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Post by DrMike on Mar 27, 2006 16:05:19 GMT -5
I've decided to go ahead and write the Mission to Hell I was thinking about. At least for the time being. Find Chapter 1 hereIf you find any issues such as spelling or what not, please PM me and not post them publicly. *shrug* Not my greatest work. I have plans for later on though. Thanks, -drmike edit: I forgot to mention that this is getting a Mature rating right off the bat due to subject material. |
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Mar 27, 2006 16:25:14 GMT -5
I was delighted to see Dr. Director in it! I like that Shego actually watches CSI. LOL.
Right at this line: Drakken stood up and turned towards Kim. “I’m sorry. Shego’s plasma flashed cooked him. The burns are too extensive…” I started tearing up...
I just have to remember with this being one of three types of fics that I tend not to like, that it's not canon. It's not part of the real show.
Great chapter! I can't wait to read the rest!
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Post by DrMike on Mar 27, 2006 16:27:38 GMT -5
I think it's going to be interesting. Your bit about Homer gave me an idea for later on.  |
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Mar 27, 2006 16:49:53 GMT -5
Homer as in the blind guy who wrote The Odyssey and The Iliad or that yellow guy from The Simpsons?
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Post by DrMike on Mar 27, 2006 16:51:12 GMT -5
Homer from the Simpsons but no, he's not going to be in it. I'm not that evil. |
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Mar 27, 2006 16:59:33 GMT -5
Aw, man... I hate Homer.
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Post by Kothoga on Mar 28, 2006 9:08:41 GMT -5
Can't wait for the next chapter If you want more response on your fanfic publish it on www.fanfiction.netjust don't forget the disclaimer |
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Post by DrMike on Mar 28, 2006 9:22:11 GMT -5
No way am I publishing to ff.net. Removed all of mystuff years ago from there. Thank you though for the suggestion.
Plus I'm listed high up in Google for Kim Possible fanfiction searches. Kind of strange actually. Already has about 150 reads in about 12 hours.
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Mar 28, 2006 16:54:34 GMT -5
I would totally read the chapter again.
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Post by Pim Peccable on Mar 28, 2006 22:12:38 GMT -5
Great choice of final words.
I was tearing... :-(
...Excuse me. <sniff>
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Mar 29, 2006 8:15:25 GMT -5
I look forward to chapter 2. Mainly cuz it's one of those stories that you HAVE to keep reading, you HAVE to know what happens. It's like Harry Potter. You're already in too deep. And plus, I've got a cameo appearance in it... ;D
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Post by DrMike on Mar 29, 2006 8:33:13 GMT -5
*sigh* Even though it screwed up the hr tags, it's up at ff.net as well as DA. Well, DA in about 2 seconds. *chuckle* My, that's a low user number for ff.net. Anyone else near me? ;D Edit: Up at DA |
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Mar 29, 2006 8:41:27 GMT -5
I wonder if I have time to read it right now... i'll be getting off in about twenty minutes. I'll do it!
Edit: Oh, wait. I thought you were talking about chapter 2... not chapter 1.
;D Me and my stupid brain this morning.
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Post by DrMike on Mar 29, 2006 8:42:53 GMT -5
I was hoping to write today but I'm having to deal with a legal issue with my former fandom. Bloody....
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Mar 29, 2006 8:43:49 GMT -5
Well, I hope you have at least some time to write today. I wish you luck! |
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Post by DrMike on Apr 4, 2006 14:49:52 GMT -5
Just a quick note to state that I'm currently working on Chapter 2. The person who i've been bouncing ideas off of shot down a pretty big one for this chapter while my research on jewish traditions and culture shots down a bunch more. Oh well. |
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Apr 4, 2006 15:54:15 GMT -5
I look forward to chapter 2. Mainly cuz yours truly makes a cameo.
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Post by Kothoga on Apr 4, 2006 16:08:40 GMT -5
I look forward to chapter 2. Mainly cuz yours truly makes a cameo. Also looking forward to it |
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Post by trollis on Apr 4, 2006 16:24:53 GMT -5
I'm also in that line MvH Anders "Trollis" Bernhardsson |
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Post by motored69 on Apr 5, 2006 7:48:02 GMT -5
I was hoping to write today but I'm having to deal with a legal issue with my former fandom. Bloody.... Hopefully not too bad, your story's first chapter is seriously HOT! Motor-Ed |
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