,Serge.Have or could you do one of Rose by herself?I would love to see at least one other competent Rose pic for once. ^^ Please?Just one. *shows lower lip and turns puppy-eyed*
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Post by Captain Serge Stiles on Jun 8, 2007 7:41:52 GMT -5
I would, but I don't really like Rose, LOL. But maybe, I'll keep it in mind... If I ever feel like drawing solo female fanart... Which is, so far, very rare, LOL.
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Post by nabusan on Jun 8, 2007 9:22:10 GMT -5
Lol, the lollipop pic is disturbing?! I'd have thought this would get more attention ^^:
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Post by Rocket on Jun 8, 2007 9:25:27 GMT -5
Why? Ron's just lying on top of.. Oh wait, scratch that.
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Post by Lixa-^_^ on Jun 8, 2007 12:12:59 GMT -5
Awww, but that's cute!
And if none of you can tell, when I go all "How dare you criticise teh Serge!?" I don't mean to offend ... :C
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Post by Rose Hunts on Jun 9, 2007 14:19:57 GMT -5
If you want to see Rose, go to my Deviant art page I draw her all the time. I don't have anything fancey, keep that in mind. *random* I wanna lick Jake's lollipop. *blushes* OMg, that sounds wrong.
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Post by Rognik on Jun 10, 2007 16:03:55 GMT -5
LOL, there's nothing wrong with critique, Rognik's critique wasn't really critique. He just said he didn't like it, so there's nothing for me to register about that except, "Oh, that's too bad." The smilies were a personal preference, if you knew me you'd understand. And yeah, JAke is four years younger, and it looks obvious, that's not something to fix, that's just a fact he doesn't like. And I don't know what to say about the way Jake's letting him lick the lollipop, but that's jut the way he's doing it, LOL. Too bad you thought it should be a different way? Btw, there's a difference between constructive criticism, and just plain criticism. Well, I'm just commenting. I don't care if you don't take my criticisms to heart, I'm just saying what I think. And I'm sorry if you feel I'm offending. I thought part of this thread was for us to comment on your pictures as well as to see your latest works. All the artwork is good, but I thought that in the last picture the arm did look awkward. The bit about the age difference being obvious: I didn't say it was a flaw. The fact that the two boys being so far apart in age is my problem, not yours. So, in future, I'll try and modify my own comments so that they aren't quite so... blunt? It's a problem I have when it comes to social interaction, but internet and in person. I need to work on it, and I know that, so... here's some salt. Take one grain before reading my posts.
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Post by Captain Serge Stiles on Jun 10, 2007 17:20:32 GMT -5
LOL, there's no offense. I was just saying, you don't give much room for a reaction, so no wonder you've felt "ignored" before.
And I did try to think about it, but I didn't see anything out of anything you said. You thought the arm looked awkward, but it's a very easily possible way to have your arm, I usually try out a pose before I do it. There's a reason it goes under Ron's arm, because it's not bending back very far. If Ron's arm was not over his, it would look awkward because that would mean his arm was bending too far back for comfort. It's if you really look, not just first glance things you try and pick out just to feel like you're being productive and pointing things out.
And anyway, I post them here because people want to see them when they're complete. I originally wasn't going to even post these, but Nabu wanted me to, so I do... Because Nabu is law. LOL. You post them to show them when you're done which means there's no more changes going to them, and how they are is how they are and you should just look (if you want to) and take it in how I was meant for you to look at them.
Not everything has to register in your mind through a filter, where you have to try and find everything wrong and say something about it. I don't need to have someone to type anything "to show they were here and looked". Look, leave, it's all good.
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Post by nabusan on Jun 10, 2007 17:33:15 GMT -5
w00t, I'm law The pose looked natural to me. I can picture a couple doing it in real life.
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Post by Captain Serge Stiles on Jun 10, 2007 17:38:16 GMT -5
Haha, yes. You are gonna end up ruling the world somehow, I know it.
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Post by Rose Hunts on Jun 11, 2007 2:55:15 GMT -5
Haha, yes. You are gonna end up ruling the world somehow, I know it. All hail Ron's boyfriend the great Nabu!! As long as I get Jake, I'm fine with that. ;D
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Post by Captain Serge Stiles on Jun 11, 2007 4:08:28 GMT -5
Not my best, not my worst... LOL.
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Post by r9 on Jun 11, 2007 5:19:12 GMT -5
I think these pictures are great, and I am now thinking that the Jake Long and Ron Stoppable crossover is a great idea for a new Disney Channel movie, just as long as we make some minor changes, nothing that big. Also, aren't Kim and Rose both going to be jealous with this stuff that's going on? It would probably be a success just like the Jimmy Neutron and Timmy Turner crossover movies on Nickelodeon. Does anyone else think this is a good idea?
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Post by nabusan on Jun 11, 2007 5:57:07 GMT -5
OMG, we can see Ron's pecs! *dies from happiness*
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Post by Rose Hunts on Jun 12, 2007 0:25:37 GMT -5
OMG, your saying it looks BAD???!! I wish I had more talent like you.. Oh and here's a tiny gift..
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Post by Captain Serge Stiles on Jun 12, 2007 15:21:57 GMT -5
Oh shi- Rose's gonna kill me!
And I always knew Kim was the cooler one of the two, thinking the pictures were hot. ;D Nice!
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