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Post by Alexlayer on Apr 15, 2008 23:47:57 GMT -5
Just sent the last review. Would you like to talk a bit about it? Maybe I can help.
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Post by GT on Apr 16, 2008 0:05:22 GMT -5
Read your advice. I've already set an antagonist in it, which Ron will have to face soon. I'm starting to develop a fear for writer's block, and I feel incompetent to write this story. Right now, I'm thinking on a P.O.V. from the villain's side. Is that a good idea?
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Post by Alexlayer on Apr 16, 2008 1:53:28 GMT -5
Read your advice. I've already set an antagonist in it, which Ron will have to face soon. I'm starting to develop a fear for writer's block, and I feel incompetent to write this story. Right now, I'm thinking on a P.O.V. from the villain's side. Is that a good idea? It does sound like a good idea. There are many ways to make an scene from one character's point of view. Making one from the main antagonist's would be good to know something about him, yet not all, or that would spoil most of the mystery. Personally, I think the right moment to reveal all the information about him, specially the one that might link him to Ron, should be revealed before, during or right after the final battle between Ron and this villain. I know what you mean with fear of writter block, and believe me, you'll get used to it. We all have it every now and then. And hey, if you like what you're writting, then you're definetly not imcompetent for writting it.
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Post by GT on Apr 16, 2008 17:00:02 GMT -5
Hmmm......I think the next chapter should give a little insight to the antagonist.
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Post by GT on May 23, 2008 22:11:24 GMT -5
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Post by Alexlayer on May 24, 2008 0:24:53 GMT -5
Well, that makes two of us.
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Post by GT on May 24, 2008 9:42:24 GMT -5
Well, that makes two of us. True that. ^^
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Post by GT on May 26, 2008 23:59:34 GMT -5
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Post by GT on Jul 4, 2008 11:22:34 GMT -5
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Post by GT on Aug 7, 2008 23:21:24 GMT -5
Hey, a little heads up to whomever might be reading this. Firstly, I apologize for the quality and the content of my story. I haven't had a solid outline to lean on, and therefore made it hard for me to remember certain details. But now, I'm creating about a ten page outline, so then I can use it as reference for my story. The outline for the first book is complete, and I'm planning to start another chapter. Wish me luck!
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Post by Alexlayer on Aug 8, 2008 0:33:07 GMT -5
Best of lucks.
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Post by GT on Oct 29, 2008 21:41:00 GMT -5
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