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Post by KR FOREVER on May 30, 2005 10:47:54 GMT -5
now this is cool. we can write our own seens and start OUR own seson! any body got any Idias?
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Post by bluefox on May 30, 2005 10:50:38 GMT -5
wow that sounds fun! but im not vary creative!
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Post by Deleted on May 30, 2005 10:54:18 GMT -5
just go to FanFiction.netThere's all kinds of post-StD stories on there, and there are quite a few that are done really well.
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Post by Nightspade on May 30, 2005 11:20:05 GMT -5
I'm more of an 'Idea man' than a 'Come up with an Idea than make a script out of it guy.' So here's my idea. Ron's Mystical monkey power causes him to turn into a monkey and he gets power mad and wants Kim to rule the world along side of him as his Monkey Queen. Yes, I suck at Episode ideas, which is why I stick to Fanfics.
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Post by KR FOREVER on May 30, 2005 12:47:02 GMT -5
wow they are good! Thanks!!!
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Post by Aers (That Writer Chick) on May 30, 2005 14:42:51 GMT -5
there's plenty of excellent fanfics there - just be sure to leave feedback if you enjoy a story! encourage the writers and you'll never run out of new stories to read - no matter what you're looking for!
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Post by KR FOREVER on Jun 1, 2005 17:43:10 GMT -5
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Post by Michael on Jun 1, 2005 23:45:36 GMT -5
I actually started a thread like this a while back called "Best KP Episode Never Made" We got some really good ideas and even some well-thought out plot lines. Here's another storyline:
After Shego goes away on vacation and his credit cards are maxed out, Draken decides to team up with Frugal Lucre and come up with a more economical plan to take over the world.
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Jun 6, 2005 21:11:03 GMT -5
Hear is one. I do it for people who cant log on to that site, like me, and make ther own. so hear is mine:
I dont own any of the caricters!
Whare?
*In Kim’s House* Kim’s mom yells up the stairs. “Kids! Time for dinner!” Kim comes at the top of the stairs, and says, “Well mom I was going to...” The Tweebs run bye, fast, interrupting her. Tweebs!!! Kim yells. Mrs. Possible calms her down. “Hun, what were you saying?” Kim continues. “Well I was going out to eat, on a...date, with....” “Oh! Honey! Who are you going with?” her mom says with excitement. “Well... Ron. He is taking me on a surprise dinner.” Her dad comes around the corner. “Oh he is, is he?” he asks her. “Ya. Ill talk later. I have to get ready!”
*5 minuets later*
ding-dong the doorbell rings. “He’s here!” Kim yells as she runs to the top of the stairs. Her mom opens the door. “Why hello Ron. Don’t you look nice?” Ron is warring a black tux. “Oh uh…ya. Um wares Kim?” Kim answers him. “Right here.” Ron looks up the stairs and sees Kim. She is warring a beautiful gold dress with matching purse, bracelet, necklace, earrings, and shoes. The bottom of the dress cuts of by her knees. The straps of it tied around her neck. He opens his mouth slightly but closes it fast so no one sees. Kim glides down the stairs gracefully and Ron holds his arm up. Kim takes it in hers.
Mrs. Possible waves to Kim. “Bye honey!” Have Kim back by, lets say 10:00. Sharp! Kim’s dad said sternly as he eyed Ron. Ron answers hastily. “Uh…you got it Dr. P!” They walked out, but the Tweebs peek behind the door and make kissy noises at them. Ron looks at them and says, “Exactly.” As he says this he grabs Kim around the waist and kisses her. Kim was surprised at 1st then smiled and raped her arms around his neck, both ingoing the kiss. They broke off smiling.
Jim asks his twin brother, “hik-a-bik a-boo?” “Eww-sha!!! Gross!!!” He answers as they both say, “Cuddies!!!” Then they relies something and whisper “camera!” “Want to gross them out again?” Kim asks Ron. He studiers. “Oh...ok.” They kiss just as a flash goes off! ”Tweebs?” Kim asks as she looks around. “Hoo-sha!” they had taken a picture and gave each other high fives. “Whatever!” Kim says in bold confidents. “Send them please! I want everyone to know.” “You do?” every one asks. She keeps going. “Yep. I want them to know that I finely realized that Ron is the perfect boy!” And she pulls him in for another kiss.
The Tweebs run inside yelling “Ewww!!!!!” Ron terns to Kim. “Do you mean it?” “Ya.” She answers. “You are the perfect boy and I want everyone to know I like you!” Ron smiles then asks her “Hay Kim? Can I see your Kimmunicator?” “Um shire.” She answers confused at why he would want it just after she gave him a complement. She digs threw her purse and gives it to him. “Thanks.” He terns the Kimmunicator on to see Wade. “I’m ready!” he tells him. Wade answers “OK!” Wondering what he is doing Kim questions him. “Ron, what are you…” “Shhh.” He shushes her and puts his finger on her lips.
Then in an instant a car appears on the road. Ron walks over to it, opens the door, and bows. “My lady.” He says. “Cool. And thanks!” He closes the door and gets in the drivers side. “You’re driving this?” She asks him. “Well, not precisely...” Wade pops up on the screen and says, “I am, well kind of. I made this car. It appears any ware in a single second! “Cool!” Kim says. “Well Ron. Ware are you taking me tonight?” “You’ll see! Here. You’ll need this.” He puts a blindfold around her eyes. “Ok, whatever.” Folding her arms. “GO!” Ron says.
The car instantly appears at their destination. “Ok Kim.” He takes off the blindfold. “You can open your eyes now.” “Ok...Oh!! WOW!!!” She looks around stunned. “OH RON THIS IS WONDERFULL!!!” She hugs him tight. “Welcome, Kim, to...”
Whare did ron take her? im evel!
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Jun 6, 2005 22:42:43 GMT -5
Ok i dont like to wate so you dont have to!!!
Chapter 2: The Date
”Welcome, Kim, to...Paris, France!” “Oh RON!!!!” She looks around franticly. “Cool! Look! And there! And over there! And.…OH! LOOK!” Standing in front of them was THE EIFFEL TOWER! “This isn’t real! It can’t be! It’s to good to be true!” Ron walks over to her. “Dose this satisfy you?” And he pulled her in for a kiss, and she kissed back. They kissed, long, but not long enough. Then broke. Kim looks dreamily at him. “Ya that about dose it!” “Kim, look.” He pointed under the Eiffel and there was a table...for 2 and a wader. “Oh.... Ron!!!!!!”
“Come on lets go.” And he lifted his arm and Kim linked it. Wade smirks at seeing them. “You know I’m still hear, right? They blush and yell, “WADE!!!!” “Ok, ok, ill go. And leave you 2 lovebirds.” And in a flash he went off screen. Kim looks at Ron and smiles. “Now that he's gone lets go eat!” Ron looked at her confused. Kim smiled and pulled in close to him as they walked over.
Ron seated Kim and then himself. The wader came in to assist them. “Would you like a menu ser?” “Yes please,” Ron said. “2 thank you.” The wader bowed and started to leave when Ron got his attention. “Yes ser?” Ron whispered something in his ear and the wader said: Yes ser, of course. And left. Then a lady came in and started to play music. [Romantic duh!] Kim Looked around, then looked at Ron, and smiled warmly. Wow Ron. This is...really...romantic!
Ron blushed and said, “Ya. Thanks.” “Ron, how did you do all this?” “Well,” He puts his elbows on the table. “I got that check again for, 99,000,000 for the noco biss. I got it 2 weeks ago but didn’t tell you because I thought you might freak again.” He smiled weekly Kim just awed “Wow your maturing so much! So.... why Paris?” Ron blushed madly. “Cause its...romantic.” He lowered his head in imbursement but Kim reached over and tilted his head up to look at her. “Thank you, so VARY much!” And she kissed him!
Ron blushed and got up. “Kim? Would you like to dance?” He held out his hand and smiled at her warmly. Kim took his hand and got up. There they danced. Under the Eiffel Tower. The music lady got up and left. Kim looked at Ron confused. “Ron? Where is she going?” Ron smiled a secret smile. “I told her to do something for me.” Kim looked at Ron and smirked at him. “Ron! What are you up to?” Ron smiles some more. “You’ll see!”
The lady came in again, set a boom box down, and pushed play. A song started to play. Kim’s eyes got wide and she dove for Ron. She raped her arms around him. “RON!” “Oh it was nothing. I wanted them to play our song so the dance would be much better.” They danced and danced to Could It Be, the moonlight gleaming over them.
Kim and Ron stop dancing for a moment as the wader comes and gives them their menus. “Thank you vary kindly.” Ron says. “Yes ser. when you need me just ring this bell.” They both say “Ok!” The wader walks over to the lady and whispers to her. She gets up and they walk away. The wader smiles evilly at the lady. “Once they ring the bell they will fall into my trap!” “Poor Kimmy. We’ll rune her date!” says the lady in a mocking tone. “Ya. With that stupid buffoon, Ron Stoppable!” “Wow you remembered his name!” The wader glares at her. “Ya. Ya. Whatever!” The lady smiles wickedly. “I just hate to see us rune her date...” The wader looked at the confused. The lady smirked. “Oh pu-lese! You know that I LOVE the ruined date idea!” The wader continued into his rant. “Well now even KIM POSSIBLE can’t stop my plan!” He laughs and takes his face off [it a mask!] and so does the lady.
Ron looks at Kim as they dance. “You ready to order?” “Sere.” Ron picks up the bell and rings it!! [Oh nooo!!!] And then a hole pops under them and they fall in a hole. It then seals up with THICK glass! The wader and lady look down in victory. “Hello Kim Possible.” The water says as he cackles “And yes, you: Ron Stoppable.” The lady smirks at them. “Oh sorry Kimmy. Did we rune your date?” Kim looks up in disbelief. “NO!” Ron the same. “It can’t be!!!!!” They both yell, “It’s…”
I leave you hanging agen! But if you havent figered who the villens are, well. your not a true fan! [no affence]
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Jun 7, 2005 17:10:21 GMT -5
Hello? is any body hear? Im working on the 3rd chapter but i need help with the plot. can any body help with that?
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Post by deleted on Jun 7, 2005 17:32:24 GMT -5
O cant wait for the next chapter.
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Jun 7, 2005 21:35:58 GMT -5
Ok im going on, i too cant wait for it so hear it is!
Chapter 3: Trap
Both Kim and Ron: Its...Drakken and Shego!!!!! Ron: Oh you are going to pay... Kim: What you did... Both: TO OUR DATE!!!!!!!!! Shego: Oh chill. You can’t do ANY thing to us! Well me... Drakken: Hay! Well you should listen to her! He whispers: Trust me. Kim: Ok hold up wha... Ron: WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN PARIS ANY WAYS? Drakken: that’s for me to know and you NOT find out! He kakas Kim: Your not going to tell us? Shego: No. No, he is learning now isn’t he? I don’t even know! Kim: you....don’t? Shego shakes her head.
Drakken: well, KIM POSSIBLE, I bid you fare well. i have a world to take over. i would love to see you die your painful death but i’m busy. Sorry! Kim: wha.... Ron: What are you going to do...DREW? Drakken gets mad and yells: SHEGO!!!! Shego: you got it dr. d. and she presses a button on a remote and the hole starts to fill up with water. then a rumble comes from under them and an electric eel comes out of an opening.
Ron: Kim!! He screams. But not in fear for him but in fear for Kim. The eel is swimming right to her. Kim: Ron?! Ron swims over to Kim and grabs in Kim’s purse to get the sticky lipstick and the laser lipstick. He fires the sticky lipstick at the eel and it stops it. Then he fires the laser lipstick at the glass. It brakes and Ron grabs Kim as he presses his sleeve coves and he rockets out of there with his rocket shoes. They land safely on the ground above. Kim: wow Ron! I’ve never seen you do that... Ron: oh Kim! I thought you were a goner for sure! And he hugs her, tight, knowing she is safe.
*at school* Monique: hay girl! She runs up to Kim at her locker. Kim: hay Monique! Monique: so i herd you and Ron went on a fabulous date!? Kim: WHO TOLD.... Monique: a little genius told me. Wade pops up on screen like on cue. Kim terns slowly to face him: WADE? You told Monique?! Wade: oh....ya. Monique: Well Kim, she terns her to face her. Monique: Tell ALL!
Kim: Well... Ron: Hi yall! Ron walks up and starts to put his arm around Kim’s shoulder when he thinks otherwise because people are around. Kim: it ok. You can. This Genius spilled everything! Ron: to everyone?! Kim: not.... wade: well...acutely... Kim and Ron: WADE!!!! Wade: It wasn’t me! It was your brothers! Wade smiles weekly. Kim rolls her eyes. Kim: Tweebs!
Bonny walks up to Kim smirking. Bonny: hi K. Kim: hi B. B: I herd about your date. Nice. Kim rolls her eyes agen. B: oh look there’s a real boyfriend, MY boyfriend. She runs over to Brikk B: Brikk, sweetie?! Brikk: Bonny you know we’ve gone over this a million times. I BROK UP WITH YOU 3 WEEKS AGO! He walks off.
Kim: So whats the sich wade? Wade: Beside you too love berds, Kim: WADE! Wade: ok ok. well..
thats the 3rd one! ;D 4 coming soon!
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Jun 7, 2005 22:00:53 GMT -5
I have to go to bed so see ya tomorow!
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Jun 8, 2005 18:25:21 GMT -5
Hello? any body hear? Please give me feed back and mabe some ideas. This is a ron movie. Im going to make it well film it on my camra! barbies will be the actors but me and my frinds are the voces! if you want, when i get it done-warning:long time!-ill post it as a link! i dont want to give awy the secrets but all ill tell you is it is all about ron. and the titel. my name is christina so: Christina's Ron Stoppable Movie: The Legend Of The Flowered Daimonds! i might change the titel so wach out.
edet: Changed titel! told you!
Please read and revew! thanks!
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Jun 8, 2005 19:43:53 GMT -5
ok ill leave for i dont know and ill come back and right more ok? see ya!
wiel im gone ill work on the movie ok! bye yall!
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Jun 12, 2005 18:47:27 GMT -5
sorry but why isent anyone responding!? Im not going to write until someone ansors! well not on here i wont! Im still wrigiting the storys. can you please.... *puppy dog pout* Please! Pridy please! ...................forever I Think im going CRAZY!!!!!
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Post by bluefox on Jun 14, 2005 19:55:45 GMT -5
Maybe you are going crazy! I like the story! It's cute. I Personally like the Tweebs part! Varry creative! " Hik-Abik-Aboo" then "eww-sha!" I like the Tweebs.
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Post by dracko19 on Jun 14, 2005 20:31:57 GMT -5
You might get more response on this fan fic if you moved it over to the FAN FICTION FORUM. (Go back out to the main page and look down on the bottom. It's right below FAN ART.
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Jun 16, 2005 8:26:44 GMT -5
Thanks I will. I guss i dont look around too good! but i will still post the rest of the story hear. so it will be in both forms. ok? ;D
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