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Post by Falling-Pixie on Aug 21, 2005 14:25:08 GMT -5
Grate one! Love it! Finily Lexi is seeing things strate. At 1st I thought, when I saw KimPossible.com, It was going to be a trap too! But guss not! MORE!!! I want to see what hapens next!!! ;D ;D ;D ;D AH!!!!!!!!!
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Post by Ishida Mitsunari on Aug 25, 2005 8:21:39 GMT -5
KIM POSSIBLE: A NEW FOE
(((A/N: Chappie 9 folks. As always Read and Review)))
(SETTING: The Museum of Natural Art, Philadelphia. ALEXANDRA and SHEGO are on the roof of the building tracing out a circle with their plasma)
SHEGO: (upon finishing her half of the circle) Alright LIPSKY, now get your half done
ALEXANDRA: (finishing her half and rubbing her hands) Alright..... Done Ms GONZALES!
(SHEGO then stomps on the circle, creating a hole)
SHEGO: (as she jumps down) C’mon LIPSKY lets get what your Uncle wants and vamoose!
(SHEGO and ALEXANDRA repel down the rope and land in the middle of the room)
SHEGO: LIPSKY you take perimeter guard, I’ll get the diamond
ALEXANDRA: (nods and takes perimeter)
(SHEGO carefully lifts the diamond out of its holder and walks towards ALEXANDRA to put in the backpack she carries. Then the door slides open to reveal…)
KIM: Stop right there SHEGO!
SHEGO: (surprised) WHAT?! How did you manage to find out about this heist POSSIBLE?
KIM: (smiling) A little bird told me
(SHEGO growls and charges KIM but ALEXANDRA jumps in between them and takes stance)
SHEGO: (very angry) get out of my way LIPSKY!
ALEXANDRA: (defiant) NO!... SHEGO I can no longer aid you or my Uncle, I can not aid evil!
(SHEGO does not respond but gives ALEXANDRA a nasty punch in the stomach and engages KIM, driving her back)
(RON meanwhile sneaks around KIM & SHEGO and pulls ALEXANDRA out of harms way)
RON: (noticing ALEXANDRA is recovering) you okay ALEXANDRA?
ALEXANDRA: (nods her head) Ya I’ll be fine RON, now let’s help KIM
RON: Booyah! (High fives ALEXANDRA)
(ALEXANDRA & RON join the fight between KIM and SHEGO. The fight now goes decisively in favor of the good guys as SHEGO is unable to fight off all three. Jumping over to where the diamond dropped SHEGO scoops it up and into ALEXANDRA’S dropped backpack)
SHEGO: (laughing) well it’s been nice knowing ya! ( starts climbing the rope)
ALEXANDRA: (angry) No! I will not let this succeed (raises her hands and blasts the rope with black fire)
(SHEGO falls from the rope and lands with a thud, KIM & ALEXANDRA rushes over to bind her while RON calls the police)
KIM: (grateful) Thanks for the help ALEXANDRA (brushes a loose strand of hair out of her face) I must admit I thought this was a trap at first
ALEXANDRA: (dismissively waves her hand) It is… No big KIM (sighs) I was such a fool to let my Uncle trick me for so long (clenches her hands)
KIM: (gives ALEXANDRA a comforting smile)
(Before long the police arrive and take SHEGO to prison. ALEXANDRA turns to KIM)
ALEXANDRA: It won’t be long before my uncle learns what has happened here, if you want to catch him by surprise I suggest we move fast
KIM: (nods) Do you have a plan to get us there?
ALEXANDRA: Yeah I do but you won’t like it I’m afraid (nervously twirls a hair)
(A little while later in his lair DRAKKEN is just sitting down at his desk when a television beeps. DRAKKEN switches it on and sees ALEXANDRA at the helm of the flying car he sent her and SHEGO to the museum in)
DRAKKEN: Well LEXI what is it you wish to tell me?
ALEXANDRA: The plan has soured Uncle DREW
DRAKKEN: (upset) What?! (Holds his head) KIM POSSIBLE showed up didn’t she…?
ALEXANDRA: (nods) and she brought some police with her
DRAKKEN: (holding his head) So what happened?
ALEXANDRA: Well KIM defeated Ms GONZALES and the police dragged off to a van. But I was able to use my black fire to knock them all out; though I lost the diamond in process I was able to capture KIM and RON…. (View changes to KIM and RON, apparently knocked out, tied together behind ALEXANDRA)
DRAKKEN: (head shooting up and giddy with glee) You captured KIM POSSIBLE? This is perfect! Get back to base immediately LEXI! (Signs off and does the evil victory dance ™)
(Meanwhile on the car ALEXANDRA looses KIM & RON bonds as they open their eyes)
ALEXANDRA: (happy) It looks like we fooled Uncle guys!
KIM: (straightening up) Good… What’s next ALEXANDRA?
ALEXANDRA: You’ll see….
(((A/N: Alright how was that everyone? Chapter ten is coming soon)))
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Post by Kayleigh on Aug 25, 2005 9:00:43 GMT -5
Sweetness! ;D
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Aug 25, 2005 18:53:24 GMT -5
AUSUM!!!!!!! Lexi is a sly one! GOOOOO LEXI!!!!!! MORE!!! ;D MORE!!!! ;D MORE!!!! ;D ;D
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Post by Kayleigh on Oct 13, 2005 15:19:07 GMT -5
ishida...Ishida... ISHIDA!?!? Are you still alive??   |
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Post by Ishida Mitsunari on Oct 13, 2005 18:08:59 GMT -5
Public Announcement:
Sorry for my sudden departure everyone, it was irresponible of me to leave you all hanging. To make a long story short I got caught up in school and my part time job and took a hiatus from KP. I am back now and look foward to chappie ten sometime tomorrow or saturday. Hope you can all forgive me for my actions.
Ishida, Author
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Oct 13, 2005 21:09:31 GMT -5
I understand! take your time! But I still cant wait for the next one!!!! ;D ;D ;D
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Post by Kayleigh on Oct 14, 2005 23:15:10 GMT -5
coolio... real life can suck sometimes!  Can't wait to read though! |
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Post by Ishida Mitsunari on Oct 15, 2005 21:42:40 GMT -5
KIM POSSIBLE: A NEW FOE
(((A/N: Chappie 10 folks. As always Read and Review)))
(SETTING: The flying car, ALEXANDRA is setting the helm on auto and KIM & RON are sitting down in the passenger seats)
ALEXANDRA: (turning around) Alright guys here is the plan…. In a few minutes we are going to phase through Uncle’s cloak shield and into his base. Once there I’ll dock the car and meet my uncle. When I say ‘KIM POSSIBLE was not all that she says she is’ is your cue to starting kicking rear! (Smiles)
KIM: (slightly annoyed by ALEXANDRA’S choice of cue) Okay let’s do it ALEXANDRA! (makes a fist)
RON: (nods)
ALEXANDRA: (uncomfortable) Uhm… there is one more thing. KIM when we bust Uncle DREW let me take him down.
KIM: (putting an hand on ALEXANDRA’S shoulder) Okay ALEXANDRA, you take down DRAKKEN, RON and I will take care of the guards.
ALEXANDRA: (smiles) Thanks, now let’s get you back into the ropes….
(ALEXANDRA helps KIM & RON back into their ropes and then gets back on helm. Within minutes they pass through the shield and fly towards DRAKKEN’S new floating lab. Which is huge, shaped like a pie, and a strange tint of green. ALEXANDRA guides the car into a port and gets out)
DRAKKEN: (giddy with glee as he sees ALEXANDRA coming through the doors) Welcome home LEXI!
ALEXANDRA: (feigning sadness) I am sorry that Ms. GONZALES was captured and the diamond lost Uncle DREW….
DRAKKEN: (dismissive gesture) Oh… It is alright LEXI! You captured KIM POSSIBLE that is better then any diamond!
ALEXANDRA: (looking pleased) Thank you Uncle DREW. What are you going to do with her?
DRAKKEN: (looking unsure) Uhm….
ALEXANDRA: I am sure you’ll think of something. It shouldn’t be hard, after all KIM POSSIBLE is not all that she says she is
DRAKKEN: (grins) you’re right LEXI, she isn’t all that! (Starts to walk away with ALEXANDRA)
(As they walk away three henchmen who had walked up the car to pick up KIM & RON go flying past DRAKKEN and ALEXANDRA, DRAKKEN turns around and sees….)
DRAKKEN: KIM POSSIBLE! How did you….?! (Starts yelling in gibberish)
KIM: (smiles broadly)
(ALEXANDRA meanwhile ignites her hands and rushes at KIM with the guards. But instead of attacking KIM she turns on her heel and smashes the guards with black fire)
DRAKKEN: (more yelling in gibberish) ALEXANDRA! What are doing! How can you betray me like this! Your own Uncle… For a thief!
ALEXANDRA: (glaring daggers) You betrayed me first Uncle DREW! You lied to me! You used me for your own gain! You treated me like a lab rat! (Shoots black fire at DRAKKEN)
(DRAKKEN shrieks and runs out of the room and behind a protective door)
DRAKKEN: (yelling into the intercom) All guards report to the car bay! Stop KIM POSSIBLE!
(KIM & RON stand back to back with each other as the guards start running into the room.)
KIM: ALEXANDRA go find DRAKKEN! RON and I can handle the goons!
ALEXANDRA: (smiling) Right! (turns to the door DRAKKEN fled through and blasts it)
(With the sounds of punches behind her ALEXANDRA runs into the room looks for her uncle, she does not find him and runs into few other rooms looking for DRAKKEN)
ALEXANDRA: (frustrated) Where are you Uncle DREW? (walks into another room)
(As ALEXANDRA continues her searching she hears distant yelling…)
DRAKKEN: (angry) This can’t be happening! KIM POSSIBLE has turned my niece against me!
(ALEXANDRA homes in on the yell and walks into a computer room)
ALEXANDRA: (upset at all that has happened to her) Surrender now Uncle DREW!
(((A/N: Okay that was ten, hope the shortness is alright)))
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Post by Kayleigh on Oct 16, 2005 16:21:47 GMT -5
W00T W00T! Can't wait for chap. 11!
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Post by rockas on Oct 17, 2005 7:36:21 GMT -5
It's short ... but Good! Make Chapter 11 abit longer and better!  |
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Post by Winterfrost on Oct 17, 2005 8:28:54 GMT -5
Nice story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Hmph! Alexandra should've stay with the force of evil. We'll be.............I mean they'll be a lot more powerful than ever!
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Post by Ishida Mitsunari on Oct 20, 2005 19:40:28 GMT -5
KIM POSSIBLE: A NEW FOE
(((A/N: Chappie 11 folks. As always Read and Review)))
(SETTING: Inside DRAKKEN’s new lair, a computer room ALEXANDRA stands in the doorway looking extremely upset at DRAKKEN, who is trying to say something)
DRAKKEN: (looking frightened) LEXI! How did you get here!
ALEXANDRA: I followed the sound of your voice Uncle DREW (lights hands) now surrender at once!
(DRAKKEN appears at to fidget with the choice then without charge at ALEXANDRA. She catches him in the stomach and they both go tumbling around on the floor for several minutes. But at the end ALEXANDRA is laying on top of DRAKKEN and smiling)
ALEXANDRA: (smiling) You know Uncle DREW it was not very smart to try to get past me. I am smaller and faster then you are and I know 9 styles of Kung-Fu!
DRAKKEN: (grumbles)
(ALEXANDRA re lights her hands and forces DRAKKEN to get up with one flaming hand to the back of his head)
ALEXANDRA: (curious) Uncle DREW do you have my staff?
DRAKKEN: (confused) Your staff?
ALEXANDRA: My quarterstaff
DRAKKEN: (pointing) Over there
(ALEXANDRA reaches for the staff and DRAKKEN bolts. ALEXANDRA sees him run and trips DRAKKEN with the staff)
ALEXANDRA: (standing over DRAKKEN) Uncle DREW that was not smart either. This staff has a long reach (twirls staff fancily)
DRAKKEN: (grumbles)
(ALEXANDRA points a re lit hand at DRAKKEN and marches him out of the room.)
ALEXANDRA: (cheerfully) And a hup two three four and hup two three four! C’mon Uncle DREW don’t drag your feet!
(While ALEXANDRA marches DRAKKEN to the dock, at the dock KIM is pacing and RON resting on a pillar)
KIM: (worried) I wonder what is taking ALEXANDRA so long…. RON what do you think?.... RON? (Looks around for RON but he has vanished)
(RON has snuck to the nearby pile unconscious henchmen in the center of the room and is climbing it. KIM still wonders where he is as she can’t see RON climbing the pile. Finally RON reaches the top)
KIM: (frowning, spotting RON) RON! What are you doing up there?
(RON does not answer KIM and starts doing ridiculous macho poses on top of the pile. KIM, despite her best attempts to keep a stone face and order him to come down, starts giggling at RON’s antics)
(Meanwhile ALEXANDRA and DRAKKEN come in through the blasted double doors. While ALEXANDRA joins in the giggling DRAKKEN sneaks away. Just as he gets a safe distance RON spots him….)
RON: DRAKKEN is getting away! (Slips and falls)
KIM: (alarmed, rushing to the other side of the pile) RON!
ALEXANDRA: (swinging out her staff and jumping) Stop right there Uncle DREW!
(But ALEXANDRA is unable to stop DRAKKEN before he is able to hit the wall revealing a panel and then smash a big red button, causing the room to rumble and everyone to fall)
DRAKKEN: (letting out a big evil laugh) KIM POSSIBLE! Prepare to meet my Tank Bot mark 1! (Lets out another evil laugh and steps back)
(Out of the wall steps a massive red robot with a box shaped body, long skinny arms, and chicken legs)
DRAKKEN: (to Tank Bot) Tank Bot! Search and Destroy! Target: KIM POSSIBLE!
TANK BOT: Aye Aye! Searching……
RON: (pointing at Tank Bot) That thing would be so cool if it wasn’t after you!
KIM: (annoyed) RON! Keep your head in the game!
TANK BOT: (focuses blue targeting laser on KIM) Target found! Eliminating…..
(The Tank Bot then begins firing off it’s arsenal of varied lasers at KIM, who using her cheerleader skills manages to get out of the way. Meanwhile ALEXANDRA gets up from where she fell)
ALEXANDRA: (thinking) I got to stop that thing…. But how? (Watches the Tank Bot chase KIM then gets an idea)
(ALEXANDRA takes deep breath and leaps up, landing behind the Tank Bot. She lights her hands and begins attack the back of the thing’s knees. The Tank Bot is unable to keep it’s balance due to this and falls over allowing KIM to deactivate it , however as it falls a green laser carves into the ceiling….)
KIM: (from on top the Tank Bot) Good Job ALEXANDRA!
ALEXANDRA: (bowing) Thanks!
(DRAKKEN meanwhile is yelling in gibberish back at his control panel and is about to launch into his famous defeat dance when RON yells out)
RON: (watching the ceiling) KP! ALEXANDRA! Look out!
KIM & ALEXANDRA: (looks up)
(Suddenly a piece of ceiling falls down and crashes with a loud ruckus kicking up a cloud of dust. An eerie silence fills the room as neither KIM nor ALEXANDRA emerges….)
((((A/N: That’s it for chapter 11. Watch soon for 12, I won’t be long, I know you are anxious to see what happens… Right?)))
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Post by rockas on Oct 20, 2005 20:26:31 GMT -5
Yes Yes!!! Really Wonderfull!!! More More!!! ;D |
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Post by Winterfrost on Oct 23, 2005 5:00:32 GMT -5
Same here!
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Post by Falling-Pixie on Oct 25, 2005 23:30:06 GMT -5
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Post by Kayleigh on Oct 29, 2005 8:11:24 GMT -5
;D Another great chapter! |
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Post by Ishida Mitsunari on Nov 2, 2005 18:07:12 GMT -5
(((A/N: Chappie 12 folks. Sorry for the delay but Real Life is a pain!)))
(SETTING: The Car Bay. A cloud of dust hangs over a wide area in the center of the room. DRAKKEN stands on one side, RON on the other. The silence of the room as they wait to see if KIM and ALEXANDRA emerge is frightening.)
RON: (scared) KIM!!!
DRAKKEN: (triumphant smile on his face) I did it! I defeated her! (Launches into the evil laugh) Finally KIM POSSIBLE is out of my hair forever! (Launches into another evil laugh) If only LEXI was alive to see this…..
(While DRAKKEN celebrates RON kneels down and covers his face. Then DRAKKEN stops mid dance and mouth hangs open, causing RON to look up too)
DRAKKEN: (shocked, in denial, moving backwards) No…… It can not be! You could not have…. It’s impossible!!!
(From the cloud emerges the figure of KIM, limping and dusty, but alive)
KIM: (smirks and shakes her head) No… its KIM POSSIBLE!
DRAKKEN: (screams in gibberish and does his famous defeat dance)
(As DRAKKEN has a fit RON runs towards KIM and embraces her, they share a kiss before RON notices….)
RON: (looking down) KP…. You’re limping. DRAKKEN is gonna pay for hurting you! (Turns towards DRAKKEN)
KIM: (puts a hand on RON’s shoulder) No RON… don’t hurt him
RON: (clenching his fists) Alright KIM…. (Looks around) where’s ALEXANDRA?
KIM: (pointing behind her) She’s lying near that rock that nearly fell on us. ALEXANDRA saved my life RON…
RON: (holds KIM’s hand) I’ll go check on her, will you be alright KIM?
KIM: (smiling) Yeah, I’ll be fine
(KIM pulls out the Kimmunicator to talk to WADE while RON walks to where KIM pointed. He finds ALEXANDRA lying there awake)
ALEXANDRA: (struggling to sit up all the way) Is KIM alright RON?
RON: (kneeling down and helping) She’s got a limp but otherwise is fine. Thanks for risking your life for her
ALEXANDRA: (coughs) It was nothing RON!
(A little while later a police helicopter shows up to take DRAKKEN away. As the officers walk him past KIM he yells…)
DRAKKEN: (taking a deep breath) KIM POSSIBLE, you think your all that…. but your not!
RON: (leaning to whispering to KIM) Doesn’t he ever tired of that?
KIM: (annoyed whisper) RON, shush
(after the officers lock DRAKKEN in the chopper the chief walks up to KIM and shakes her hand)
CHIEF: Once again amazing work Miss POSSIBLE! Amazing work!
KIM: (waves a hand dismissively) It was no big! ALEXANDRA masterminded it all
ALEXANDRA: (sheepish) Ah… You made it work KIM!
CHIEF: (smiling) Miss POSSIBLE I have another chopper coming to pick you and your friends up, so get ready
ALEXANDRA: (raising her hand) Uhm…. I don’t live in Middleton
CHIEF: (scratching his head) Well where do you live?
ALEXANDRA: Northern Virginia
KIM: (interrupting the CHIEF just as he replies) ALEXANDRA I can ask WADE to arrange to get you home
ALEXANDRA: (grateful) Thanks KIM
KIM: (waves a hand)
(KIM then takes out her Kimmunicator)
KIM: WADE can you arrange to get ALEXANDRA home? She lives in Northern Virginia
WADE: I can do that (messes with his computer) Okay I got a private jet at Middleton Airport
KIM: Thanks WADE (turns to ALEXANDRA) I talked to WADE and he got a private jet to take you home.
ALEXANDRA: (speechless)
(A little bit later the helicopter arrives and they all leave DRAKKEN’s lair for the mainland. When they arrive at Middleton Airport the three heroes make their goodbyes)
ALEXANDRA: KIM, RON thanks for letting me in on one of your adventures. It was the time of my life!
KIM: No big! (Shrugs) It was great having you!
RON: (nods in agreement) Yeah!
(ALEXANDRA smiles and shakes KIM and RON’s hands before turning to board the jet. After reaching the plane ALEXANDRA turns once more and waves, KIM and RON return it.)
KIM: (looking at her watch) Oh no! RON I got to get ready to go to the big basketball game in 20 minutes! Come on! (Grabs RON and runs)
RON: WHOAA!
The End
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Post by Kayleigh on Nov 2, 2005 21:10:33 GMT -5
;D
Yay! Great story Ishida!
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Post by Winterfrost on Nov 3, 2005 6:22:24 GMT -5
Awesome!
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Can't wait to read though! 
