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Post by The Ron man on Dec 18, 2005 8:59:37 GMT -5
:the story is BADICAL!!!!!! i can't say anything else but BOOYAH!!! ;D
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Post by Red on Dec 18, 2005 20:21:18 GMT -5
Indeed Badical! I am loving this story
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Post by captainkodak1 on Dec 23, 2005 22:59:06 GMT -5
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Post by Red on Dec 23, 2005 23:17:56 GMT -5
Wow , That has to be my favorite chapter so far. I can't say it enough I LOVE THIS STORY! ;D
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Post by Quin Separable on Dec 24, 2005 0:22:43 GMT -5
Wow captainkodak1! That was an intense chapter!!! Awesomeness! Thanks a lot!
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Post by Ezbok58a on Dec 24, 2005 0:24:26 GMT -5
Nice chapter, I like the way this is going.
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Post by iluvredheads07 on Dec 24, 2005 1:09:45 GMT -5
That chapter rocked!
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Molloy
Yellow Trout
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Post by Molloy on Dec 24, 2005 2:29:13 GMT -5
I agree with what has been said by everyone so far about chapter eight ... best so far. Plenty of action and drama but also balanced with humor. My one complaint about some of the earlier chapters was that things were far too serious ... very well done here.
I was a little disappointed that no horse cries could be heard when Frau Blucker was introduced. I took her character to be a reference to "Young Frankenstein" --- "Call it a hunch."
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Post by trollis on Dec 24, 2005 4:37:01 GMT -5
I can only agree with everyone above Nice job. MvH Anders "Trollis" Bernhardsson
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Post by kimmyfan48 on Dec 24, 2005 10:02:20 GMT -5
Yet another great chapter done with extreme excitement!
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Post by aliciamartin on Dec 24, 2005 11:06:49 GMT -5
love the story
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Post by PossibleKim on Dec 24, 2005 15:22:44 GMT -5
I was right about Nichole atuff. however, I never thought the stiry would grab this much of my attention
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Post by Kayleigh on Dec 24, 2005 15:27:47 GMT -5
AWESOME! ;D Great chapter. Very actiony... lol, is that even a word? haha...
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Post by aliciamartin on Dec 24, 2005 16:32:25 GMT -5
now i can't wait for the next chapter of this story ;D
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Post by Raptor™ on Dec 25, 2005 13:37:29 GMT -5
Great!!!! Nice planning on the villians too. ;D Never thought Shego would save Team Possible..... Can't wait for the next chapter.....
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Post by captainkodak1 on Jan 11, 2006 22:35:56 GMT -5
Hey, folks, just a little update. Rich and I are back hard at work getting chapter 9 ready. This is it folks. The final chapter. We have been planning this chapter from the very beginning getting ideas all along and adding them. It will be a very interesting chapter. The Final Battle folks. It's gonna be big. Explosions, fights, sacrifice and love. Stay tuned.
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Post by trollis on Jan 12, 2006 0:39:24 GMT -5
Can´t wait to read it MvH Anders "Trollis" Bernhardsson
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Jan 12, 2006 22:39:36 GMT -5
OMG!!!!! Oh man!!!! that was a GREAT chapter and I soooo cant wait for the next and final one!!!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D and yet I dont want it to come! cuz that will be it! gone! over! the varry last, final, ending........
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Post by Quin Separable on Jan 15, 2006 12:11:59 GMT -5
Looking forward to it captain! Can't wait to see what you and Rich have in store!
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Post by aliciamartin on Jan 23, 2006 10:29:57 GMT -5
i hope the next chapter will come soon
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