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Post by Nueva Paz on May 12, 2007 1:25:41 GMT -5
You see, I think you can get her right leg to be crossed without, y'know, showing anything, if you did it right.
And beeftony is right. I knew there was something about her head and face that bothered me, and now I know what it is.
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Post by VICIOUS on May 12, 2007 10:32:05 GMT -5
I can't believe I'm just noticing this now. Maybe because her legs were so freakish earlier.... WTF is wrong with her head?! It's way too big and disproportionate to her body as drawn. It needs to shrink by at least 40 percent. Ron's the only one who gets "big-heady." ;D The whole head thing hits ya pretty hard in kp style >.>;; I'll redraw the pic i guess. Thanks for the paint over there, that really helps ^^ |
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Post by VICIOUS on May 12, 2007 12:17:30 GMT -5
 Here, i completely redraw shego, a bit snarkier and less excited is suppose. I fixed the legs, the hand, i don't think i can make the head much smaller without changing silvers style too much o.O; |
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Post by CDB on May 12, 2007 12:55:32 GMT -5
She does appear to look a bit sinister but the proportions have defintely been improved.
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Post by Nueva Paz on May 12, 2007 23:09:18 GMT -5
That is definately MUCH better. You really pulled off the position of the legs this time. Although her lower half seems a bit small compared to the rest of her, somehow. But that could just be the position. I dunno, it's like, when I look at it as a whole, it looks fine. But when I focus on different parts, something seems slightly off somehow...Maybe I'm just imagining things...So, I dunno...But it looks quite good for the most part. I can't find anything else wrong.
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Post by beeftony on May 13, 2007 0:23:29 GMT -5
Better, but now the legs are kinda uneven. Her right leg is too thick, and her left leg is too thin. You need to either split the difference, or make her skirt longer so that it covers where her legs converge. I'd go with the first option. *wishes that there was an "evil grin" smiley*
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Post by Nueva Paz on May 13, 2007 0:34:28 GMT -5
Better, but now the legs are kinda uneven. Her right leg is too thick, and her left leg is too thin. You need to either split the difference, or make her skirt longer so that it covers where her legs converge. I'd go with the first option. *wishes that there was an "evil grin" smiley* Hmm, you know what? I think that's what it was I was seeing, and just not reading it quite right. |
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Post by VICIOUS on May 13, 2007 10:11:35 GMT -5
How about i just do a different pose altogether?  |
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Post by CDB on May 14, 2007 10:43:43 GMT -5
How about i just do a different pose altogether? I love both poses and in my opinion, I know you worked hard on modifying the previous two, but I feel that you should go with this one. And you can use the other two as credit pages. , |
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Post by CDB on May 16, 2007 12:25:56 GMT -5
A generous bump for good ol' Vicious.  |
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