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Post by T Anderson on Nov 28, 2005 0:01:29 GMT -5
Dude, baptism of fire is an understatement. We had an incident about a year ago where one of our troopers found a few machine guns in the trunk of a guy's car, but nothing like that! Did you make all that up for the story, or is some of it based on a real incident? Either way, I can't wait to see what else you're gonna have Kim and Ron go up against. Keep up the good work.
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 28, 2005 17:10:56 GMT -5
Nice, I always hear about raids on houses where weapons were found, but nothing like that!
:0 Wow.
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Post by taechunsa on Nov 28, 2005 19:16:51 GMT -5
I am interested in why you chose to write this as an AU. Was this a conscious decision? Up until this last chapter I just figured it took place after StD, but the whole Josh thing shoots the story back to season two. I found that to be an interesting choice.
Oh, good job.
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Post by recon228 on Nov 29, 2005 1:39:52 GMT -5
That entire incident was based on an actual case I worked with my old department! Aside from the names being changed ( Obviously), everything else really occurred... including the Kevlar in the walls, the 30mm automatic cannon, and the ATF agent discharging the Streetsweeper into the front lawn ( He actually fired it into a pool in real life, but I went with the lawn because I felt it was funnier. ;D). Yeah, that was a deliberate choice... I felt that if I started early in the series, I could add more storyline regarding Kim and Ron's developing relationship. Plus with Josh still in the picture, there's bound to be some drama!
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 29, 2005 18:34:33 GMT -5
Something tells me that the drama you have instored for Josh is going to be alot different than the drama I have instore for Josh.
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Post by recon228 on Nov 29, 2005 22:04:36 GMT -5
Something tells me that the drama you have instored for Josh is going to be alot different than the drama I have instore for Josh. Yeah, probably...
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 30, 2005 21:35:11 GMT -5
;D
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