Monkey Fist--Please Critique

[Sarah Ashley T.]

I was practicing my coloring and lighting effects as well as shading and such, and used something simple, like this pic thst I randomly whipped up on the computor =3
Yey.. I <3 Monty!!

ADORE HIS SHINEY HAIR!!!!!!!!

So, uhm, yes. . crtique is JUST as welcome as comments are. . i really need it I figure And, school starts again for me tomorrow, so, if I do create any new threads over here again.. they may only be pencil colored, or just plain out sketches. .

Link: www.deviantart.com/view/27189396/

[dragoonbigl]

the hair is awsome!

[Sarah Ashley T.]

dragoonbigl said:

the hair is awsome!

yey.. i had the shiney brownish/black-sih hair in my mind.. didn't turn out as well as hoped.. but better than i thought I could do. thanks

[monkeylove]

cool effect, me likey. <3

[Sarah Ashley T.]

monkeylove said:

cool effect, me likey. <3

dankah

[aliciamartin]

love the picture i faved it for you

[mollyangelo]

love the hair.

[Sarah Ashley T.]

thankyou everyone ^__^

[Carbon]

It really looks good, nice work but since you asked for critique, I'll say that maybe his head could be wider at the top (his eye is touching his sideburns) and a little bit more jaw definition, but that's just being picky- nice job!

[Sarah Ashley T.]

carbon said:

It really looks good, nice work but since you asked for critique, I'll say that maybe his head could be wider at the top (his eye is touching his sideburns) and a little bit more jaw definition, but that's just being picky- nice job!

thanks for the critique actually it helps so that i can, well, get betterat drawing him obviously lol, thankyah muchly