Kim Possible: A New Foe

[Ishida Mitsunari]

KIM POSSIBLE: A NEW FOE



(((A/N: Okay everyone here is my first Fanfic! I am still experimenting with writing styles and this one will have a script format, let me know how it is.)))


(Setting: A large domed purple lair in the jungle. DRAKKEN is on a high platform watching his minions scurry about. SHEGO is at the base of the platform within yelling range of DRAKKEN)

DRAKKEN: (thinking) KIM POSSIBLE! How I hate that all that teen! Every plan I make she foils! I must defeat her! But how?...

(DRAKKEN paces back and forth going through every idea that pops in his head and discards them one by one. Suddenly he stops, grins, and calls for his assistant)

DRAKKEN: SHEGO!

(SHEGO looks at DRAKKEN annoyed and walks up to him)

SHEGO: What is it, DRAKKEN?

(DRAKKEN prances gleefully and claps his hands before speaking)

DRAKKEN: SHEGO suppose the only way to defeat our teenage foe is with another teenager….

(SHEGO thinks for a moment then her eyes go wide)

SHEGO: Oh, no, no, no, no!!! You are not making me KIM POSSIBLE’s age DRAKKEN!!! No, no, no, no!!!

(SHEGO turns to leave but is blocked by DRAKKEN)

DRAKKEN: I am not talking about making you younger SHEGO! I am talking about my… niece

(SHEGO stares at DRAKKEN in shock)

SHEGO: You have a niece? You mean your Mama had other kids besides you?

DRAKKEN: Yes is that so hard to imagine?

(SHEGO gives DRAKKEN a look)

SHEGO: Do you really want to know the answer to that?

(DRAKKEN gives SHEGO a look then shakes his head)

DRAKKEN: Regardless of what may think SHEGO I do have an older brother, DAVID. My niece ALEXANDRA is his first born daughter.

SHEGO: So what makes you think she’ll help you DRAKKEN?

DRAKKEN: ALEXANDRA will do anything for her dearest uncle DREW. Not only that but DAVID keeps her clueless as to what I do.

SHEGO: So your niece as no idea you seek to rule the world?

DRAKKEN: Precisely, SHEGO

SHEGO: (raising her eyebrow quizzically) And what makes you think ALEXANDRA will even be of any help against KIMMIE?

DRAKKEN: She’s trained hard in several martial arts SHEGO; her moves are amazing from what DAVID has sent me. KIM POSSIBLE will be no match for ALEXANDRA LIPSKY!

(DRAKKEN then throws his head back and lets out a long villainous laugh. SHEGO rolls her eyes and mentally puts the scheme under “failed”)



(((A/N: well that’s the first chappie! Please read and review)))

[Falling-Pixie]

Cool! I like it. That is a good writing tec. I use it too. Keep going! I cant waght for more! ;D

[Ishida Mitsunari]

(((A/N: Okay everyone here is my second chappie! Enjoy!)))


(Setting: A forest park in the middle of a city. DRAKKEN is setting on a bench and SHEGO is waiting nearby in the shadows.)

DRAKKEN: (thinking) it has been so long since ALEXANDRA has seen me. I hope she recognizes me enough for this to work.

(Suddenly there is a short gasp heard off in the distance as a teenage girl baring a resemblance to DRAKKEN sees him, then comes running. DRAKKEN stands up and “oofs” as the girl runs into him)

ALEXANDRA: Uncle DREW!!! I don’t believe it, your really here! (Gasps) and you’re really blue? I didn’t want to believe it… I thought Daddy didn’t mean it literally…

(DRAKKEN chuckles as ALEXANDRA’S speech dissolved into happy chattering. Then he clears his throat)

DRAKKEN: I am happy to see you too after all this time ALEXANDRA. I’ll admit I did not think you’d recognize with this blue skin…

ALEXANDRA: Well I recognized you Uncle DREW! How did you turn blue anyway?

(DRAKKEN takes a deep breath)

DRAKKEN: Well ALEXANDRA I worked in a top-secret military installation doing top-secret military scientific work. And a… accident happened

ALEXANDRA: (gasps) you really worked in a government project Uncle DREW?

(DRAKKEN suppresses a smile as his niece buys into his story hook, line, and sinker)

DRAKKEN: yes ALEXANDRA I really did work on government work

ALEXANDRA: what happened after the accident Uncle DREW?

DRAKKEN: I was discharged from the project, and in the years since then I have successfully started my own lab.

ALEXANDRA: wow Uncle DREW, that’s amazing!

DRAKKEN: (shifts in his seat in fake discomfort)

ALEXANDRA: (looking concerned) what’s wrong Uncle DREW?

DRAKKEN: ALEXANDRA I’ll be frank here, I arranged for this meeting because I wanted to ask you to help me out…

ALEXANDRA: (still concerned) with what Uncle DREW?

DRAKKEN: I have a problem with a couple of teenage robbers at the lab… No matter what security measures I use they always get past them and make off with something valuable.

(ALEXANDRA looks scared, then determined. She squares her shoulders)

ALEXANDRA: Uncle DREW you don’t have to ask. I’ll help you out with the robbers, what kind of weapons do they carry?

(DRAKKEN grins broadly before putting an arm on ALEXANDRA’S shoulder)

DRAKKEN: thank you very much ALEXANDRA for your help, I really need it. The robbers don’t carry weapons; these are kung-fu robbers were talking about.

ALEXANDRA: (puzzled expression) Kung-fu robbers?

DRAKKEN: (serious face) Kung-fu robbers

DRAKKEN: (clearing his throat) I’ve seen your moves ALEXANDRA, I know you can put an end to the plague that is KIM POSSIBLE and her boyfriend!

(DRAKKEN starts to go into villainous laugh mode, but stops himself when he remembers ALEXANDRA whose face is shocked white)

ALEXANDRA: (gasps) KIM POSSIBLE? But Uncle DREW, KIM POSSIBLE is a hero. She does not steal (falters) does she?

DRAKKEN: (badly conceals his shock that ALEXANDRA knows of KIM POSSIBLE, then feigns sadness) I know ALEXANDRA, I can hardly believe it myself but it is KIM POSSIBLE who constantly raids my lab, my chief of security…. (Starts fidgeting uncomfortably as he struggles to make up a name for SHEGO)

(SHEGO steps out of the dark and puts herself between DRAKKEN and ALEXANDRA)

SHEGO: … SHELIA GONZALES, I’m your uncle’s chief of security. (Puts out her hand)

ALEXANDRA: (shaking SHEGO’S hand in suprise) Are you certain it’s KIM POSSIBLE that’s raiding Uncle’s lab Ms. GONZALES?

SHEGO: (voice dripping with contempt for KIM) Oh I’m sure of it Ms. LIPSKY.

(ALEXANDRA sighs, then straightens)

ALEXANDRA: It is a sad day when you find out your hero has turned bad… But I’ll help you put a stop to KIM’S stealing Uncle DREW.

DRAKKEN: (smiling with glee) Perfect! SHELIA do me a favor and escort my niece to the flying machine!

(SHEGO takes a very nervous ALEXANDRA to the flying machine while DRAKKEN prances about a tree in victory)

DRAKKEN: (thinking) soon you will be out of my hair forever KIM POSSIBLE! Bwhahahahahaha!!!

[Falling-Pixie]

OH NOO!!!!! He convenced her that Kim is evel!!! AHHH!!!!! and awww... Kim was her hero! I hope Kim can get the facts strate with Alexandra! MORE!!!! Ya the way you type is like me too. but you can spell. I cant! can you read mine? it's Christina's Ron Stoppable Movie: Taking Over. pluz?


oh and MORE!!! ;D This is SOOOO GOOD!!!!! ;D

[Ishida Mitsunari]

(((A/N: Third Chappie... I’m on fire with this writing bug! By the way I am going to try to write my first fight scene here, so….)))



(SETTING: DRAKKEN’S huge domed purple lair, underground. DRAKKEN has ALEXANDRA strapped to a chair that looks like the ones dentists use. She is encased in form fitting blue battle armor and DRAKKEN is currently preparing a pair of gloves.)

ALEXANDRA: (nervous and sweating) Uncle DREW… I don’t know if this whole “superpower” gloves thing is a good idea

DRAKKEN: (offended) ALEXANDRA I’m your uncle! I am doing this to protect you from KIM POSSIBLE and that super suit of hers. Now be still!

(ALEXANDRA takes a deep breath and calms down; DRAKKEN slips a pair of blue gloves on her hands. The gloves make a zipping noise and fit snugly)

DRAKKEN: Alright ALEXANDRA, snap your fingers!

(ALEXANDRA looks confused but snaps her fingers, causing her hands to light up with black fire)

ALEXANDRA: (very afraid) Uncle DREW, what’s happening to me?

(As she says this the flame grows bigger, then smaller, then bigger again before finally shorting out)

DRAKKEN: (while kicking things) GAH!!! I thought this time for sure I’d do it!

SHEGO: (passing by the door) I told ya Doc, you’ll never do it!

(ALEXANDRA giggled as DRAKKEN tore about the room in anger, before finally coming back to her)

DRAKKEN: Alright ALEXANDRA you are free to do something till I work out the kinks in the gloves! (DRAKKEN removes the gloves and un-straps ALEXANDRA from the chair)

ALEXANDRA: All right Uncle DREW (ALEXANDRA leaves the room and goes the nearby gym)

(ALEXANDRA walks into the gym and picks up a quarterstaff, then trains with it)

SHEGO: (walking into the room and admiring ALEXANDRA’S quarterstaff skills) you’re pretty impressive with that stick kid! How about trying it out against a live opponent?

ALEXANDRA: (twirling the staff in front of her in a mocking gesture) Alright Ms. GONZLAES! Come on!

(SHEGO charged at ALEXANDRA, who blocked her with the staff. The fight started out slow, SHEGO made a blow, ALEXANDRA blocked. But after ten minutes ALEXANDRA went on the offensive and gradually stepped up her rate of attack at intervals. After 20 minutes ALEXANDRA’S rate of attack, thanks to DRAKKEN’S battle suit, was blindingly fast. SHEGO knew that she could lose, and she hated to lose. After safely jumping out of ALEXANDRA’S way SHEGO ignited her hands and jumped at ALEXANDRA again, grabbed the staff and broke it. SHEGO then gave ALEXANDRA a kick to the stomach, sending her into a wall)

DRAKKEN: (aghast at what he saw) SHELIA!!! What did I tell you about igniting your hands! (Walking up to ALEXANDRA) Are you alright LEXI?

SHEGO: (rolls her eyes at DRAKKEN’S nickname for ALEXANDRA)

ALEXANDRA: I am alright Uncle DREW (she gets up)

DRAKKEN: good, now go back to the chair, I’ve done so more work on the gloves.

(DRAKKEN smiles as ALEXANDRA leaves, once she’s out of earshot DRAKKEN turns to SHEGO, very angry)

DRAKKEN: SHEGO! I told you that you are to never hurt my niece under any circumstances! I need to her to defeat KIM POSSIBLE, how can she do that if you injured her SHEGO!

SHEGO: (angry) ALEXANDRA was going to beat me DRAKKEN! I hate losing!

(DRAKKEN looks at SHEGO sputtering before finally leaving)

DRAKKEN: (entering the room with the chair) Alright

ALEXANDRA lets try this again, and be still!

ALEXANDRA: (nods, though she is nervous) yes Uncle DREW

(Once again DRAKKEN fits the gloves on ALEXANDRA)

DRAKKEN: snap your fingers ALEXANDRA

(Alexandra snaps, and once again her hands are engulfed in black flame. As DRAKKEN and ALEXANDRA stare the flame stays consistent for five, then ten minutes)

DRAKKEN: It works!!! (Does a happy dance around ALEXANDRA in place of the evil laugh)

(ALEXANDRA looks at the mysterious black flame that engulfs her hands and suddenly becomes very scared)

ALEXANDRA: Uncle… how do I turn it off?

DRAKKEN; (suddenly stopping mid victory dance) just snap your fingers again

ALEXANDRA: (snaps fingers again then stares ahead thinking) there was something sinister about that black flame; I hope I never have to use it again

DRAKKEN: ALEXANDRA you should go to SHELIA’S gym to test out your new ability!

(Making a face of distaste while DRAKKEN’S back is turned ALEXANDRA sides out of the chair and exits the room for SHEGO’S private gym)

(A few moments after ALEXANDRA leaves so does DRAKKEN, who makes a beeline for the regular gym, where SHEGO is beating the stuffing out some test dummy)

DRAKKEN: (slightly nervous because of SHEGO’S temper) SHEGO, phase I of my plan is complete. Now initiate phase II

(SHEGO glares at DRAKKEN angrily but nods and leaves the room. DRAKKEN smiles evilly)




(SETTING: Middleton. RON STOPPABLE and KIM POSSIBLE are walking away from the school and back to home)


RON: …. so I figure we’d meet at Bueno Nacho in say five minutes KP?

KIM: (nods) that sounds good RON, see you in five

(KIM and RON are just about to separate when the familiar tone of the Kimmunicator rings out)

KIM: (drawing the Kimmunicator out of her pant pocket) what’s the sitch WADE?

WADE: There’s been a string of robberies at labs all over the world!

KIM: Any clues as to who the thief is?

WADE: Yep (pulls up a screen of claw marks in metal)

(KIM just stared at the marks and knew instantly who it was…)

KIM: SHEGO…

RON: SHEGO? Wow KIM I thought after you kicked her biscuit into that radio tower back a few months ago she would leave you alone

KIM: SHEGO does not know the meaning of give up RON

RON: (nodding his head) so… I get my super suit and you get yours and we meet back here in five?

KIM: See you in five RON

(KIM watches RON go then turns to the Kimmunicator)

KIM: WADE how fast can you locate DRAKKEN’S lab and get us a ride?

WADE: It shouldn’t take long KIM, 20 minutes tops

KIM: Thanks WADE, you rock


(((A/N: okay readers how was that, did I get Kim and Ron in character? I really worry about that! And the next chapter is Kim meets Alexandra!)))

[Aero Tendo]

That was a good story! I can't wait to read the next chapter!
I wonder if the black flame will affect Drakken's niece in any kind of way.
Please tell me the writing bug is still with you!

[Ishida Mitsunari]

Yay!!!!

New fan (does the Drakken victory dance)!!!!


Yeah the writing bug is still with me, but the real word made it impossible to write! But that's changed now, look foward to a new chappie tomorrow or friday.

Oh and about that Black Flame affecting Alexandra, wait and see..... (chuckles evilly)

[Falling-Pixie]

Oh sorry if I dident wright. Ive bin bussy! COOL! I bet it wasent Shego but it was Lexi!!!! AHH!! I hope Kim can get to he and talk some sence into her! Keep it up!!!!

[Ishida Mitsunari]

KIM POSSIBLE: A NEW FOE



(((A/N: Oke-day everybody here is that promised chapter. Please read and review. And let me know if everyone is in character and the fights are good!)))

(SETTING: A small plane far above the jungle. KIM is the cockpit with the pilot; RON is in the main hold)

KIM: Thanks again for the ride MR. GILBERT

MR. GILBERT: It is nothing KIMBERLY! After you saved my computer business it is least I can do!

KIM: Saving a computer business from a flash flood was no big!

KIM: How far are we from the jump?

MR. GILBERT: (checking equipment) 10 minutes KIMBERLY

(KIM nods and exits the cockpit to check up on RON, who is pacing)

RON: So how long KP?

KIM: (holding up her hands) ten minutes

RON: (uncertain) KIM I can’t shake the feeling that we are walking into a trap

KIM: (looking surprised) Why RON?

RON: (shrugging his shoulders) It just seems a little convenient KP, it’s like SHEGO wanted us to know it was her

KIM: (smiles reassuringly) I’m sure RON it is just SHEGO being sloppy

RON: (looking unconvinced) I’m not so sure KP

KIM: (sighs, rolls her eyes, and puts her hands on her hips)

(SETTING: DRAKKEN’S lair, a large empty room with massive piles of boxes everywhere, giving the room the look of a maze from above. DRAKKEN and SHEGO are standing in a control box high above the floor. ALEXANDRA is crouching hidden in the shadows, her right hand on her new black staff)

DRAKKEN: SHEGO are you sure that KIM POSSIBLE has been sighted outside the lab?

SHEGO: Want to check it yourself?

DRAKKEN: (grumbles indistinctly)

(Meanwhile KIM and RON enter the room)

DRAKKEN: (giddy with glee at the sight) hit the lights SHEGO!

(SHEGO hits the lights, causing KIM and RON momentary blindness)

DRAKKEN: (through the Intercom) well, well, well KIM POSSIBLE! You have fallen into my trap!

RON: (whispering) I told ya it was trap KP!

KIM: (whispering) RON shush!

DRAKKEN: Now you will meet your doom at the hands of my new security officer: ALEXANDRA!

(KIM and RON both look at each other confused while ALEXANDRA leaps over their heads. She lands feet first and lights her hands, then she reaches for her staff which blazes with black fire at her touch)

ALEXANDRA: (angry) now you will pay for your crimes KIM POSSIBLE! (ALEXANDRA flourishes the staff, which makes a sound similar to a light saber from Star Wars)

KIM: (confused) what crimes! I save the world from bad guys!

ALEXANDRA: (even angrier then before, which causes her black fire to flare up) you liar! You used to save the world, now you are just a petty thief! Stealing from good men like my Uncle DREW!

(Before KIM can react ALEXANDRA charges her twirling and swinging her staff with expert skill. KIM leaps out of the way but ALEXANDRA follows after her, using her momentum to propel her. KIM then starts to use her super suit to block some of ALEXANDRA’S blows while still dodging most of them. This continues for the next 10 minutes, and KIM finds it harder and harder to avoid getting hit by the nastier blows as ALEXANDRA gets faster and faster thanks to the suit she wears. KIM then does three black flips and lands on a pile of boxes)

KIM: (breathless) ALEXANDRA! Your uncle is not a good guy, your being tricked! He is really a mad scientist bent on global domination! I am trying to stop him!

ALEXANDRA: (whole body blazing with black fire now) don’t you dare bad mouth my uncle like that!

(ALEXANDRA then takes one hand off her staff and fires off a beam at KIM, who jumps out the way)

KIM: (thinking) hmm… every time she’s angry her flame flares up… I wonder….

(KIM and ALEXANDRA continue to fight while RON tries to find a way to locate DRAKKEN and SHEGO)

RON: (sneaking along a wall) gotta find a door gotta find a door… AHH!

(RON fell through the door he just activated, ending up a elevator that took him up to DRAKKEN and SHEGO’S control box)

DRAKKEN: (finishing his evil laugh)…. Soon SHEGO our teenage foe will be no more! The more KIM POSSIBLE angers ALEXANDRA the stronger her flames become as they feed and fuel on the anger. Soon enough not even her super suit can save KIM POSSIBLE! (Launches into another evil laugh)

SHEGO: Yeah as long as KIMMIE does not knock ALEXANDRA out or gets her to deactivate her flame…

DRAKKEN: (snorts) at the current level of anger she’s at SHEGO the only thing that can stop ALEXANDRA is my command (evil laugh)

(At this point RON charges into the room, having heard engouth)

DRAKKEN: (surprised to see RON) STOPPABLE! How did you get in here?!

RON: (going into a stance) dumb skillz!

DRAKKEN: GGGrrr… SHEGO!

SHEGO: (lighting her hands) with pleasure!

(SHEGO charges at RON, who to her surprise does not yell and flee but instead blocks her blows and throws some punches and kicks himself)

SHEGO: (surprised) since when did you learn to fight STOPPABLE?

RON: (blocking SHEGO’S moves) since KP told me to use my mad Monkey Kung Fu skillz more!

(SHEGO and RON continue to fight for few more minutes before SHEGO suddenly finds herself flying into DRAKKEN)

(RON wipes the sweat from his brow then reaches for Ronnunicator KIM gave him for their first anniversary together)

RON: WADE can you make my voice sound like DRAKKEN’S?

WADE: (surprised at the sudden request, but happy) of course RON… (Messes with his machinery) okay just speak through microphone attachment and you should sound like DRAKKEN.

(The Ronnunicator sprouts a mike which RON holds close to his mouth as he presses the big blue button labeled "Intercom")

RON: (with DRAKKEN’S voice) ALEXANDRA! Disengage from KIM POSSIBLE and deactivate your flame!

(Meanwhile on the floor ALEXANDRA has just given KIM a rather nasty kick into some boxes, which she is just emerging from when RON’S command with DRAKKEN’S voice comes out over the Intercom. Both KIM and ALEXANDRA are confused by this but ALEXANDRA puts her staff into the holster on her back, and then snaps her fingers again, causing the flame to dissipate.)

(ALEXANDRA then holds her head in confusion as a wave of sickness overwhelms her, she drops in a dead faint to the floor as RON runs onto the scene from the hidden elevator)



(((A/N: Okay that’s it for Chappie four folks! Next chapter… well wait and see!)))

[funbun]

Coolyo!!!! I like it. cant waght for the next chapter!

[Falling-Pixie]

!!!!!!!!!! COOL!!!!!!! I love how Ron fights Shego!!! I was chanting: GO RON!!! He is so smart!!!! MORE!!!!! This is getten better by the second!!!!!

[Ishida Mitsunari]

Attention!

My work is now up at Fanfic.net, look for Kim Possible: A New Foe by Ishida Mitsunari tomorrow morining!

ISHIDA!

[Falling-Pixie]

I just saw it there! cool! will you do it here too?

[Ishida Mitsunari]

Yep RonStoppable.net is were I will post new chappies first

[Falling-Pixie]

cool! ;D

[aliciamartin]

hey like your story are Drakken and Shego getting together in this one

[Ishida Mitsunari]

Ah....

I don't plan on them to, its little wierd for me wrap my mind around... EEH....

[Falling-Pixie]

ya me too. im not big on the D/S thing. I ALL for the K/R thing as you see every ware I type! ;D

[Kayleigh]

WOW... that's really good writing...I'm hooked on reading fanfics now... Post more!!!

[Ishida Mitsunari]

Heyja!


I got some bad news, due to real life constraints (last week of school here at Ceder Lake Academy) I will probably not be able to write my 5th chapter this week. If I get some free time I will write it....

Sorry folks