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Post by Nueva Paz on May 10, 2007 23:50:36 GMT -5
Well...the thing is...I've never been able to succesfully draw legs in that position myself. So I can't help you on that... I think, though, it's where it appears to be bending. It looks like her leg is bending at the thigh. I don't think we should be able to see the under part of her leg like that. It might be easier if you just switched legs, so her right leg is crossed over the left one, instead of how you have it now. Still not an easy position to pull off, though...
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Post by VICIOUS on May 11, 2007 0:01:26 GMT -5
Well...the thing is...I've never been able to succesfully draw legs in that position myself. So I can't help you on that... I think, though, it's where it appears to be bending. It looks like her leg is bending at the thigh. I don't think we should be able to see the under part of her leg like that. It might be easier if you just switched legs, so her right leg is crossed over the left one, instead of how you have it now. Still not an easy position to pull off, though... Actually, i didn't think about where it's bending from, i'll try and fix it. and drawing it the other way would be easier, but then it'd be giving people like CDB ammunition xD
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Post by Nueva Paz on May 11, 2007 0:21:05 GMT -5
CDB ammunition?
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Post by VICIOUS on May 11, 2007 0:25:31 GMT -5
It'd be giving the pervier people something to tease me about xD
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Post by Nueva Paz on May 11, 2007 0:36:17 GMT -5
Okay? Oh. Hmm... Didn't think about that.
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Post by CDB on May 11, 2007 11:17:20 GMT -5
Actually, i didn't think about where it's bending from, i'll try and fix it. and drawing it the other way would be easier, but then it'd be giving people like CDB ammunition xD Judas! Hahaha, great cover for the comic. I'm glad my you liked my idea and I'm sorry that the reference pic was a bit suggestive, I didn't catch that part . I was focused on the pose and how it would translate over for Ms. Go.
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Post by VICIOUS on May 11, 2007 13:04:59 GMT -5
Actually, i didn't think about where it's bending from, i'll try and fix it. and drawing it the other way would be easier, but then it'd be giving people like CDB ammunition xD Judas! Hahaha, great cover for the comic. I'm glad my you liked my idea and I'm sorry that the reference pic was a bit suggestive, I didn't catch that part . I was focused on the pose and how it would translate over for Ms. Go. xD It's allright, i fixed those two bits anyways. So i'm off to inking and coloring i suppose :3
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Post by CDB on May 11, 2007 13:51:45 GMT -5
xD It's allright, i fixed those two bits anyways. So i'm off to inking and coloring i suppose :3 Cool. Ah is forgiven. *Calls off Jihad against Vicious*
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Post by beeftony on May 11, 2007 14:20:16 GMT -5
Tilt her leg a few degrees to the right. That should fix the problem.
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Post by VICIOUS on May 11, 2007 14:54:57 GMT -5
Tilting her leg would make me have to completly erase it first O.o >.> If this isn't better i'll try it out.
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Post by beeftony on May 11, 2007 15:23:20 GMT -5
Well, her thigh is fixed, but now the lower part of her leg is bending at an odd angle from the knee. Raise it up a couple degrees.
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Post by VICIOUS on May 11, 2007 16:05:38 GMT -5
whaddya mean?
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Post by CDB on May 11, 2007 16:36:50 GMT -5
Tilting her leg would make me have to completly erase it first O.o >.> If this isn't better i'll try it out. Nice improvement, Vicious.
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Post by Nueva Paz on May 11, 2007 19:04:23 GMT -5
It still looks awkward to me. Tilt her leg a few degrees to the right. That should fix the problem. I think he means her leg needs to be raised a bit, or maybe just the knee.
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Post by beeftony on May 11, 2007 20:34:18 GMT -5
I mean that the joint in her knee seems to be bending sideways. It may be due to the fact that you haven't clearly defined where her knee is and I'm just assuming that it's at the point where her leg bends. Perhaps if you drew in the kneecap you could get away with it.
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Post by VICIOUS on May 11, 2007 20:35:11 GMT -5
I mean that her knee seems to be bending sideways. It may be due to the fact that you haven't clearly defined where her knee is and I'm just assuming that it's at the point where her leg bends. Perhaps if you drew in the kneecap you could get away with it. Implied shading could fix that
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Post by beeftony on May 11, 2007 20:46:26 GMT -5
Okay, so after some fiddling with MS Paint (I'm a writer, not an artist), I think I can finally show you what I mean. I've circled the area where I assumed her knee to be. Another detail I noticed is that her foot isn't angled the same as her leg, which causes more weirdness with impossible body positions. Of course, as you haven't defined where her shin is, I could be misreading it as is possible with the knee. I'm just noticing that it curves too soon, making her position very awkward. I suggest fixing that. Yeah, in case you haven't noticed by now, I tend to overanalyze things. ;D I can't draw worth crap, though, so take my opinions with a grain of salt.
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Post by Nueva Paz on May 11, 2007 20:54:33 GMT -5
I'm thinking maybe you just need to fix the foreshortening or something....
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Post by sitchit on May 12, 2007 1:10:31 GMT -5
I really hope you don't find this too rude of me, considering this'll be my third post but I'd really like to help you out with her legs. I did this quick paintover to maybe suggest a different way to think about the problem. Granted, my style is much more "blocky" than yours but it's just another way to approach the pose and hopefully something that might help Either way, I'm really looking forward to this project, the thumbnails you've posted have me yearning for more!
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Post by beeftony on May 12, 2007 1:20:47 GMT -5
I can't believe I'm just noticing this now. Maybe because her legs were so freakish earlier....
WTF is wrong with her head?! It's way too big and disproportionate to her body as drawn. It needs to shrink by at least 40 percent. Ron's the only one who gets "big-heady." ;D
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