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Post by iluvredheads07 on Sept 27, 2005 21:51:15 GMT -5
Hi all. Im new to writing fanficition but I do like to write. So I have decided to try to write a season 4 for KP. It will take place sfter STD and during their senior year. Ill be posting my first episode this friday, so stay tuned. Ill give you preview too, "Fun in the Sun"- Its summer vacation and Ron and Kp finally get a vacation. But it doesn't last long when the Seniors, and Drakkin and Shego show up looking for an underwater treasure worth millions. Can KP and Ron stop their dream vaction into a nightmare. Tune in Friday.
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Post by bigpenguin on Sept 27, 2005 22:31:27 GMT -5
I like the title, it has caught my attention. The buried treasure idea sounds original, which makes it seem more interesting. I am looking forward to Friday.
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Post by aliciamartin on Sept 28, 2005 8:19:45 GMT -5
nice can't wait to read it
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Post by iluvredheads07 on Sept 30, 2005 19:52:46 GMT -5
Well, here it is, he season pemire of my KP season 4. I hope to entertain you all and you'll be in for a lot of suprises. There will be old friends and new enemies and a whole bunch of suprises. So without further a due:
"Fun in the Sun"
It was summer vacation and Ron and Kim are at the Middleton airport. "Wow, I can't believe the year went so fast, you know with all the missions and the prom" said Ron. "Yeah it went fast, but at least we get a vacation for once" said Kim. They walked to the terminal where the plane was, Ron was downing some Bueno Nacho on the way. "Im happy Bueno Nacho reopened" said Kim, "Yeah me too" said Ron. "I dont think I could survived another day without it." Meanwhile Rufus downed his burrito, "What time does the plane leave?" asked Kim. "Our plane leaves at nine." "You mean that plane?" as the plane went flying off. "But my watch says its 8:30" "Ron, your watch stopped a week ago, remember you stood outside Bueno Nacho because you waited for it to open." "oh yeah", Kim said " I'll get us a ride, this vacation has started well."
While Kim and Ron checked into the hotel, there were bad guys lurking in the area. Dr. Drakkin and Shego, freshly escaped from jail, were out on a boat searching for something. "Shego have we found it yet?" "Take it easy Dr. D, we are only 5 knots away" said Shego. "Well this sunken ship holds the key to us becoming wealthy. The crown of King Phillip is worth millions and I can finally buy that death ray I want. Oh, think about all the chaos can cause, plus I can finally buy the one level ranch lair I've always wanted." "Dr. D, don't figure that Possible will just foil you like always. I mean the last scheme you had almost worked but she beat you again, maybe its time for you to give up." "Give up?, never, I have a dream and I will rule the world." "Yeah and I'll marry you, both which will never happen." Drakkin actually looked hurt but was distrcted by the sonar which had found the ship.
Meanwhile Ron and Kim were checking out the view from the room. "Man this is such a great view, you can see the ocean from here" said Ron. "Yeah it's kind a romantic, isn't Ron?" as Kim looked at Ron. "Yeah, but Rufus and I want to hit the pool, we'll see you down there KP." Kim looked dissapointed and watched the boys run down to the pool. A few minutes later, she changed into her bathing suit and went down to the pool. She was laying out while Ron and Rufus were doing cannonballs in the pool, Rufus has just wiped out the pool. Just then the Kimmunicator went off, "What's the sitch Wade?" "Kim I was doing some scans from the satelites and found this, pictures of Drakkin and Shego circling a sunken ship." "Wade, where you spying on us?" Wade responded, "Well, uh, that's not imporant right now. The ship is an old Spanish treasureship that sank 400 years ago. It contains the crown of King phillip, its worth millions on the black market." "And Drakkin wants it, so much for a vacation." "Kim, ill drop your gadgets at the boat dock. You better hurry, another ship just pulled in, i don't know who it is." "Come on Ron, we got a mission." "Aw, and I was about to play Marco Polo."
"Come Jr., we have reached the ship" said Senor Senior Sr. "But father Im not down tanning yet and i just had my nails done" said Junior. "Jr., the treasure on this ship is worth millions which I can use to but the newest death ray andtake over the world." "But father we are rich, why do we need more money? "Never say that you can have too much money, now come on Jr. Put the scuba gear on and and find the crown." "Can I at least find a suit that matched my eyes?"
"Whose that over there?" asked Drakkin. "Looks like the seniors" said Shego. "You know them?" "Well I use to tutor the guy in evil, he was preety cute too," Drakkin looked annoyed. "Alright Shego go down there and get it." "Whatever you say captain dingy." Drakkin watched as she dove into the water, just then he saw a jetski coming closer and closer. "Kim Possible! How does she always find me?" "Kim Possible? She's a very resourceful girl to find us out here." said Sr. "Look Kim, it's Drakkin and Sr." said Ron. "Take the bars Ron, Im going in" and Kim dove into the water.
Underwater Shego and Jr. had reached the ship. Jr saw her and dtood dtill admiring her. While he was looking dumb, Shego got into the ship and found the treaure chest. She opened it and got the crown out. As she was swimming away, she was greeted with a kick to the stomach. Kim and Shego then entered into a brutal fight, with Shego's glowing hand and Kim's kung fu skills. Meanwhil, Jr. finally snapped out of it and caught the crown and swam up towards the surface. Both Shego and Kim saw him and swam after him. Jr. reached the surface first, "Father I've got the crown, and it is very ugly too." "Never mind that Jr. Lets get going." "Not so Fast" said Shego and Kim. "Aww, Im honored to have you on my yacht, but we must be going but I'd like you both to meet my robot squid."
"Meanwhile Ron had bored Drakkin's ship. "Alright Drakkin its back to jail for you and the nasty jail food." "For your information, the foods not that bad and Im the one who will be escaping." On the other boat Kim and Shego had their hands full with the squid. They were both being squeezed by its tentacles until Kim used her hair dryer gun to break the mast which hit the squid and shorted it out. It also broke the ship in half and sank." "Quickly Jr., to the jetskis." The Seniors hopped on and rode off. Kim and Shego both swam to the other boat. "We have to work together to stop the Seniors" said Kim. Everyone agreed but reluctantly did. They caught up to them and Kim managed to catch both of them with her hairdryer grappling hook. She then hauled them aboard.
"Well now that we got them, attack Shego." The fight from before began again and still was brutal. Ron tried to help but was tripped by Drakkin, slthough rufus manged to bite Drakkin's hand. Kim managed to get an upper hand when she threw Shego into Drakkin and snatched the crown and the seniors. Just then the coast guard showed up. Drakkin and Shego did get away though. "Well another plan down the drain, no death ray for me." "Hey Dr. D, would you settle for a silver medal?" Shego pulled a small blue stone from her pocket. Drakkin then had an evil smile on his face.
Well sorry that the vacation was ruined" said ron. "Not completely, at least we went jetskiing and scuba diving. There's still the sunset too." They both looked at the sunset and held each other while listening to the crash of the waves below.
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