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Post by Slyrr on Oct 18, 2008 16:38:35 GMT -5
Chapter 15 was just posted! Illustrated: home.comcast.net/~gregfisk/friendindark15.htmFanfiction page: www.fanfiction.net/s/3785522/16/In this chapter, patience is needed all around. It's only been a couple of days, but to Kim it seems a lot longer. With Ron still missing and Grimm still worming his way into various aspects of her life, Kim will need LOTS of patience.... Didn't forget about ME did you....? Kim's not the only one who needs patience. Grimm is still trying to appeal to the Great Bear Spirit for help. To him, it feels like nothing is happening. But Rhonda finally gets a peek beyond the veil....
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Post by Donne on Oct 18, 2008 17:32:48 GMT -5
Reviewed. Three pictures? Are you losing your edge? Only joking. Great job, as per usual!
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Post by DanMat6288 on Oct 18, 2008 23:21:46 GMT -5
Wow... the end certainly is in sight. At least the contact being made between Earth and the Shadow world isn't quite as one-sided anymore... that might help later. And is Grimm going soft? XD
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Post by Lord FunkyHoof on Oct 19, 2008 1:17:06 GMT -5
I have never gotten around to reading your fics (I'm horrible at making time for reading D: ) But your work is really tempting to make me do so.
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Post by Slyrr on Oct 19, 2008 10:49:05 GMT -5
I would not only you, but everyone! Grimm going soft? Well, only the next chapter will say!
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Post by buckmana on Oct 24, 2008 17:42:33 GMT -5
Nice! Keep up the good work Slyrr.
I like that you gave Gil a last name. And I loved the line about television priviledges as he's being taken away.
Also, that bit you added about Barkin secretly looking out for Kim and Ron was nice too.
We finally get to see what the UAJ looks like. Thanks for the pic.
I wonder, do you have any ideas for another story after this saga is completed?
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Post by Slyrr on Oct 25, 2008 12:10:36 GMT -5
Gill actually had a last name in the series, I just stole it. (it's in the episode transcripts) The TV thing was also stolen from return to wannaweep This is actually the mini-UAJ, built with the stolen parts and hooked to an immersion pod. They're building the bigger one, but that'll take them a while.... I got some ideas - namely how to link the whole thing to the graduation episode.... stay tuned!
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Post by DanMat6288 on Oct 26, 2008 19:56:50 GMT -5
Oh, we will. We will. ;D
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Post by Slyrr on Nov 23, 2008 3:29:33 GMT -5
Ch. 16 is up as a slightly early Thanksgiving treat! You may be taken up with preparing a meal or travelling, so I put it up a little before the holiday. That way you can either a) read it before all the holiday madness sets in (including 'black friday'), or b) wait a couple days till Thanksgiving and read it over the break - your choice! fanfiction.net link: www.fanfiction.net/s/3785522/17/illustrated link: home.comcast.net/~gregfisk/friendindark16.htmDrakken laments that total obedience isn't as fun as he imagined.... Another showdown is looming, so Kim has her battle suit ready! But she almost forgot, Grimm has his own battle suit... Grimm Probable finally confronts Maze! But will it help him bring Rhonda back....? Wade finally meets Jade in real life! Kim vs Monkey Fist - again! Can a statue get tired...? Post thoughts and reviews at fanfiction.net, and happy holiday! Slyrr
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Post by slicknickshady on Nov 23, 2008 11:44:44 GMT -5
I love your artwork slyrr. Your writing is a little too angsty for my liking so I need to wait till the end to see how it plays out before I decide to read it but your art is spectacular.
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Post by Slyrr on Nov 23, 2008 12:47:45 GMT -5
Too angstey? Well it's certainly got more pathos than the show had, though I felt StD was pretty close. Glad you like the art though. If you wait till the story's over, you might be waiting a while longer...
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Post by slicknickshady on Nov 23, 2008 13:29:53 GMT -5
Too angstey? Well it's certainly got more pathos than the show had, though I felt StD was pretty close. Glad you like the art though. If you wait till the story's over, you might be waiting a while longer... You saw my opinion on STD at the fanfiction forum so i think you understand. One of the reason i love Kim Possible so much is because it's not very angsty. I can take angst filled episodes or fanfics now and then but I have to be in the right mood. lol. I'll look forward to it whenever it is though.
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Post by Donne on Nov 23, 2008 15:19:03 GMT -5
Los dibujos soy muy bueno. If you haven't been learning español lately, that is a compliment. Very good job. I like the Drakken pic best. You draw him well. Edit: Oh, yes, I forgot to mention my negative point in my review: taking ideas from The Incredibles? For shame! ;D
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Post by Slyrr on Nov 23, 2008 21:26:59 GMT -5
Hey, a good idea is a good idea But if writers can't borrow good ideas, the entire world of fanfiction is at risk... And I know enough spanish to know 'The (something) is very good' is the translation. I don't know what 'dubijos' means, but I get the jist of it - thanks!
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Post by Donne on Nov 23, 2008 21:52:22 GMT -5
"Drawings", if I got my Spanish right.
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Post by slicknickshady on Nov 23, 2008 23:36:27 GMT -5
Hey, a good idea is a good idea But if writers can't borrow good ideas, the entire world of fanfiction is at risk. And that would be a bad thing for guys like you, mrdrp, commander argus, nutzike, yvj, cloudmonet, and i'm sure a lot of others...for some people though....I wish it was at risk. lol. I took spanish for two years in highschool........I know a few words but they are the easiest ones to learn and remember and i knew most of those before I took spanish class. Hey I took the class cause I was required to take a language... Nothing like watching Disney movies in Spanish. lol.
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Post by Nutzkie on Nov 24, 2008 1:51:13 GMT -5
Hmpf! I took two years of Spanish in high school, and all I learned were the dirty words.
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Post by slicknickshady on Nov 24, 2008 7:57:39 GMT -5
Hmpf! I took two years of Spanish in high school, and all I learned were the dirty words. ;D I know a few but we did not get taught the dirty words.
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Post by pengychan on Nov 24, 2008 13:28:12 GMT -5
Hmpf! I took two years of Spanish in high school, and all I learned were the dirty words. Eheh, looks like those are the first thing you learn while studying whatever language: they were among the first ones I learned in English. And I ONLY know dirty words in both French and Spanish ;D Anyway, Slyrr, your art is stunning, as usual I think my favorite ones are the one with Grimm confronting Maze (awesome expressions!) and Kim fighting Monkey Fist - but I do love the other ones as well. The one with Drakken and statue!Shego makes me feel oddly melancholic, while I keep grinning like an idiot while watching the one with Wade and Jade - it was about time that girl found out how fun it can be working on the field XD I can't wait to get some more spare time to finally read the chapter - judging from these pics, it must be amazing!
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Post by Slyrr on Nov 24, 2008 15:21:56 GMT -5
Hopefully you won't be disappointed! (I never really learned any dirty words in Spanish. Heck, I never use them in English if I can avoid it) Jade is a fun character to draw and write, and it always meant to bring her out in the field eventually. Look for some even more fun interactions between Wade and Jade in future chapters... After learning that Maze can't bring back Rhonda, Grimm is hit so hard by the news that he lets his guard down. Not a good idea with Monkey Fist lurking nearby....
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