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Post by recon228 on Jun 13, 2005 23:19:43 GMT -5
Here's a link to my newest KP fanfiction on FF.net - Kim Possible: The Thin Blue LineSynopsis: Following a global crackdown on all worldwide super-villains, Kim and Ron find themselves out of work in the hero division. Kim... of course... takes the news rather hard and, in an attempt to bring her out of her funk, Ron suggests volunteer work for the Middleton Police Department in order to "save the world one citizen at a time ". However, serving and protecting the community you live in can be much more complicated than you think...Check it out and let me know what you think... it's rated 'T' ( PG-13) so keep that in mind... |
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Post by Mobius on Jun 14, 2005 18:58:40 GMT -5
I like it. I cannot wait to see the rest of this story. You have done a wonderful job bring out aspects of police work.
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Post by recon228 on Jun 14, 2005 19:34:36 GMT -5
I like it. I cannot wait to see the rest of this story. You have done a wonderful job bring out aspects of police work. Thanks... my primary goal in this story is to show what local law enforcement is truly all about; the humor, the tragedy, the tedious, and the dangerous... all experienced through Kim and Ron's perspective. They will also have to deal with the fact that they are working in the same town they live and attend school in... so there will obviously be some conflict there. |
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Post by Mobius on Jun 14, 2005 20:58:05 GMT -5
Police work and conflict kind of go together, even for the family members.
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Post by recon228 on Jun 14, 2005 22:22:24 GMT -5
Police work and conflict kind of go together, even for the family members. Oh yeah... there's even more conflict when you're still in high school. |
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Post by Felix on Jun 16, 2005 14:58:08 GMT -5
When will the second chapter be up?
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Post by recon228 on Jun 16, 2005 15:07:01 GMT -5
I should have chapter 1 up within a few days... provided I can get my reports done at work and not have to type them up at home.  Cross your fingers that today remains quiet...  |
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Post by Felix on Jun 16, 2005 15:20:05 GMT -5
My fingers are officially crossed and I've even crossed my toes too.
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Post by recon228 on Jun 24, 2005 2:31:22 GMT -5
Guess what? I finally got Ch.1 up and posted over at FF.net. Check it out...
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Post by Mobius on Jun 24, 2005 8:47:40 GMT -5
Great chapter. You played with the emotion just right, worked really well.
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Post by molonuk on Jun 24, 2005 10:06:22 GMT -5
Sounds interesting, I shall read it after my dinner!
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Post by recon228 on Jun 24, 2005 13:04:48 GMT -5
Great chapter. You played with the emotion just right, worked really well. Thank you... glad you're enjoying it. |
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Post by molonuk on Jun 24, 2005 15:55:43 GMT -5
Read the prolouge, and enjoyed very much. Nice to see Kim and Ron in more real life sitch's.
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Post by recon228 on Jun 26, 2005 1:25:34 GMT -5
Read the prolouge, and enjoyed very much. Nice to see Kim and Ron in more real life sitch's. Glad you like it... |
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Post by recon228 on Jul 24, 2005 20:49:16 GMT -5
Well, after much delay (And a bit of procrastination) I finally managed to get Ch. 2 posted over at FF.net. I just put it up about a minute ago (As in: 60 seconds ago), so if it hasn't shown up yet just try back later.
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Post by recon228 on Oct 3, 2005 21:13:12 GMT -5
Guess what? I'm back... and I brought Ch. 3 with me! It's posted over at FF.net for anyone who wants to read it. Also, fellow KP fanartist EddieButlerIII just came up with an awesome looking Title Shot for this story... you can find it Here on his deviantART page. |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 4, 2005 16:09:34 GMT -5
Very good, I have had a KP police story brewing for a while now, however mine involves State Troopers instead of Middleton PD.
I'm trying to get as many facts together as I can so it sounds authentic.
My reasons for them becoming LEO's is similar to yours, but differs slightly (I had the idea before I read your story, so I'm not copying you in any way)
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Post by recon228 on Oct 4, 2005 22:08:11 GMT -5
Very good, I have had a KP police story brewing for a while now, however mine involves State Troopers instead of Middleton PD. I'm trying to get as many facts together as I can so it sounds authentic. My reasons for them becoming LEO's is similar to yours, but differs slightly (I had the idea before I read your story, so I'm not copying you in any way) Thanks for the comment and review... feel free to drop me a line if you have any procedural questions about your story. |
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Post by recon228 on Nov 7, 2005 4:22:10 GMT -5
Guess what? Ch. 4 is up and posted over at FF.net. Check it out here... |
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Post by recon228 on Nov 27, 2005 18:28:04 GMT -5
Ch. 5 is now up and posted over at FF.net. Check it out here... Three words - Baptism of fire!
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