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Dec 31, 2005 13:25:24 GMT -5
Post by molyangelo on Dec 31, 2005 13:25:24 GMT -5
i got a digital camera for Christmas! got sidetracked from my grads pic. critiques welcome.
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Jan 1, 2006 15:49:22 GMT -5
Post by mollyangelo on Jan 1, 2006 15:49:22 GMT -5
helooo??? why no one commenting???
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Jan 1, 2006 18:04:29 GMT -5
Post by trollis on Jan 1, 2006 18:04:29 GMT -5
Nice job on it . MvH Anders "Trollis" Bernhardsson
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Jan 1, 2006 18:19:48 GMT -5
Post by TuLsAdLaNcE on Jan 1, 2006 18:19:48 GMT -5
Looks great. only suggestion I have (please dont take this the wrong way, its meant to be constructive) is not to give kimmie such a large forehead next time otherwise grrrrrrrrr8 pic
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Jan 4, 2006 18:53:17 GMT -5
Post by mollyangelo on Jan 4, 2006 18:53:17 GMT -5
better tulsadlance?
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Jan 5, 2006 4:35:13 GMT -5
Post by teztor123 on Jan 5, 2006 4:35:13 GMT -5
If you look at the pic's in tul's sig just above it, you can see that her hair sweeps across her forehead so that it's actually touching her left eye brow.
Actually, if you just expanded the proportional size of her face, so that it tucked up into her hair it might be fine.
But then again, her head might be a bit big over all. You might want to play with it some as keeping her head positioned properly over her neck is important to.
Not sure how you did this. If it were done in layers with her face one layer, her hair another and her body another or so, you might be able expand them and manipulate them ... but someone more knowledgeable than I could probably give better advice on something like that.
But, in any case, please don't think of this as criticsim. You've certainly done a lot better job than I could.
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Jan 5, 2006 17:39:52 GMT -5
Post by TuLsAdLaNcE on Jan 5, 2006 17:39:52 GMT -5
Yes, it is looking better (though the original was still good too). as teztor pointed out, her hair does come down and sweep over her left eye so, if you brought the curve in just a little more and not have the curve line that is on top as high it would be perfect!
Again, great job! Just trying to give constructive feedback
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Jan 5, 2006 20:18:36 GMT -5
Post by mollyangelo on Jan 5, 2006 20:18:36 GMT -5
there! i was astonished at how much better it looked... thanks!
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Jan 5, 2006 20:20:12 GMT -5
Post by TuLsAdLaNcE on Jan 5, 2006 20:20:12 GMT -5
awesome! the way her hair is up like that makes me think the vents are on while she's in them. Very Nice Molly!
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Jan 6, 2006 7:27:22 GMT -5
Post by mollyangelo on Jan 6, 2006 7:27:22 GMT -5
amazing how one little line can make a difference...
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Jan 6, 2006 15:55:12 GMT -5
Post by mollyangelo on Jan 6, 2006 15:55:12 GMT -5
i'm editing it MORE... this time not on paint. anyone use corel???
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Jan 6, 2006 17:49:38 GMT -5
Post by mollyangelo on Jan 6, 2006 17:49:38 GMT -5
here! muuuuuuch better!!! sorry about all the editing, this is the last version. ;D i'm going to use corel from now on.
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Jan 6, 2006 17:56:20 GMT -5
Post by TuLsAdLaNcE on Jan 6, 2006 17:56:20 GMT -5
nice shading
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