Shego bar brawl sketch (feedback welcome)

[Dr. Feelgood]

I was inspired by shallow15's awesome idea and decided to sketch this with my beloved new pen tablet. ;D



The main goal of the pic is to convey energy. Any suggestions at all, but particularly on how to improve this, would be most welcome. For instance, I think Shego needs to let go of the green guy; it seems he's slowing her down. Maybe I'll give her a broken bottle instead. Probably won't do much more with this before early next month though, when the exams are over. I'm new to drawing on a computer, and I need some time to do it right.

[Muzzlehatch]

A broken bottle seems kind of drastic, do you really want her slashing somebody? A table leg would be OK, I think.

[Dr. Feelgood]

Drastic, yes. Out of character, no. Her weapon of choice is razor-tipped gloves, and she doesn't seem to have any qualms about using them. But I'd probably just have her use it for intimidation... nothing too graphic. Then again, she could do anything with her right arm, nothing's set in stone (which is the wonder of digital sketching ;D). One other alternative is to simply turn the green guy around and have her yank him off the floor by the collar, which may or may not put more power into her move... Not sure about the pool cue either... Everything's very much open to suggestion at this point.

[Donne]

For more action, the green guy could be slumping in her grip with his legs dragging, staring fearfully at her face. Right now he's just holding his ground.

Nice sketch.

[Dr. Feelgood]

Hmm, slumping could be good, depending on the pose... I need to find a way to do it that makes it clear that he's not slowing her down in the least. The way it is now, he's not working at all. She needs to put all her weight behind that kick for maximum hurt, but at the same time I really want her to take out two guys at once. Maybe I'll have to expand the pic too, to make room for more goons. *scratches imaginary beard*

Thanks for the feedback guys, I really appreciate it. Keeps me thinking.