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Post by Kayleigh on Mar 15, 2006 18:10:43 GMT -5
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Post by Panther on Mar 15, 2006 18:53:22 GMT -5
Critique:
- Sloppy background
- Kim is a bit too tall
But otherwise, great job, it's way better than I could do at Kim.
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Post by Kothoga on Mar 15, 2006 19:06:02 GMT -5
Critique: - Sloppy background - Kim is a bit too tall But otherwise, great job, it's way better than I could do at Kim. I agree. sloppy bg and Kim is too tall. but otherwise great job, can't wait for you next pic |
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Post by Ron Spawn on Mar 15, 2006 19:06:15 GMT -5
BEH I hate it when people ask for critique, cuz then I gotta give them some, LOL. I don't wanna be a jerk, but as a fellow art-eest I wanna help do you do kickass sturf. Okay, here's the basic stuff, you did pretty well for your first KP thing, I think I destroyed Kim on my first try, anyway, here it is:  A. Kim has no boobs in this picture. We all know Kim's weapon of mass distruction is her pointy boob. B. I agree with Mukiox, her legs are a bit too long for the picture C. One leg is thinner than the other D. Her nose is just a biiiittt off. And like Mukiox said, the background is sloppy, but that's coloringwise. As an OCD freak, I'd be glad to show you a bit more how the anatomy should work... Hey... don't point that gun at me..bad...bad.  A little more like that  I'd say just study up on anatomy a bit and you should do great -thumbs up- -falls over- |
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Post by Jon Tsuyo on Mar 15, 2006 19:16:44 GMT -5
I agree with everything previously posted, wspecially the 'study up... and you should do great' part. Good job for first attempt, just work on it, and you should be flyin' high in no time.
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Post by Kayleigh on Mar 15, 2006 19:29:57 GMT -5
Thanks guys... I'll work on it. The background it horrid, I know. It was not supposed to turn out that way, lol.
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Post by fazhou on Mar 15, 2006 19:41:44 GMT -5
Okay, about the background...try to avoid pencils for "filling in" backgrounds. See if you can't get a hold of a good computer paint program and paint it instead. Here, I did this up real quick...  Here's a free computer paint program you can download right now, it's "Ultimate Paint," and I highly recommend it. It does a lot of the same stuff as the pricey software... www.download.com/Ultimate-Paint-Freeware-Edition/3000-2192_4-10444359.html?tag=lst-0-1 |
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Post by Panther on Mar 15, 2006 19:48:37 GMT -5
We all know Kim's weapon of mass distruction is her pointy boob. That's my new sig-quote.XD |
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Post by Ron Spawn on Mar 15, 2006 20:03:16 GMT -5
We all know Kim's weapon of mass distruction is her pointy boob. That's my new sig-quote.XD Hahaha. SWEEETT. |
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Mar 15, 2006 20:06:01 GMT -5
That's such an awesome quote. I was gonna comment in this thread about it earlier... but I didn't want to be crude.  Instead, Muk did it for me. Thanks, dude! ;D |
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Post by Panther on Mar 15, 2006 20:09:08 GMT -5
Please, call me Mux.  |
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Post by Ashley Benlove on Mar 15, 2006 20:32:34 GMT -5
Okay, Mux it is. |
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Post by Kayleigh on Mar 15, 2006 21:12:21 GMT -5
Thanks! I'll check it out... |
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Post by Kothoga on Mar 16, 2006 6:16:59 GMT -5
If you don't like Ultimate Paint Freeware I can recommend Paint.net a Freeware that as layers, speciell effect et... Paint.NET looks and feels similar to premium programs like Paint Shop Pro or Photoshop www.eecs.wsu.edu/paint.net/Needs .Net Framework to work |
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Post by Panther on Mar 16, 2006 19:07:07 GMT -5
What about The GIMP? It works just like Photoshop and it's free.
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Post by kimmyfan48 on Mar 16, 2006 19:11:59 GMT -5
Good job on your first piece!
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Post by drakkenlover on Mar 16, 2006 19:21:52 GMT -5
Ah yes, GIMP, that's the software I use!!
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Post by Panther on Mar 16, 2006 21:30:01 GMT -5
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Post by Jon Tsuyo on Mar 18, 2006 13:51:09 GMT -5
I want a shirt with Ron Spawn's quote... In fact... I'll get back to guys on that...
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Post by Prince Sky on Mar 18, 2006 14:50:21 GMT -5
okaaaaaay i'm confused on the GIMP thingy there's a lot of stuff to read and i don't like to read that much of a complicated stuff so help i kinda need it too my drawings are in a need of a little touch of colors and stuffs
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Instead, Muk did it for me. Thanks, dude! ;D
