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Post by Alexlayer on Oct 26, 2008 15:57:33 GMT -5
Well, I just thought of promoting here this fic in which I've worked on a lot. Not sure if it'll help or not since I don't seem to have much popularity as a writer around here, but it's always worth giving a try. So, in case any of you may be interested, here you can read my story. I'll certainly be grateful: Heaven in HellUh, what? KiGo? Who said anything about KiGo? No! This story is not KiGo. Kim is not dating Shego on this one. She's dating Shego's daughter.
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Post by milly123 on Oct 26, 2008 15:58:22 GMT -5
OOOH! DRAMA!
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Post by Alexlayer on Oct 31, 2008 6:15:36 GMT -5
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Post by ninjanaco on Dec 10, 2008 16:58:24 GMT -5
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Post by Alexlayer on Dec 11, 2008 23:04:09 GMT -5
Wow, Ninjy! You actually read my fic? I'm so glad! Hope you enjoyed it! ;D
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Post by RedBlueGreen on Dec 12, 2008 15:55:02 GMT -5
Throwing in the Metal Gear REX in chapter two is weird and seems out of place, but I liked the actual Kim/Agni/Shego story. Dramatic without being too angsty, I think Agni's internal struggles are well written, Kim's recognisably IC and so is Shego, as far as she can be here. Mind you, there are a number of grammar errors and places where the wrong word is used, suggesting faith in spellcheckers . But I enjoyed it.
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Post by Alexlayer on Dec 12, 2008 16:41:01 GMT -5
Throwing in the Metal Gear REX in chapter two is weird and seems out of place, I know, I just wanted to write about Kim fighting REX one day, and well, that came out. ^^U but I liked the actual Kim/Agni/Shego story. Dramatic without being too angsty, I think Agni's internal struggles are well written, Kim's recognisably IC and so is Shego, as far as she can be here. I'm really glad to hear that, I hope you like the following chapters (hopefully, I'll have another down for this weekend) Mind you, there are a number of grammar errors and places where the wrong word is used, suggesting faith in spellcheckers ... ...wierd, I have both spellcheckers AND a beta-reader, and you're telling me there's still plenty of mistakes? Man, now I really don't know what to do about it. ^^U And I'm certainly glad for that. Thanks a lot for the comments!
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Post by Alexlayer on Jan 31, 2009 9:47:27 GMT -5
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