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Post by badgirl35 thinks Alvin is HOT! on Oct 20, 2005 15:25:33 GMT -5
This isn't my work and I usuely only read captainkodac1's work but shoot this is the best fanfiction I've ever read since I started whaching Kim Possible 2 years ago. Don't forget to give this man his props and to post back here ya her may! www.fanfiction.net/s/1939719/1/ |
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felixrenton
Yellow Trout
If i get my way, you will bow and Kim and Ron will play forever.
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Post by felixrenton on Oct 20, 2005 19:17:47 GMT -5
Its sad, but i absolutly love it. i was the obsessive poster who wanted it to be updated before chapter 21.
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Post by badgirl35 thinks Alvin is HOT! on Oct 21, 2005 15:10:44 GMT -5
Its sad, but i absolutly love it. i was the obsessive poster who wanted it to be updated before chapter 21. Thanx,did you give my man his props? |
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Post by aliciamartin on Oct 21, 2005 15:27:27 GMT -5
nice story 
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Post by badgirl35 thinks Alvin is HOT! on Oct 28, 2005 16:25:42 GMT -5
nice story Thanx did you tell him? |
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Post by Winterfrost on Oct 29, 2005 2:58:22 GMT -5
I read only the first chapter and I'm like................................oh my gosh.....
He's excellent. I wish I can come up with good storylines like he could, and that my English is better and my vocaburary range is a bit wider.
Wishing won't do me any good. I'm gonna practice once my exams are done!
I'm gonna tell him on ff.net later.
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Post by Winterfrost on Oct 29, 2005 6:02:10 GMT -5
OK I just finished it after reading it 3 hours straight and I must say that is the best fanfic I've ever read. The story is so intense, and only just then I realized how similar am I to Ron. The Author, he seemed to made sense of the entire series solely just by this fanfic.
I really like the Ron/Bonnie thing. It's sooooooo sweet.
Again, I wish I can write as good as he can. I'm probably a fraction of him in ability.
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Post by badgirl35 thinks Alvin is HOT! on Nov 23, 2005 9:31:31 GMT -5
You'll write A good story one day you're probably better than me. I'm writing a story called Play Date and it stinks.  |
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Post by taechunsa on Nov 23, 2005 15:05:11 GMT -5
Well, the writing is very good.
However, I have to disagree with the characterization of Kim and her relationship with Ron by about 180 degrees.
To each his own though.
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Post by surforst on Nov 23, 2005 15:58:17 GMT -5
I remember reading this story. I enjoyed it at the time though I also disagree about Kim. She may be a little stuck up at times (I can do anything) but she doesn't blow Ron off like the writter seems to think she does. O well it still had my second favorite pairing in the series. RonxBon goodness for everyone! Guy wrote a sequel to this story also. Its here. www.fanfiction.net/s/2491222/1/Its a JL/KP crossover. Kinda of weird but it continues the conflict bewteen Kim and Bonnie. Overall his stories are all good. I've enjoyed all of the ones I've read and I recommend everyone to check out some of his other stories. Guy is a good writter after all. Seems to like the Justice Legue as well. |
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Post by gocolts on Nov 26, 2005 1:58:46 GMT -5
Uh, yea, apologies for the out-of-character Kim Possible there. I started the story after watching half an episode of Kim Possible and only watched three episodes through the first fifteen or so chapters. Believe me, I've been flamed pretty harshly for this mischaracterization (is that a word?).
As for the sequel...yea, it wasn't such a good idea to make it JL/KP crossover in hindsight since not many people have actually seen the Justice League. Meh, characters are going to start dying left and right anyway, so that'll bring more attention to our core characters.
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Post by surforst on Nov 26, 2005 2:09:35 GMT -5
Uh, yea, apologies for the out-of-character Kim Possible there. I started the story after watching half an episode of Kim Possible and only watched three episodes through the first fifteen or so chapters. Believe me, I've been flamed pretty harshly for this mischaracterization (is that a word?). As for the sequel...yea, it wasn't such a good idea to make it JL/KP crossover in hindsight since not many people have actually seen the Justice League. Meh, characters are going to start dying left and right anyway, so that'll bring more attention to our core characters. Hey the author responded ;D Anyway I know how harsh reviewers can be (not personally of course) but just look at ClassicCowboy. People get angry ever time he has Kim and Josh sleep together. Another author wrote the fact that maybe Kim and Ron getting together was a mistake and got death threats. As stated before you got to change characters to get them to work. You wrote Kim in that way to get the story to go. I plan to write a crazy Yori in one of my stories. It doesn't fit her character but hey it drives the plot. Anyway it doesn't matter if people know JL. I wrote a Gundam fusion of KP and a lot of my reviewers don't seem to know what the heck a Gundam is. Story still works they just don't know what I'm talking about. If the story is good people will ignore that stuff. Anyway looking forward to more updates of your stories. There good stuff. I have to say I like the Bon/Ron goodness you write though my inner K/R fan wants Kim to get her man back. Hard fight there as evident in what I write |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 26, 2005 2:22:39 GMT -5
Wow, the author actually responded. I enjoyed that story, although when I started reading your other stories they kinda started feeling the same for some reason.  Maybe it was just me, but still good story. |
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Post by gocolts on Nov 29, 2005 1:23:47 GMT -5
They are essentially the same actually. I wrote most of the stories in a short time period, taking different angles to the same plot; keep in mind, this was after I read Paragon, Engineer, The Date, etc. etc. etc. Basically, since I had never seen the show, these "selfish" Kim stories were the basis for my Kim.
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Post by taechunsa on Nov 29, 2005 3:06:20 GMT -5
keep in mind, this was after I read Paragon, Engineer, The Date, etc. etc. etc. Basically, since I had never seen the show, these "selfish" Kim stories were the basis for my Kim. That is always the danger in writing fanfiction. If one doesn't go back and read/watch the canon regularly their views of the characters can get warped by other fanfiction author's characterizations. It is okay. It was a good story, and I have actually read a lot worse characterizations of Kim. |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 29, 2005 18:36:53 GMT -5
They are essentially the same actually. I wrote most of the stories in a short time period, taking different angles to the same plot; keep in mind, this was after I read Paragon, Engineer, The Date, etc. etc. etc. Basically, since I had never seen the show, these "selfish" Kim stories were the basis for my Kim. I got it now. Day it changed was good (I think its one of my favorites) Then I started reading your other stories and it started to feel like I was reading the same thing over and over. Now I know that it actually is!! LOL! Still good job on that. |
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Post by badgirl35 thinks Alvin is HOT! on Dec 31, 2005 15:00:51 GMT -5
So have I someone wrote a Kigo fic and made Kim a real jerk to make her available for next conforter that isn't Ron especially when Shego is undercover as a High Shcool teen AKA Kim's new best friend *wink wink*
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