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Post by sweetpixiesmile on Dec 12, 2008 13:07:31 GMT -5
I just did a couple of speed write exercises based on songs. The first is " One Thing" by Finger Eleven, and is unrequited KiGo. The second is " Outside" by Staind and can be shipped any which way you like.
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Post by RedBlueGreen on Dec 12, 2008 15:43:08 GMT -5
Not bad, especially for speed-writing. "Outside" is an neat prologue to some Kim-sinks-into-Evil darkness. "One Thing" is a fairly good internal piece for that key Kigo moment. Nice work.
I didn't listen to the songs and just skimmed the lyrics: the fics stand up on their own.
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Post by sweetpixiesmile on Dec 15, 2008 21:50:02 GMT -5
Thanks!
I'll be doing a couple more just to get my head screwed on right. Blood and Bondage is taking a lot out of me and chapter 12 is taking forever.
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