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Post by shallow15 on Feb 23, 2007 22:13:06 GMT -5
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Post by DanMat6288 on Feb 23, 2007 22:48:04 GMT -5
Motor Ed and Professor Dementor look great. Gill looks pretty good. Monkey Fist has a big head. XD
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Post by VICIOUS on Feb 23, 2007 23:36:09 GMT -5
Demonter looks perfect, but he's short.. You do need to make your heads quite a bit smaller, also, try to decrease the exaggeration of the curves there, looks like Monty and Ed have boobs  |
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Post by shallow15 on Feb 24, 2007 6:11:35 GMT -5
Yeah, Monty was the first one I took a crack at, and since he's got the weirdest shaped head of the four of them, I hedged my bets in terms of making sure I had enough space for his facial features.
My problem is I either end up with really huge heads, or heads that are too darn small for all the features of the face. And I cannot draw hands to save my life.
It also doesn't help that my spatial sense is somewhat impaired (and I don't mean in terms of just drawing, I have a problem with it in everyday life as well. I am a total klutz because of it.)
Still, as I said, first attempts for any of these guys, the critiques have been noted and taken into account for future pics.
Thanks
---Erin M.
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Fusion Fox
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Not a bad problem to have if you ask me.
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Post by Fusion Fox on Feb 24, 2007 8:39:33 GMT -5
You could always draw a big head with room for the facial features and then draw a big body too  |
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Post by shallow15 on Feb 24, 2007 8:56:35 GMT -5
You could always draw a big head with room for the facial features and then draw a big body too Well, if I could do THAT then the heads wouldn't look so big, now would they?  --Erin M. |
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Fusion Fox
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Not a bad problem to have if you ask me.
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Post by Fusion Fox on Feb 24, 2007 9:27:28 GMT -5
You could always draw a big head with room for the facial features and then draw a big body too Well, if I could do THAT then the heads wouldn't look so big, now would they? --Erin M. Exactly ;D I was trying to offer a solution for the problem  |
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Post by shallow15 on Feb 24, 2007 9:31:13 GMT -5
I know. I was being moderately sarcastic. I do that.
Seriously though, as I mentioned, I have a problem with spatial relationships. It's very rare that any of my drawings end up with ideal proportions, which is why I made a big deal about these because these are the closest I've gotten in a long while with first attempts.
It's also why I dread doing action poses because those almost NEVER turn out right no matter how much time I take working on them.
--Erin M.
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Post by aliciamartin on Feb 24, 2007 10:53:05 GMT -5
wow your good keep it up  |
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Post by VICIOUS on Feb 24, 2007 11:05:23 GMT -5
Well, for the four main characters, you can use this simple rule of thumb: Top of the head-the naval is equal to the same distance from the naval to the bottom of the foot..
You can't really use that for characters like Ed and such though, on account their so buffed out, they make the legs exageratingly short to bring attention to their more dominant physical attributes, and the same for Dementor.
You need to understand the proportions before ya go into Action poses, as those usually require a familiarity with perspective and fore-shortening. :3
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Post by Lord FunkyHoof on Feb 24, 2007 14:09:30 GMT -5
Well as the title says, these are really good for first attempts, and I think Vicious pretty much nailed what I Had to say ^^; Keep on practicing!
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Post by nabusan on Feb 24, 2007 23:33:49 GMT -5
Your Monkey Fist is shexy!
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Post by Warbandit on Feb 27, 2007 12:59:27 GMT -5
Hey, those are really awesome! I can't for the life of my draw Monkey Fist or Motor Ed...but you got them pretty well Great job |
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