ss3dj
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Post by ss3dj on Apr 18, 2007 21:42:07 GMT -5
this is a kim possible comic i am working on. I'm doing it in manga form. The title is Dr. Death. I hope when i get pages up you'll will like it. please leave a review! oh here's the link www.deviantart.com/deviation/53511237/ |
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Post by jao on Apr 18, 2007 22:43:26 GMT -5
Ooo very interesting! Just as a friendly tip tho. In composit pics like that, line variation can help a lot to make something stand out. With the lines the same and all the texturing, they blend togehter a bit. The bottom left corner is kinda blank too, which throws off the visual balance. But boy, I know how hard composit pics can be and you did a really good job =D Oh! And while it's not exactly manga, I suggest the web comic Girly[/u][/url] for refrence and good example of tones. I've been studying it a lot myself recently to try and figure out the methods this artist uses in his comics with tones. I can't wait to check out your comic! <33 |
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Post by ss3dj on Apr 19, 2007 0:02:19 GMT -5
thanks
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Post by unferthidol on Apr 19, 2007 20:47:06 GMT -5
That's actually pretty sweet. You going to update this thread whenever you post a new page or nah?
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ss3dj
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Post by ss3dj on Apr 19, 2007 21:59:19 GMT -5
yeah i will
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Post by ss3dj on Apr 23, 2007 20:15:38 GMT -5
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Post by blak on Apr 28, 2007 18:28:41 GMT -5
The villain in the cover reminds one of the preliminary character's design for Drakken on Stephen Silver's website...great work though.  |
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Post by ss3dj on Apr 28, 2007 22:00:54 GMT -5
whoa he does...wow.
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