Post by Ezbok58a on Jul 29, 2008 2:55:31 GMT -5
;D
Summary: The year is 1956, and Middleton is a growing community...several
large Mob families (every villain group) invest the city, and its up to two
familiar cops (Kim & Ron) and their task force to bring them down. But taking
down multiple mob familes is no picnic...
First chapter here, but to show my good faith I'll post it here as well...
www.fanfiction.net/s/4431644/1/
The following prologue will be similar to a movie trailer preview, so keep that in mind if things don’t seem to flow correctly, that’s probably the reason
This is a new story that’s been rattling around my head for a while I really hope this goes over well.
Legal Stuff: Kim Possible does not belong to me in any way shape or form. Kim Possible belongs to Disney and the Powers that Be that created this great show. All original characters belong to me, and this story is the result of an overactive imagination…
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Cue –Peter Gabriel’s- ‘Digging in the Dirt’
The sun rises over the mountains, the rays casting down on a road sign that reads ‘Welcome To Middleton, CO’, news reporters voice comes over the music.
“Middleton Colorado, summer 1956, the once quaint mountain town is now a booming suburb metropolis that will continue to grow as the days march on…”
Sights of the bustling townsfolk going about their daily routine, people saying hello to one another, the kid on the corner selling newspapers, a father washing his new Chevrolet while his kids play in the yard.
Something in me, Dark and Sticky
All the time is getting strong
“But with the success of a booming town, comes something no one likes…”
A local restaurant is getting ready to open for the day, the owner hears the front door chime go off, he looks to the front door and sees five people standing near the front of his restaurant. All had fedoras and all had long raincoats on, one was a female with long black hair and a slightly green hue, to her right was a man with blue skin and a scar under his left eye.
The way your dealing, with this feeling,
Can’t go on like this too long…
“…Organized Crime.”
The restaurant erupts with the sound of gunfire as the owner dives to the floor. The bullets ripped through the walls and the bar, spraying glass and liquids down on the floor. All while the man with blue skin smiled at the destruction going on before him.
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
I told ya, I told ya, I told ya, I told ya!
A young man walks into the Middleton chief of polices office, his entrance gets the chiefs attention.
“You wanted to see me chief?”
“Have a seat detective Stoppable…”
Detective Stoppable takes a seat in front of the chief’s desk as the chief turns to address him.
“Stoppable, as you know I’m starting a new taskforce to take care of the rise of the mob in this city…and I want you to lead it…”
The door opened up behind him, Ron turned to see who was interrupting them, and he saw beautiful green eyes and a cascade or red hair.
“…you’ll be leading the taskforce with our newest member here, Miss Possible…”
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
I told ya, I told ya, I told ya, I told ya!
“We’ve got too many gangs in this town; we’ve got the ‘Monkey Clan’, ‘Strudel Works’, and ‘The Blue Scar Mafia’, that’s two more than any other city in the country!” A task force member exclaimed as he pointed to spy shots of each mob leader and their second in command.
“That’s not all of them either, reports are coming back that ‘The Seniors’ are getting into the mob, as well as back room dealings with mobsters from Go City…” Kim said as she walked up to the board.
“Listen, toots…I don’t care what you had to do to get here, but this is a MANS job. This isn’t a place for you…” The task force member said. Ron winced…
Kim smiled as she grabbed the task force members arm and quickly twisted it behind his back, his face drawn into a look of pain.
“Call me toots again, and you’ll have more to worry about than a broken arm…” She said, earning a painful nod from the task force member.
Don’t talk back, Just drive the car
Shut your mouth, I know what you are
Don’t say nothing, keep your hands on the wheel
Don’t turn around, this is for real
“What brings you to Middleton Miss Possible?” Ron asked as he joined his new ‘partner’ out on the roof of the police station, taking in the beautiful setting sun.
“First off, if we’re working together its Kim, none of this Miss Possible. And second, I’m here because I want to help, I want to rid the everyday citizen of the problems organized crime brings to a city…”
Digging in the Dirt
Stay with me I need support
I’m digging in the dirt
Find the places I got hurt
Open up the places I got hurt…
“Who’s that?” Kim asked as they walked through the police station, she was motioning over to a very ragged looking individual with a long gray rain coat and a chest holster watching them.
“That’s detective Vinny Pegorino, he took on several of these mob bosses before our task force was put together.” Ron whispered.
“Well why isn’t he working with us on this task force?”
“Before us he had his own task force, the mob bosses wiped them all out, all but him…”
The more I look, The more I find
As I close on in, I get so blind
In a crowded bar near closing time Detective Pegorino is drinking a scotch on the rocks when both Ron and Kim approach him.
“What do you two want?” he asked with a slight slur in his voice.
“We want your help in bringing these mob bosses down.” Ron said bluntly.
“You want my advice?” Pegorino asks…
“That would be a start…” Kim said hopefully.
Pegorino takes a long swig of his scotch before he turns to the two of them.
“Buy stocks on Body Bags, because you’re going to need them…”
I feel it in my head, I feel it in my toes
I feel it in my sex, that’s the place it goes…
“Just what do you take me to be Detective Possible?” The blue scarred mob boss asked the two of them who were standing in his office.
“A mob boss, not a cupcake guru like you little front here suggests. Haven’t seen too many legitimate business men with hired help…” Kim said glaring at the dark green raincoat wearing woman on the mob bosses right.
“Really, princess…where’s your proof?” The woman asked as the two stared at each other intently.
“You’re both going down, it’s just a matter of time…” Kim said before they left the office.
“Shego, let the boys know…” The mob boss known as Dr. Drakken said as he grinned at the closed door.
“Eliminate them both…”
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
I told ya, I told ya, I told ya, I told ya!
“They’re smuggling something into the city tonight and we have to stop them!” Kim exclaimed as the task force runs out to their vehicles and start racing to the scene of the transaction…
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
I told ya, I told ya, I told ya, I told ya!
The two of them duck down behind one of their own patrol cars as machine gun fire cuts through the line of police vehicles. Glancing under the car she could see the same green raincoat wearing woman spraying their vehicles with Thompson gun fire while the goons in the back were unloading one truck into another. She took aim and returned fire on the mobsters.
Don’t talk back, Just drive the car
Shut your mouth, I know what you are
Don’t say nothing, keep your hands on the wheel
Don’t turn around, this is for real
“I’m starting to care for you Kim…I don’t know how else to say it…” Ron said as he sat in Kim’s apartment. No sooner did he finish his sentence than he was engulfed by the red haired female in a serious game of lip lock, he went from sitting upright on the couch to laying flat in literally seconds.
Digging in the Dirt
Stay with me I need support
I’m digging in the dirt
Find the places I got hurt
Open up the places I got hurt…
The black Cadillac sedan raced down the rural mountain roads with the black and white Ford hot on its tail. Another Goon leaned out the passenger side rear window and opened fire on the pursuing cops, causing them to duck down.
“You’ve got to get us closer Ron!” Kim shouted as she reloaded her .38 special while bullets ripped through the windshield.
I’m Digging in the Dirt
Stay with me I need support
Pounding in the dirt
Find the places I got hurt
To open up, the places I got hurt
“We’ve lost 6 cops in 5 weeks, we really need your help!” Ron shouted at Pegorino, who was still calmly drinking his scotch,
“And what the hell you want me to do?”
“Help us, help us rid this town of the mob!” Kim said.
“You’ll never rid the town of the mob, not now…not ever…”
Digging in the dirt
Find the Places we got hurt
“We’ve got twelve guys coming around on our right, they’re trying to surround us!” Ron shouted as he ducked more incoming fire.
“Surround and eliminate…that’s what the mob does…” Kim said quietly as she checked her ammo.
“On three, one….two…three!”
Digging in the dirt
Find the Places we got hurt
“They’ve put a hit out on both of you, I’m making sure they don’t succeed.” Pegorino said as he lofted the shotgun in his arms…
“So you are going to help us…” Kim said with a smirk.
“Don’t have a choice, it’s my job after all…”
The scene pans up to the black sky, a sky that is soon filled with red letters depicting the title of this story as spent shell casings rain down across it, and the music fades out…
Digging in the dirt
Find the Places we got hurt
Digging in the dirt
Find the Places we got hurt
Digging in the dirt
Find the Places we got hurt
Digging in the dirt
Find the Places we got hurt
Summary: The year is 1956, and Middleton is a growing community...several
large Mob families (every villain group) invest the city, and its up to two
familiar cops (Kim & Ron) and their task force to bring them down. But taking
down multiple mob familes is no picnic...
First chapter here, but to show my good faith I'll post it here as well...
www.fanfiction.net/s/4431644/1/
The following prologue will be similar to a movie trailer preview, so keep that in mind if things don’t seem to flow correctly, that’s probably the reason
This is a new story that’s been rattling around my head for a while I really hope this goes over well.
Legal Stuff: Kim Possible does not belong to me in any way shape or form. Kim Possible belongs to Disney and the Powers that Be that created this great show. All original characters belong to me, and this story is the result of an overactive imagination…
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Cue –Peter Gabriel’s- ‘Digging in the Dirt’
The sun rises over the mountains, the rays casting down on a road sign that reads ‘Welcome To Middleton, CO’, news reporters voice comes over the music.
“Middleton Colorado, summer 1956, the once quaint mountain town is now a booming suburb metropolis that will continue to grow as the days march on…”
Sights of the bustling townsfolk going about their daily routine, people saying hello to one another, the kid on the corner selling newspapers, a father washing his new Chevrolet while his kids play in the yard.
Something in me, Dark and Sticky
All the time is getting strong
“But with the success of a booming town, comes something no one likes…”
A local restaurant is getting ready to open for the day, the owner hears the front door chime go off, he looks to the front door and sees five people standing near the front of his restaurant. All had fedoras and all had long raincoats on, one was a female with long black hair and a slightly green hue, to her right was a man with blue skin and a scar under his left eye.
The way your dealing, with this feeling,
Can’t go on like this too long…
“…Organized Crime.”
The restaurant erupts with the sound of gunfire as the owner dives to the floor. The bullets ripped through the walls and the bar, spraying glass and liquids down on the floor. All while the man with blue skin smiled at the destruction going on before him.
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
I told ya, I told ya, I told ya, I told ya!
A young man walks into the Middleton chief of polices office, his entrance gets the chiefs attention.
“You wanted to see me chief?”
“Have a seat detective Stoppable…”
Detective Stoppable takes a seat in front of the chief’s desk as the chief turns to address him.
“Stoppable, as you know I’m starting a new taskforce to take care of the rise of the mob in this city…and I want you to lead it…”
The door opened up behind him, Ron turned to see who was interrupting them, and he saw beautiful green eyes and a cascade or red hair.
“…you’ll be leading the taskforce with our newest member here, Miss Possible…”
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
I told ya, I told ya, I told ya, I told ya!
“We’ve got too many gangs in this town; we’ve got the ‘Monkey Clan’, ‘Strudel Works’, and ‘The Blue Scar Mafia’, that’s two more than any other city in the country!” A task force member exclaimed as he pointed to spy shots of each mob leader and their second in command.
“That’s not all of them either, reports are coming back that ‘The Seniors’ are getting into the mob, as well as back room dealings with mobsters from Go City…” Kim said as she walked up to the board.
“Listen, toots…I don’t care what you had to do to get here, but this is a MANS job. This isn’t a place for you…” The task force member said. Ron winced…
Kim smiled as she grabbed the task force members arm and quickly twisted it behind his back, his face drawn into a look of pain.
“Call me toots again, and you’ll have more to worry about than a broken arm…” She said, earning a painful nod from the task force member.
Don’t talk back, Just drive the car
Shut your mouth, I know what you are
Don’t say nothing, keep your hands on the wheel
Don’t turn around, this is for real
“What brings you to Middleton Miss Possible?” Ron asked as he joined his new ‘partner’ out on the roof of the police station, taking in the beautiful setting sun.
“First off, if we’re working together its Kim, none of this Miss Possible. And second, I’m here because I want to help, I want to rid the everyday citizen of the problems organized crime brings to a city…”
Digging in the Dirt
Stay with me I need support
I’m digging in the dirt
Find the places I got hurt
Open up the places I got hurt…
“Who’s that?” Kim asked as they walked through the police station, she was motioning over to a very ragged looking individual with a long gray rain coat and a chest holster watching them.
“That’s detective Vinny Pegorino, he took on several of these mob bosses before our task force was put together.” Ron whispered.
“Well why isn’t he working with us on this task force?”
“Before us he had his own task force, the mob bosses wiped them all out, all but him…”
The more I look, The more I find
As I close on in, I get so blind
In a crowded bar near closing time Detective Pegorino is drinking a scotch on the rocks when both Ron and Kim approach him.
“What do you two want?” he asked with a slight slur in his voice.
“We want your help in bringing these mob bosses down.” Ron said bluntly.
“You want my advice?” Pegorino asks…
“That would be a start…” Kim said hopefully.
Pegorino takes a long swig of his scotch before he turns to the two of them.
“Buy stocks on Body Bags, because you’re going to need them…”
I feel it in my head, I feel it in my toes
I feel it in my sex, that’s the place it goes…
“Just what do you take me to be Detective Possible?” The blue scarred mob boss asked the two of them who were standing in his office.
“A mob boss, not a cupcake guru like you little front here suggests. Haven’t seen too many legitimate business men with hired help…” Kim said glaring at the dark green raincoat wearing woman on the mob bosses right.
“Really, princess…where’s your proof?” The woman asked as the two stared at each other intently.
“You’re both going down, it’s just a matter of time…” Kim said before they left the office.
“Shego, let the boys know…” The mob boss known as Dr. Drakken said as he grinned at the closed door.
“Eliminate them both…”
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
I told ya, I told ya, I told ya, I told ya!
“They’re smuggling something into the city tonight and we have to stop them!” Kim exclaimed as the task force runs out to their vehicles and start racing to the scene of the transaction…
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
This time, you’ve gone too far!
I told ya, I told ya, I told ya, I told ya!
The two of them duck down behind one of their own patrol cars as machine gun fire cuts through the line of police vehicles. Glancing under the car she could see the same green raincoat wearing woman spraying their vehicles with Thompson gun fire while the goons in the back were unloading one truck into another. She took aim and returned fire on the mobsters.
Don’t talk back, Just drive the car
Shut your mouth, I know what you are
Don’t say nothing, keep your hands on the wheel
Don’t turn around, this is for real
“I’m starting to care for you Kim…I don’t know how else to say it…” Ron said as he sat in Kim’s apartment. No sooner did he finish his sentence than he was engulfed by the red haired female in a serious game of lip lock, he went from sitting upright on the couch to laying flat in literally seconds.
Digging in the Dirt
Stay with me I need support
I’m digging in the dirt
Find the places I got hurt
Open up the places I got hurt…
The black Cadillac sedan raced down the rural mountain roads with the black and white Ford hot on its tail. Another Goon leaned out the passenger side rear window and opened fire on the pursuing cops, causing them to duck down.
“You’ve got to get us closer Ron!” Kim shouted as she reloaded her .38 special while bullets ripped through the windshield.
I’m Digging in the Dirt
Stay with me I need support
Pounding in the dirt
Find the places I got hurt
To open up, the places I got hurt
“We’ve lost 6 cops in 5 weeks, we really need your help!” Ron shouted at Pegorino, who was still calmly drinking his scotch,
“And what the hell you want me to do?”
“Help us, help us rid this town of the mob!” Kim said.
“You’ll never rid the town of the mob, not now…not ever…”
Digging in the dirt
Find the Places we got hurt
“We’ve got twelve guys coming around on our right, they’re trying to surround us!” Ron shouted as he ducked more incoming fire.
“Surround and eliminate…that’s what the mob does…” Kim said quietly as she checked her ammo.
“On three, one….two…three!”
Digging in the dirt
Find the Places we got hurt
“They’ve put a hit out on both of you, I’m making sure they don’t succeed.” Pegorino said as he lofted the shotgun in his arms…
“So you are going to help us…” Kim said with a smirk.
“Don’t have a choice, it’s my job after all…”
The scene pans up to the black sky, a sky that is soon filled with red letters depicting the title of this story as spent shell casings rain down across it, and the music fades out…
Digging in the dirt
Find the Places we got hurt
Digging in the dirt
Find the Places we got hurt
Digging in the dirt
Find the Places we got hurt
Digging in the dirt
Find the Places we got hurt
