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Post by Sarah on Mar 6, 2008 6:50:05 GMT -5
owo Interesting and awesome concept!
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Post by drewgone on Mar 6, 2008 8:32:27 GMT -5
GROUP HUG!
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Mar 6, 2008 11:10:59 GMT -5
Hi, Alyssa.
Just wanna point out that I've noticed that all the words that were in italics in my drabbles aren't anymore after you copied them to the first page of this thread. Can this be fixed? It's not that big of a deal, but it does ruin some of the pacing/tone of the drabbles, or whatever I should call it.
Also, I don't know if you've suggested this already, but should we maybe consider posting these drabbles at FF Net when they're done?
If we do, maybe we could post them separately but link to each other's drabbles in our profiles?
We could also do it in other ways.
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Post by Robbie Valiant, P.I. on Mar 6, 2008 11:59:30 GMT -5
Ok, here it is. An inner monologue on a small moment from the Twin Factor, with a slight shippy tint to it.
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38. Touch
"Would you like to hear more scintillating stories of my formative years?"
He did one thing as he said this. A seemingly innocuous act. He pinched her cheek. They both felt an odd sense of contentment with it.
"Of course I'm happy," he rationalizes in his head, "she's finally being the supportive, loyal sidekick I always wanted."
Shego had settled herself to cope with the fact she was stuck obedient indefinitely. She watched this, an outsider in her own body. She immediately shoved that aside. It was wrong. She should be ENRAGED!
"Yes, Doctor Drakken," she said, her voice bubbly.
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Post by Alyssa on Mar 6, 2008 12:42:52 GMT -5
*hugs* Now go forth and write a drabble! Hi, Alyssa. Just wanna point out that I've noticed that all the words that were in italics in my drabbles aren't anymore after you copied them to the first page of this thread. Can this be fixed? It's not that big of a deal, but it does ruin some of the pacing/tone of the drabbles, or whatever I should call it. Also, I don't know if you've suggested this already, but should we maybe consider posting these drabbles at FF Net when they're done? If we do, maybe we could post them separately but link to each other's drabbles in our profiles? We could also do it in other ways. I believe you're referring to home for the most part?  Yeah, instead of going to quote the text and copying it from there I just copied and pasted on the page. I fixed that one, and I'm in the process of fixing the others as well. It hasn't been suggested, and while I love the idea of it being at fanfiction.net I'd also like for them to be all together instead of apart. :/ I can easily make a site with just the text with all of our drabbles put together and links to the fanfiction.net accounts of the authors... what do we think? yay or nay? |
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Post by Alyssa on Mar 6, 2008 12:46:43 GMT -5
Ok, here it is. An inner monologue on a small moment from the Twin Factor, with a slight shippy tint to it. --------------------------------- 38. Touch"Would you like to hear more scintillating stories of my formative years?" He did one thing as he said this. A seemingly innocuous act. He pinched her cheek. They both felt an odd sense of contentment with it. "Of course I'm happy," he rationalizes in his head, "she's finally being the supportive, loyal sidekick I always wanted." Shego had settled herself to cope with the fact she was stuck obedient indefinitely. She watched this, an outsider in her own body. She immediately shoved that aside. It was wrong. She should be ENRAGED! "Yes, Doctor Drakken," she said, her voice bubbly. One of the few times Drakken actually touches Shego on the show. (We discussed briefly on the Shippy Thread about Drakken dragging Shego along by pulling her wrist.) Hooray for inner dialogue! I must admit, "The Twin Factor" is one of my *least* favorite Kim Possible episodes because I couldn't stand the overly fake D/S interaction. (I was okay at the end with Shego chasing Drakken and trying to blast him. lol) But this, with everything running through their head was fun. And it was a good read, thanks for contributing. I hope you don't mind though, but when I post this to the first page I'm putting a space inbetween paragraphs. It just makes it a little easier to read with the text a bit further apart. |
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Mar 6, 2008 12:51:46 GMT -5
*hugs* Now go forth and write a drabble! Hi, Alyssa. Just wanna point out that I've noticed that all the words that were in italics in my drabbles aren't anymore after you copied them to the first page of this thread. Can this be fixed? It's not that big of a deal, but it does ruin some of the pacing/tone of the drabbles, or whatever I should call it. Also, I don't know if you've suggested this already, but should we maybe consider posting these drabbles at FF Net when they're done? If we do, maybe we could post them separately but link to each other's drabbles in our profiles? We could also do it in other ways. I believe you're referring to home for the most part? Yeah, instead of going to quote the text and copying it from there I just copied and pasted on the page. I fixed that one, and I'm in the process of fixing the others as well. It hasn't been suggested, and while I love the idea of it being at fanfiction.net I'd also like for them to be all together instead of apart. :/ I can easily make a site with just the text with all of our drabbles put together and links to the fanfiction.net accounts of the authors... what do we think? yay or nay? I think we could do that, but we could ALSO put it up at FF Net. I suggested this because FF will probably get us the most readers. What if we all just post all the drabbles and be sure to mark who's written what? It might be seem a bit much, but at least that way people can give reviews to us all. And everyone posting all the drabbles increases the chance of more people reading it. Of course, some people might get annoyed that we post the drabbles that many times. Hmmm.... Joined projects are always so complicated. Who posts what, who writes what etc etc-- so many questions. This is part of why I usually don't do collabs, even if this one was a little easier since we all wrote tiny separate stories instead of all working together on a big one. |
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Post by Alyssa on Mar 6, 2008 13:01:47 GMT -5
036.Smell. (From Odds Man In)
Working with Hank Perkins was not one of Shego's fondest memories. He dressed like a wannabe-business man, his voice was high and shrill and he didn't wear cologne... he *bathed* in it.
Walking past him was like walking into the waiting room at the Greek Spa where the older business men liked to mingle inbetween massages and steams.
So during this caper, Shego tried to keep herself closer to Drakken who smelt like the cupcake batter... Just to cover up Hank. She convinces herself.
037.Sound. (From So the Drama)
He makes little grunts, sounds that indicate his displeasure when he is upset.
Sometimes he hums when he's having a good day, a little tune Shego doesn't recognize but is familiar with because he chooses to hum it over and over again.
Recently he's been ranting, alot. Raving on and on about "My plan this" and "Kim Possible foiled that" and "I'll get her next time or my name isn't..."
etc, etc, etc.
Right now, he's yelling out to her. "Shego! We're going to be late!" He's a bit nervous about getting Big Daddy Brotherson to give him the information he needs for his "biggest plan yet".
On cue, Shego walks into the garage where the hover car lift is. He looks at her, his jaw dropping just slightly. Had anyone else tried to pull this look off they would have looked (for lack of a better word) skanky. Shego however looked...
"Good. Now we can go." On the drive to the Bermuda Triangle Shego decides to enjoy the silence.
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Post by Alyssa on Mar 6, 2008 13:05:08 GMT -5
*hugs* Now go forth and write a drabble! I believe you're referring to home for the most part? Yeah, instead of going to quote the text and copying it from there I just copied and pasted on the page. I fixed that one, and I'm in the process of fixing the others as well. It hasn't been suggested, and while I love the idea of it being at fanfiction.net I'd also like for them to be all together instead of apart. :/ I can easily make a site with just the text with all of our drabbles put together and links to the fanfiction.net accounts of the authors... what do we think? yay or nay? I think we could do that, but we could ALSO put it up at FF Net. I suggested this because FF will probably get us the most readers. What if we all just post all the drabbles and be sure to mark who's written what? It might be seem a bit much, but at least that way people can give reviews to us all. And everyone posting all the drabbles increases the chance of more people reading it. Of course, some people might get annoyed that we post the drabbles that many times. Hmmm.... Joined projects are always so complicated. Who posts what, who writes what etc etc-- so many questions. This is part of why I usually don't do collabs, even if this one was a little easier since we all wrote tiny separate stories instead of all working together on a big one. Honestly, if we're going to be *smart* about this and try to get as many readers as possible... I think it should be posted on your ff.net page. Or sitchits, but I'm looking this as a soul "sell, sell, sell" opportunity. People already reading "Maslow", "S!S!S!", "The Ones that Never Happense" and any of your other fics will check out what other stories YOU'VE published and find the drabbles there and read them. We could then credit the authors and link back to them in your profile as well as a link to the "official drabbles site" (if we decide to make one) |
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Mar 6, 2008 13:21:42 GMT -5
036.Smell. (From Odds Man In) Working with Hank Perkins was not one of Shego's fondest memories. He dressed like a wannabe-business man, his voice was high and shrill and he didn't wear cologne... he *bathed* in it. Walking past him was like walking into the waiting room at the Greek Spa where the older business men liked to mingle inbetween massages and steams. So during this caper, Shego tried to keep herself closer to Drakken who smelt like the cupcake batter... Just to cover up Hank. She convinces herself. 037.Sound. (From So the Drama) He makes little grunts, sounds that indicate his displeasure when he is upset. Sometimes he hums when he's having a good day, a little tune Shego doesn't recognize but is familiar with because he chooses to hum it over and over again. Recently he's been ranting, alot. Raving on and on about "My plan this" and "Kim Possible foiled that" and "I'll get her next time or my name isn't..." etc, etc, etc. Right now, he's yelling out to her. "Shego! We're going to be late!" He's a bit nervous about getting Big Daddy Brotherson to give him the information he needs for his "biggest plan yet". On cue, Shego walks into the garage where the hover car lift is. He looks at her, his jaw dropping just slightly. Had anyone else tried to pull this look off they would have looked (for lack of a better word) skanky. Shego however looked... "Good. Now we can go." On the drive to the Bermuda Triangle Shego decides to enjoy the silence. These are definitely my favorites out of your drabbles so far. So...atmospheric, for lack of a better word. Very nice. I had a feeling 'sound' and 'smell' would make good drabbles. I give them much, much love.  |
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Mar 6, 2008 13:25:24 GMT -5
I think we could do that, but we could ALSO put it up at FF Net. I suggested this because FF will probably get us the most readers. What if we all just post all the drabbles and be sure to mark who's written what? It might be seem a bit much, but at least that way people can give reviews to us all. And everyone posting all the drabbles increases the chance of more people reading it. Of course, some people might get annoyed that we post the drabbles that many times. Hmmm.... Joined projects are always so complicated. Who posts what, who writes what etc etc-- so many questions. This is part of why I usually don't do collabs, even if this one was a little easier since we all wrote tiny separate stories instead of all working together on a big one. Honestly, if we're going to be *smart* about this and try to get as many readers as possible... I think it should be posted on your ff.net page. Or sitchits, but I'm looking this as a soul "sell, sell, sell" opportunity. People already reading "Maslow", "S!S!S!", "The Ones that Never Happense" and any of your other fics will check out what other stories YOU'VE published and find the drabbles there and read them. We could then credit the authors and link back to them in your profile as well as a link to the "official drabbles site" (if we decide to make one) Well, gorsh. *blushes* I suppose that makes sense. I was gonna suggest your page since it's your project, but it does make sense.  Hmmm...then again, putting it up on your page could get you more attention at FF. There's also that to consider. EDIT: Besides, you've written the most amount of drabbles. |
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Post by Robbie Valiant, P.I. on Mar 6, 2008 13:39:48 GMT -5
Ok, here it is. An inner monologue on a small moment from the Twin Factor, with a slight shippy tint to it. --------------------------------- 38. Touch"Would you like to hear more scintillating stories of my formative years?" He did one thing as he said this. A seemingly innocuous act. He pinched her cheek. They both felt an odd sense of contentment with it. "Of course I'm happy," he rationalizes in his head, "she's finally being the supportive, loyal sidekick I always wanted." Shego had settled herself to cope with the fact she was stuck obedient indefinitely. She watched this, an outsider in her own body. She immediately shoved that aside. It was wrong. She should be ENRAGED! "Yes, Doctor Drakken," she said, her voice bubbly. One of the few times Drakken actually touches Shego on the show. (We discussed briefly on the Shippy Thread about Drakken dragging Shego along by pulling her wrist.) Hooray for inner dialogue! I must admit, "The Twin Factor" is one of my *least* favorite Kim Possible episodes because I couldn't stand the overly fake D/S interaction. (I was okay at the end with Shego chasing Drakken and trying to blast him. lol) But this, with everything running through their head was fun. And it was a good read, thanks for contributing. I hope you don't mind though, but when I post this to the first page I'm putting a space inbetween paragraphs. It just makes it a little easier to read with the text a bit further apart. Thank you, and yeah, it's fine. This was actually an outgrowth of a fic I wrote of Kim's inner dialogue, Inner Machinations of a Controlled Mind. I saw the screencap recently, and then I saw this, and Touch jumped at me as a unique opportunity to do something similar. |
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Post by Alyssa on Mar 6, 2008 13:52:09 GMT -5
These are definitely my favorites out of your drabbles so far. So...atmospheric, for lack of a better word. Very nice. I had a feeling 'sound' and 'smell' would make good drabbles. I give them much, much love. adultcardiac.stanford.edu/images/heart.jpgThank you dearie! I loved these ones too. And I'll give them your love. lol, are those heart shaped rubies? Well, gorsh. *blushes* I suppose that makes sense. I was gonna suggest your page since it's your project, but it does make sense. Hmmm...then again, putting it up on your page could get you more attention at FF. There's also that to consider. EDIT: Besides, you've written the most amount of drabbles. Bah! I'm a salesmen first and an author second! Honestly, I don't care who posts it one whose fanfiction page, as long as they're together. |
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Post by drewgone on Mar 6, 2008 14:13:56 GMT -5
Geez, why so complicated?
Create a new account and share the login info, link it on your profiles, plug it in your stories, etc.
Kinda like that group, GWA, I think...
Edit: Btw, I release Birth from the hold-up grip. I can't write for my life.
I'm just a by-stander.
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Mar 6, 2008 14:14:14 GMT -5
Honestly, I don't care who posts it one whose fanfiction page, as long as they're together. *shrugs* It's up to you. |
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Mar 6, 2008 14:14:49 GMT -5
Geez, why so complicated? Create a new account and share the login info, link it on your profiles, plug it in your stories, etc. Kinda like that group, GWA, I think... That's not a bad idea. Hmmm... |
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Post by Alyssa on Mar 6, 2008 14:32:38 GMT -5
Geez, why so complicated? Create a new account and share the login info, link it on your profiles, plug it in your stories, etc. Kinda like that group, GWA, I think... That's not a bad idea. Hmmm... ff.net banned shared accounts in 2002. I know. >.> A Friend and I had 4 stories deleted... |
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Post by drewgone on Mar 6, 2008 14:39:49 GMT -5
ff.net banned shared accounts in 2002. Tell that to these guys. ;D Just avoid being dodgy and you have no problems. |
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Post by Ninnik Nishukan on Mar 6, 2008 14:46:58 GMT -5
ff.net banned shared accounts in 2002. Tell that to these guys. ;D Just avoid being dodgy and you have no problems. Define 'dodgy'. |
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Post by Alyssa on Mar 6, 2008 14:51:33 GMT -5
ff.net banned shared accounts in 2002. Tell that to these guys. ;D Just avoid being dodgy and you have no problems. Alright, but I'm not setting it up. |
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Yeah, instead of going to quote the text and copying it from there I just copied and pasted on the page. I fixed that one, and I'm in the process of fixing the others as well.