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Post by jmt2005791 on Oct 20, 2005 21:39:45 GMT -5
a couple of good chapters they just seem a little random with what going on in it. i'll be happy to continue reading as long as you keep kigo out of the story.
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Post by RavenStar on Oct 20, 2005 22:14:51 GMT -5
uh...jmt5887? Have you looked at my avatar?
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Post by jmt2005791 on Oct 20, 2005 22:19:31 GMT -5
that why i said i be happy to continue reading unless there was kigo in it i had a kim/ron avatar and sig but it was messing people computers up so i had to take it down trust me its not the story the story is good. its the idea of kigo. its like drakim i stopped reading drakkenfan's for the same reason it nothing against you it the idea
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Post by RavenStar on Oct 20, 2005 22:33:04 GMT -5
Well, it does say "Kigo fic" in the ff.net description...but if the relationship's enough to make you stop reading the story, then no offense, but that's kinda sad...
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Post by jmt2005791 on Oct 20, 2005 22:34:03 GMT -5
never saw that sorry if i upset you in anyway
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Post by Winterfrost on Oct 21, 2005 9:19:56 GMT -5
uh...jmt5887? Have you looked at my avatar? I knew you were going to say that! Edit: Ugh! The story is getting really, really dark by the moment. It's getting a bit too dark for my taste, I'm sorry to say. I still like it, though. |
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Post by RavenStar on Oct 22, 2005 6:08:19 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Oct 24, 2005 18:55:06 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Oct 25, 2005 19:20:26 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Oct 27, 2005 5:32:31 GMT -5
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Post by Winterfrost on Oct 27, 2005 9:28:49 GMT -5
Cool~!
I'm really creeped out by the dogs, but that's good (shows that you used them to a good effect). Kigo was something new to me, but I learned to accept it last week ;D. Anyway good to see Kim coming back and not losing her mind. Also, way to go, Tara!
All in all, I'm really enjoying the story.
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Post by RavenStar on Oct 29, 2005 16:29:26 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Oct 30, 2005 20:43:43 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Oct 31, 2005 20:29:16 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Nov 3, 2005 4:29:28 GMT -5
Alright, here we are. Chapter 19 is up: www.fanfiction.net/s/2599592/19/12 pages - 11 nothing but solid action. Nothing but solid action. I believe I have made Tara sufficiently badass enough... And Drakken gets his ass pwned hardtime. God, do I love writing final showdowns... |
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Post by Winterfrost on Nov 3, 2005 7:03:55 GMT -5
Some chapters won't load. Probably have to wait a while...
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Post by RavenStar on Nov 3, 2005 7:06:51 GMT -5
Just keep refreshing the page until it loads if any chapters give you issues. That usually works for me.
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Post by RavenStar on Nov 3, 2005 16:06:05 GMT -5
Chapter 20 - the FINAL Chapter - is now up: www.fanfiction.net/s/2599592/20/Thank you everyone who's enjoyed this story. I probably won't write another fic for a while, cuz I have an original thing I'm working on that I need to finish, badly. But again, thanks for reading! -RavenStar |
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Post by RavenStar on Nov 7, 2005 4:57:38 GMT -5
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Post by Winterfrost on Nov 7, 2005 23:43:48 GMT -5
.............................I don't get the ending.........wow my IQ must've dropped substantially since last year  ...............I'm still not used to Kigo.......feels weird. Oh well, to each his/her own. But anyway, that was a good story, too dark for my taste, but still very good! So much action.......... |
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