Post by skycan1 on Jul 1, 2010 15:45:43 GMT -5
This is a preview of a story I'm working on.
One of my first story.Taken place seven years after graduation episode.
Kim and Monique are the only two main characters talking.Introduce few new characters I made up.
I don't not own Kim possible series.Which is on by the Disney company.
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Today was rare quite day.Nearly a empty home, all say one.No sounds of kids play or husband entrainment himself with video games.
The single person in the house was contempt with her peacefulness.This woman enjoying relax time away from her family.She love them, but sometime people need their (me time).Nothing more relaxing when quietly sitting on the family sofa watching you're favorite show and sipping tea.
The redheaded woman enjoying her day alone.Her husband had see old friends out of the country.And the children where visiting with their grandparents for the weekend.
Her name is famous Kim Possible.Yet now she is call Mrs.Stoppable.Married to her best-friend Ronald Stoppable four and half years.Had twin children three years ago.A girl "Anna" and a boy "Ron Jr".They look just a like expect for their hair and eyes.Anna had blond hair and green eyes.While her brother has red hair and brown eyes.
The day started out good for her until a loud banging come.Quickly getting up and form a fighting position.Years reflex of battling villains and monsters have left her always ready for action.Running toward the loud noise, ready for anything.The sound was coming from the front door.Without wast-en a second open it.Only to find her female best friend Monique.Normally the dark skin beauty was displayed calmly composer and stylish.Right now she was neither of those things.She crying on controllable and look of nervously panic.
"Monique what's wrong!"Ask her as she help the worried friend in.
"Mar...tin.. 'sob' show pic...'.unh'...tures on phone of me annnn....dd!"Was all she could put in a sentence.
Kim tried to understood her frantic friend.One name clear thou, was Martin.Monique finance', whom plan to marry in few weeks.Now Kim became worried that something happen to him.Afraid the worse case possibility.She gently grab upset friend and calmly talk to her.
"It's alright Monique, tell me what happen.!"She look her eye to eye."Is Martin OK?"
The upset-ed nodded her to signal yes.Kim take breath of relief.Yet she felt there was more.Before she ask her friend.She was giving Monique cellular video phone.
"Why are you giv..!"Her eyes waded in shock from which she saw on the video.
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So what do think?Am I on something here?Should I really need give you detail the kids looks when they aren't in the story much?
One of my first story.Taken place seven years after graduation episode.
Kim and Monique are the only two main characters talking.Introduce few new characters I made up.
I don't not own Kim possible series.Which is on by the Disney company.
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Today was rare quite day.Nearly a empty home, all say one.No sounds of kids play or husband entrainment himself with video games.
The single person in the house was contempt with her peacefulness.This woman enjoying relax time away from her family.She love them, but sometime people need their (me time).Nothing more relaxing when quietly sitting on the family sofa watching you're favorite show and sipping tea.
The redheaded woman enjoying her day alone.Her husband had see old friends out of the country.And the children where visiting with their grandparents for the weekend.
Her name is famous Kim Possible.Yet now she is call Mrs.Stoppable.Married to her best-friend Ronald Stoppable four and half years.Had twin children three years ago.A girl "Anna" and a boy "Ron Jr".They look just a like expect for their hair and eyes.Anna had blond hair and green eyes.While her brother has red hair and brown eyes.
The day started out good for her until a loud banging come.Quickly getting up and form a fighting position.Years reflex of battling villains and monsters have left her always ready for action.Running toward the loud noise, ready for anything.The sound was coming from the front door.Without wast-en a second open it.Only to find her female best friend Monique.Normally the dark skin beauty was displayed calmly composer and stylish.Right now she was neither of those things.She crying on controllable and look of nervously panic.
"Monique what's wrong!"Ask her as she help the worried friend in.
"Mar...tin.. 'sob' show pic...'.unh'...tures on phone of me annnn....dd!"Was all she could put in a sentence.
Kim tried to understood her frantic friend.One name clear thou, was Martin.Monique finance', whom plan to marry in few weeks.Now Kim became worried that something happen to him.Afraid the worse case possibility.She gently grab upset friend and calmly talk to her.
"It's alright Monique, tell me what happen.!"She look her eye to eye."Is Martin OK?"
The upset-ed nodded her to signal yes.Kim take breath of relief.Yet she felt there was more.Before she ask her friend.She was giving Monique cellular video phone.
"Why are you giv..!"Her eyes waded in shock from which she saw on the video.
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So what do think?Am I on something here?Should I really need give you detail the kids looks when they aren't in the story much?