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Post by Slyrr on May 12, 2009 17:05:49 GMT -5
Don't worry - now that I've finally got all the 'hanging out in each other's towns' stuff dealt with, it's all main plot from here... (unless I get distracted)
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Post by DanMat6288 on May 20, 2009 21:12:30 GMT -5
Team Probable, transform and roll out.
Oh, and I'd say that since it's legit money (even if it's legit money he'd use for illegit purposes otherwise), I think it should go to helping the Unknowns with their financial trouble. [nod]
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Post by Slyrr on Jun 5, 2009 18:48:11 GMT -5
Chapter 22 is posted! As promised, it's back to the main story full bore! Monkey Fist and Maze are stealing more parts to help Drakken make a bigger version of the Ultra-Atmospheric Jammer, and of course, Kim and Grimm are right there to say hello! Don't miss this one as Kim fights Shegolem, Grimm fights Maze, and both Kim and Grimm team up against Monkey Fist, fighting side by side for a change! Fanfiction: read and post a review! www.fanfiction.net/s/3785522/23/Illustrated version: home.comcast.net/~gregfisk/friendindark22.htmGrimm comes closer to contact with Rhonda... The whole evil gang use Maze's shadows to enter the Go City R&D complex! With a small army of golems, who will be able to stop them...? It's Kim vs..... Shegolem? Kim and Grimm finally manage to work together as a team, and Monkey Fist finds it more than he can handle..... Will this mean the end for the bad guys' scheme? Check out this summer-time brawl, and get ready, because the action heats up even MORE for the next chapter!
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Post by pengychan on Jun 10, 2009 15:32:24 GMT -5
Wow, judging from the art, this chapter must be a real blast! I can barely wait for this weekend to finally sit back and read it all. Stupid exams, getting in the way of the fun. I really cannot tell which one I like best among the ones you posted here. The picture with Grimm getting closer to a contact with Rhonda is really heart-warming. I love her expression - poor girl, it must be hard not being able to speak to him. How long have she and Ron been banished? It seems like forever. Poor guys, it wasn't exactly a walk in the park for them either The one with Monty, Maze, Drakken and the golems is simply too cool for words, and Drakken's worried face is simply priceless and a great contrast to the rest XD Also, I love the shadows surrounding them. Great effect! The one with Kim and Shego (no, wait, Shegolem...just how awesome is that, I ask ;D) is great as well. You did a simply amazing job on the glow of Shego's plasma and Kim's shield. And then, of course, the one with Kim and Grimm vs Monkey Fist! It's great to finally see those two actually fighting together, I especially love the poses and Monty's expression - looks like they're giving him some trouble after all. Serves him right XD
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Post by Slyrr on Jun 10, 2009 15:42:31 GMT -5
I know all about exams - school is actually out in this part of the country, so I can only sympathize I hope you enjoy the chapter when you get the time for a read. The folks who have reviewed so far over at ffnet have enjoyed it. I thought about drawing sunglasses on everyone in the invasion of the R&D lab pic, but Maze would never go for it....
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Post by Slyrr on Jul 17, 2009 18:45:33 GMT -5
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Post by Slyrr on Jul 17, 2009 18:56:17 GMT -5
It's been a long summer (still not over!) but ch. 23 of "A Friend in Darkness" is finally posted! Fanfiction read/review: www.fanfiction.net/s/3785522/24/Illustrated web page: home.comcast.net/~gregfisk/friendindark23.htmIn this chapter, Monkey Fist and Maze unleash the Ubergolem against Kim's home town! How can she stop something that's indestructible? Read to find out, and review at fanfiction.net to post your thoughts.... Ever wonder how Dementor got out of jail after "Larry's Birthday" to attend the UN ceremony in the Graduation episode? The answer is revealed at last! 1 good techie + 1 evil techie + several hours of fatigue = 1 perfect WTH moment.... Why exactly is Kim wearing Grimm's battle suit? Who cares, she looks great in it! With the Ubergolem seemingly invulnerable, Kim and Grimm are up against the wall... With every avenue exhausted, Grimm Probable appeals to the Great Bear Spirit for help. And with his priestess imprisoned in the spirit world, the Great Bear comes through - big time! There's more - including the Great Bear revealing that in order to save Ron, Kim must seek the wisdom of the Mystical Monkey. Read at ffnet and review to post your thoughts on the story!
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Post by DanMat6288 on Jul 19, 2009 15:21:36 GMT -5
OoO Didn't see that coming. 'Difference between you and me is - I make this look good.' You stole that from MiB. XP Still, gotta agree with her. 8-D That Ubergolem vs. Great Bear scene was epic incarnate! Can't wait to see what happens with the Mystical Monkey. Why don't you take a moment to reflect on how great your stroy writing and art drawing is?
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Post by Slyrr on Jul 19, 2009 21:04:49 GMT -5
I didn't 'steal' it from MiB, I ripped it off. There's a difference Plus it gave Grimm the chance to reverse it later on when he was wearing Kim's suit. 'Difference between you and me is, I make this look evil.' The Mystical Monkey chapters are already shaping up to be both funny and touching. Hopefully to be seen before long...
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Post by pengychan on Jul 26, 2009 10:40:36 GMT -5
The chapter was great, and the art definitely keeps up with it. Really, the illustrations for this chapter are awesome. I think my top favorite ones are the ones with the Great Bear (it looks really impressive, you know), the Wade/Jade kiss (especially her expression and Grimm's, I think XD) and the one with Kim and Grimm fighting side by side...I would have never told they could look so well in each other's clothes, so to speak XD I also really like the picture with Kim wearing Grimm's suit, the one with Grimm destroying the symbols on the Uber Golem's hand...meh, I give up: I like them all. You always choose the best moments to illustrate XD
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Post by Slyrr on Jul 26, 2009 14:19:54 GMT -5
It always helps to be able to visualize the stuff you're writing about. There were others that I didn't illustrated, mostly because I was tired
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Post by DanMat6288 on Sept 16, 2009 18:33:52 GMT -5
lol Dare I ask how Grimm knows about Lilo and Stitch? XD Boy, the Yamanouchi school spirit sure knows how to monkey around. =D ... Yeah, I know, but someone had to say it.
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Post by buckmana on Sept 19, 2009 19:41:31 GMT -5
I would think Grimm would make it to be a point to be well informed about his adversaries.
He probably has a file somewhere detailing every mission Kim has ever been on.
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Post by Slyrr on Sept 20, 2009 19:32:53 GMT -5
That he does - information is power Sorry I haven't updated this page much lately, but as activity on the rsnet pages seems to be tapering, I've neglected things here a bit in favor of fanfiction.net and deviantart, where most of the pictures can be found.... The next chapter is coming soon, as Kim's spiritual journey with the Mystical Monkey continues!
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Post by buckmana on Sept 25, 2009 16:57:18 GMT -5
This thread is pretty much the only reason I'm stopping by now.
I'm eagerly anticipating the next episode.
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Post by Slyrr on Sept 26, 2009 16:08:38 GMT -5
Wait no longer - it's up!
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Post by DanMat6288 on Oct 1, 2009 15:44:44 GMT -5
If you want suggestions... I honestly expected to see something about the Home Ec class... um, maybe something about Ron and Monique bonding over the wrestling thing... or Ron and Felix bonding in general?
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Post by Slyrr on Oct 9, 2009 20:46:55 GMT -5
I'll see what I can do -
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Post by erdrik on Oct 12, 2009 16:53:56 GMT -5
Im not going to make any specific suggestions, but I would like to suggest staying away from revealing info that Kim doesn't know.
For example the revelation that Ron spent the night of the dance in the broom closet. It seems wrong to me that Kim is finding out about that kinda stuff "behind his back". That kind of info is something Ron really should be asserting himself and telling Kim about himself. Whats more interesting, tho something to be save for later with Ron, is why he hasn't told her.
I'd say keep it to things she knows about, but has forgotten over the years. Things that were never resolved, dispite knowing they upset or wronged Ron. Most notably due to being attached to "the food chain" or general embarassment. These things, in my eyes, may even be more guilt ridden and self revealing in nature.
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Post by Slyrr on Oct 12, 2009 18:22:20 GMT -5
There's some truth in that. But I wrote the closet scene over a year ago, and I couldn't leave it out because it was just so dang good. That scene has been touched on by a number of fanfic authors over the years, and I felt I wasn't remiss in putting my own take on it...
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