College Days

[Artificial Moose]

Thanks, y'all.

[surforst]

I'll repeat what I said on FF.net. Wow!

Great chapter. Someday though I want that answer to my question about Venus. Its bugging me now.

[taechunsa]

Moose,

Excellent job. Another well written chapter in the continuing story. I look forward to where we go from here.

Although, I am going to have to bring up again, what in the holy heck would possibly ever cause these two to wait to get married? Kim could have easily been raped and Ron was on death's short list yet they don't get married for six more years? I don't buy it. It isn't too late to rewrite Fallen LOL!

Keep up the good work.

PS: So what hints can we get on the collaborative effort?

[Artificial Moose]

surforst said:

I'll repeat what I said on FF.net. Wow!

Great chapter. Someday though I want that answer to my question about Venus. Its bugging me now.

Thanks.

Fear not, the answer will come. I ain't gonna guarantee that you'll like the answer (in fact, I'll settle for an average reaction of "What in the kerfungabooboo are you smoking?"), but you will get it.

[Artificial Moose]

taechunsa said:

Moose,

Excellent job. Another well written chapter in the continuing story. I look forward to where we go from here.

Thanks. I'm kinda looking forward to writing it...

Although, I am going to have to bring up again, what in the holy heck would possibly ever cause these two to wait to get married? Kim could have easily been raped and Ron was on death's short list yet they don't get married for six more years? I don't buy it. It isn't too late to rewrite Fallen LOL!

Two words: Author's Perogative.

I feel no qualms about bending the laws of physics, time, and/or human behavior to tell the stories that are in my head. ;D

ADDENDUM: Along with reasons already stated and discussed, the above choice was partly made (or, at least given prominent mention) for the sole reason that doing so would allow one particular Bonnie line in the first chapter. You can likely guess which line that was. END ADDENDUM

While I will be editing "The Fallen" at some point, I'm not changing the ending; I like it too much ;D. All I'll be doing is rectifying a couple of mistakes (namely, the fact that I forgot Nana Possible in the "Gathering of the Heroes" scene at the end), as well as a partial rewrite of the opening chapter.

But that won't be for a while yet.

PS: So what hints can we get on the collaborative effort?

There will be ADVENTURE, DRAMA, ACTION, SMUFF, MYSTERY, ANGST (boy, will there be angst...), INTRIGUE, MORAL GRAY AREAS, and ROMANCE!

Beyond that (and I don't want to spoil it any)... we're still haggling a bit over the outline... but with any luck, the first chapter should be posted within the next couple of weeks. Just keep an eye out.