Plenty o Shego in here! I need some C&C!

[VICIOUS]

I've been doing some random sketches and doodles lately, so it's no surprise that i'm trying to perfect the characters using my own style. Any changes or criticism you have, please share! So first up, i'm gonna toss out my latest pieces, Shego >.>

Heres the newer ones, i figure this one i like, so i'ma keep her looking like this. I might color the inkage on the right too >.>

The hair may be too messy, i'm not that great with curles, and the hands are already awful >.> appendages in general may be wrong all together xD Anyways, tell me what you think :3

Heres some earlier pieces i did last week >.>
Head Shot doodles, and a Kim in the left: i2.photobucket.com/albums/y17/CARVERMAP/kimcast.jpg

And Kim Dangling from a rope, again, some horrible hands >.> I only tend to ink when i think something actually deserves Inkage
i2.photobucket.com/albums/y17/CARVERMAP/1170300516.jpg

[drakkenlover]

Cool style, I like them.

Good job.

[VICIOUS]

Thanks ^^ I plan on changing everything around a couple times before i settle on what the characters should finally look like. I think i went through 3 or 4 mandy's already xD

[Lord FunkyHoof]

You have no idea what you have just asked for! (Evil Laughter) Just kidding, anyway....

Shego Pic: The style of this looks great, the body's anatomy looks spot on and I'm really digging the face. The only thing I see off is her right hand, the left one looks good but the right could use some improvement. And the waist looks a tad long, but it might just be me. I honestly see nothing wrong with the hair, it's just that I don't think it suits her, perhaps if it had less curls.

Second Pic: I don't really have any crits for this one, everything seems to be very well done, though Drakken looks a bit...off, I think it may have to do with his forehead being so round.

Third Pic: The only thing I see wrong is her left hand, not that it came out bad but it seems like an unnatural way to hold a rope, I always have trouble with how hands should look while holding things as well, it always helps to find references if you can. But the details put into her top and pants, even her face, all look excellent!

Sorry, I hope I didn't go too overboard on ya, I took a lot of art classes (in high school and college) and critiques were something we did on a daily bases. But in general just keep at it, the only thing I see that would need some expanding on is hands, but I don't blame you as I have trouble with them as well. It's always great to see new talent and style, hoping to see more from you!

[nabusan]

VERY nice Shego. Are you on DA?

[VICIOUS]

I have a DA, and i don't touch it, i hate that website with a passion.. I don't know why O.o;
Anyways! Thanks alot for the crit, FunkFist-Sama. If anything, you werent giving enough info :3
I usually end up being picky to the point where people run off and cry *proudly nods*
I always thought Shego's hair was curly, but then again, could just be wavy, i'll give her another go. None of these sketches are final, mind you guys. I don't think i've portrayed any of the characters Just Right. :o Ya should take a look at my Mandy's.
>.>
This website fails my favorite emoticon :o

[VICIOUS]

Oh yeah, Give me some requests! Some ideas of what to draw.. And please, no ships! O.o! I'm still working on couple pictures, muchless opening myself to a wide range of things i probably woudn't approve of xD

Kim and Ron sure, yeah, but nothing to affectionate, SHego and Drakken, sure, but expect shego to be threatening Drakken or be totally annoyed.. ^^

[VICIOUS]

*blink blink* Yeah, so without some CG lines or a tablet.. I can't color either.. Of course, it is flat, i don't think i'm gonna end up putting enough time for shades into it..

[Whisper from the Shadows]

I love your style, it's different from what I'm used to (and change is good). The eyes in your second linked pic, of just Kim, were VERY nice. Your anatomy seems to be pretty close to spot on, and I feel your pain when it comes to hands, they're harder than Dementors head.

If you want a request, I would like to see Raven done by you.

[VICIOUS]

Cheese Yeah! *fails at replacing curse words* Raven kicks.. arse >.> Actually, i've been meaning to do sketches of a number of Titans for my friends story ^^; I'ma scan in a couple more pics, i just doodles another Shego, a more calm, thinking one, and some more Kim ideas, I'm still not satisfied with how she's coming out. Kim keeps ending up being the Girl next door rather than the firecracker she really is.. And i needa find a mix between the two.. >.>

[VICIOUS]

There we go, have fun going through my Shego's, i'm start a new thread for the Kimmies >.>

[CDB]

A wise man once said:


WHOA!!!

Awesome artwork, and your latest Shego pic...wow!!

And you some requests, I have plenty of ideas.

[VICIOUS]

xD Thanks!

"So i see" Said the blind man, who tripped over the coffee table.

[CDB]

vicious713 said:

xD Thanks!

"So i see" Said the blind man, who tripped over the coffee table.

Your welcome.

And hey I'd just got an idea for a Shego Valetines Day pic. ;D

[VICIOUS]

Uh Oh >.>

[CDB]

vicious713 said:

Uh Oh >.>

Heheheh, to late.

EDIT:

Sorry about that my browser is messing up. Anyways, here's the idea and it's a simple one. Non shipping included.

Shego's in her regular attire, layng down on her stomach, eating chocolates out of a heart shaped box.

She has saracstic look on her face and is saying.

"Forget flowers or all the cheap gifts. I'm just in it for the chocolate!!"

[VICIOUS]

xD Have fun with that >.> I was thinking of something that Involved drakken, and pain

[CDB]

vicious713 said:

xD Have fun with that >.> I was thinking of something that Involved drakken, and pain

Alright.

And oh and let me guess the words Coco-Moo were involved in that idea of yours. I'd loved that espiode.

[drakkenlover]

THe SHEGO-NESS IS AWESOME!

THANK YOU!

[aliciamartin]

i just love your art you should go on Da Art