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Post by Levelord on Apr 9, 2007 8:46:25 GMT -5
Here's a draft I made after watching the promo. I like Kp's undercover look so much that it motivated me off my fat lazy ass to draw... Still a bit of stuff to adjust. Like Kp's legs and Camille's left hand and such... Any more criticism is welcome before I color it in!
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Post by Sarah on Apr 9, 2007 8:57:47 GMT -5
Maybe Kim's shoulders/arm?
Overall it looks really cute and I like the idea. Just since you asked for le criticism.
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Post by ninjanaco on Apr 9, 2007 9:24:25 GMT -5
Oh no! What happened to Kim's right arm?! No real criticisms other than that, really.
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Apr 9, 2007 9:35:19 GMT -5
I really like it, Levelord.
Of course, I love everything you've drawn
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Post by Slyrr on Apr 9, 2007 10:15:35 GMT -5
Enter the cocoa-moo contest before it's too late - unless you've already entered....
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Post by Levelord on Apr 9, 2007 10:23:58 GMT -5
I thought the coca moo contest was about their graduation?
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Post by Luqkim... on Apr 9, 2007 10:33:39 GMT -5
Kim looks a like she has alot more meat than Camille. Camille is skinnier than Kim, but Kim just looks a little bit meatier than Camille .. I think ...
But all in all, it's an awesome concept and real cute artwork.
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Post by Levelord on Apr 9, 2007 10:55:41 GMT -5
Kim looks a like she has alot more meat than Camille. Camille is skinnier than Kim, but Kim just looks a little bit meatier than Camille .. I think ... But all in all, it's an awesome concept and real cute artwork. Actually, the meat was the concept that Camille was some skinny Paris Hilton like... thing...
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Post by aliciamartin on Apr 9, 2007 11:22:04 GMT -5
wow thats really good can't wait to see it colored
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Post by CDB on Apr 9, 2007 11:32:33 GMT -5
Excellent artwork, Levelord. And that's a great concept. I have just one little tinsy critque. It's about Kim's forearm. It could be tweaked just a little.
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Post by nabusan on Apr 9, 2007 12:54:01 GMT -5
Levelord, that's just perfection. You can't top it imo. And yeah, you'd better be entering the contest right now, otherwise I'll come over to Malaysia and kick you in the pooky. ^^
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Post by Levelord on Apr 9, 2007 12:55:35 GMT -5
Excellent artwork, Levelord. And that's a great concept. I have just one little tinsy critque. It's about Kim's forearm. It could be tweaked just a little. Can you be more specific? does it need to be longer? or thinner? I'm not sure what needs to be done with it Maybe Kim's shoulders/arm? They do look a little far out, i'll just have to erase it and place it closer to her body...
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Post by CDB on Apr 9, 2007 13:08:21 GMT -5
Can you be more specific? does it need to be longer? or thinner? I'm not sure what needs to be done with it .. Sorry about that, I'm working several different things. About the arm it could be tweaked to be just tad bit thinner. The length is perfect by the way.
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Post by unferthidol on Apr 9, 2007 13:52:29 GMT -5
I really love Camille's expression there. It's probably my fsvorite part of the picture, though the hair looks interesting on Kim.
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Post by Ot@ru on Apr 10, 2007 4:37:20 GMT -5
To me KP is better looking Camille than Camille herself...
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Post by VICIOUS on Apr 10, 2007 7:45:49 GMT -5
Yeah, Kp manages to pull off Camille's outfit alot better xD But i'd have to say, atleast show Kp's further hand resting on her hip or something, *shrug*
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Post by nabusan on Apr 10, 2007 8:18:55 GMT -5
To me KP is better looking Camille than Camille herself... My thoughts exactly!
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Post by Caramy on Apr 10, 2007 14:31:52 GMT -5
Wow i love it! You're very talented and draw the characters well.. Disney should soo hire you^^ I can't wait to see it coloured, wow i wish i was as good as you ;D
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Post by Levelord on Apr 10, 2007 18:24:06 GMT -5
Preview preview preview! Now I'm gonna go sleep.... dead tired.... Btw that pic makes a good avatar don't you think?
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Post by nabusan on Apr 10, 2007 19:50:05 GMT -5
Oooh, post a larger version so we can appreciate its awesomosity! Very nice lineart and coloring!
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