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Post by aliciamartin on Nov 23, 2005 19:46:16 GMT -5
love it can't wait for the next one  ;D |
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Post by Quin Separable on Nov 23, 2005 19:57:13 GMT -5
Great chapter captain! I love how you kept Shego and Drakken in character but still put them into a whole new situation. Great work! I can't wait until the next one!
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Post by gergegtwe on Nov 26, 2005 17:23:59 GMT -5
look man i like all story but is not the same ther not funny eny more there are i dont know but ron haveto be more funny kow what i'm saying
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Post by locote for life on Nov 28, 2005 22:51:54 GMT -5
;)well im trying to say that you guys should make the story more funny but i still like the story but i just whant it more funny thanks |
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Post by fgjfj on Nov 30, 2005 10:41:34 GMT -5
hellllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllloooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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Post by aliciamartin on Nov 30, 2005 15:32:03 GMT -5
can't wait for the next chapter |
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Post by impossiblegirl on Dec 1, 2005 12:06:54 GMT -5
Great Chapter 7! I can't wait to read Chapter 8!
TTYL,
Impossiblegirl
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Post by wolfdog72 on Dec 6, 2005 21:25:13 GMT -5
I love that story i wish they turned it into a movie.
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Dec 6, 2005 21:29:31 GMT -5
that would ROCK!!! ;D
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Post by TuLsAdLaNcE on Dec 6, 2005 21:41:00 GMT -5
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Post by captainkodak1 on Dec 6, 2005 23:22:18 GMT -5
Thanks for all the comments everyone. I have just about finished the draft of Chapter 8. It's going to be a big one. Not the biggest but getting there. Some suprises coming and plenty of action. Rich and I are working hard to bring you this next chapter.
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Post by Raptor™ on Dec 7, 2005 9:47:36 GMT -5
Great story!!!!!! ;D I'm wondering who this new character is and how big of a role he plays....
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Post by aliciamartin on Dec 7, 2005 11:47:05 GMT -5
i still can't wait for chapter eight ;D
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Post by PossibleKim on Dec 7, 2005 17:56:53 GMT -5
I doubt it will go any longer. Maybe it will end at chapter ten after all, the Boss is already revealed
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Post by Raptor™ on Dec 7, 2005 22:46:39 GMT -5
Is he revealed?  must have missed that..... Who is he or she??? |
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Dec 8, 2005 13:35:49 GMT -5
isint it Gill?
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Post by PossibleKim on Dec 8, 2005 17:00:59 GMT -5
Nah, it was that Nichole guy or something like that
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Post by Raptor™ on Dec 12, 2005 7:33:15 GMT -5
Nah, I dont think so. I think Gill metioned he was working under someone. And I dont think Gill has what it takes to be a boss of a great story such as this. No offense, he may be a great villian but I dont see him as a great boss. |
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Dec 12, 2005 23:05:16 GMT -5
oh ya. your right. sorry.  |
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Post by Raptor™ on Dec 13, 2005 8:54:43 GMT -5
oh ya. your right. sorry. It's OK..... ;D |
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must have missed that..... Who is he or she???