I wanna start my first fanfic ever...

[Winterfrost]

I'm thinking of starting my own fanfic on D/S but by a perspective of a "new" sidekick Dr. Drakken just hired. I'll make some stories on how a normal person wants to work for Drakken and maybe he can help stregthen the D/S relationship. I'm still brainstorming ideas and trying to watch more KP so I get the characters right.

First off I need this info to start: Is Drakken good at tricking people? I haven't watched enough episodes to know yet.

[Deleted]

It's kind of a mixed bag, Drakken can be good at tricking people if he really puts his mind to it. His plot in So the Drama was a good indication of that, how he was able to trick Kim with his synthodrone creations. If he finds the weakness of someone and decides to use it against them, he can be a very successful villain.

There are many other times when Drakken wouldn't be able to trick himself out of a paper bag. If you write him being determined to reach his goal, he probably could trick people if he so desired.

Hope that helped

[Winterfrost]

Thanks a lot.
I'm still brainstorming and researching, and not until I get my Christmas holidays and read other fanfics for inspiration till I'm able to whip up one. So yes it'll be some time.

[Winterfrost]

I haven't seen any major episodes like ASIT and STD but I'm doing all I can now.
Ok here's an outline:
The story is set at the beginning of Kim and Ron's junior year.
The story beings with my character (don't know what name I should give him. How does Feris sound? My real name Alvin? Lastname?) attending Middleton Highschool, with Kim and Ron in Junior year and my character in Senior year, but got a class with them because he forgot to take a year of latin in year 11 and was set back a year as a result.

He then promptly had a crush on Kim, but hid it (rather unwell though).

With him being a gifted martial artist and acrobat, plus a skilled spearman and gunner(school team disc shooter), Drakken got interested in getting him as another attendent, since he figures that, with Ron getting better and better at fighting, he needs help.

Drakken tries to get my character to hate Ron by an emotion amplifying machine since he knows my character likes Kim, (not the same but similar to the one in Emotion Sickness) and fill my character with jealousy for the closeness of Kim and Ron. His plan worked even more miraculously (without him expecting it) at the junior prom at the end of that year when my character has to pick up his younger brother in junior year at the prom, and saw Kim and Ron kissing.

With my character's outrage shown so evidantly, Drakken appears at his house and promise him revenge on Ron. My character gladly accepts and, in contrary to Kim, he became a well known villian while attending college without hiding it (and seem to be able to dodge all the securities and police going after him somehow).


I have no idea what happened to Drakken and Shego at the end of STD so I made him appear in the outline. When I get the fact I'll rewrite that part.

What do you think? Mistakes I made that doesn't correspond well with the episodes? Pleas help me get started.

BTW When this one is done then I'll try writing more stories with my character being second in the spotlight and helping Drakken get rid of Team Possible.

[aliciamartin]

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh can't wait for your D/S stories

[Winterfrost]

Can someone tell me what happen to Drakken and Shego at the end of StD?

[wkc814]

Kim kicked Shego into a tower, she got electricuted, the tower fell, she came out of it with a few scratches and a bad hair day(actually,smoke was coming from her hair), and she and Drakken went to jail.

[Winterfrost]

Hmm I suppose I have to watch both ASiT and StD first...

[Winterfrost]

Hmmm should I include D/S shippiness in my fanfic or just be selfish and do a Shego/Feris one? (Que self-satisfied laugh here)

I think I'll do the latter if you don't mind, D/S fans!

[aliciamartin]

both movies are great you'll like them