wolfmanvi
Yellow Trout
Bonnie=Most Bondiggitty Lady out there.
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Post by wolfmanvi on Oct 23, 2005 21:27:13 GMT -5
The Story of Drakken and Shego both at a loss to realize theyre true feelings for one another  . ONe accidental action causes a chain of sad events on drakkens birthday. Please Read if your bored and want some quality entertainment (so im told) www.fanfiction.net/s/2500447/1/chapter 8 on its way |
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Post by drakkenfan on Oct 23, 2005 22:27:31 GMT -5
I love this story. I can't wait till it's updated again  |
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Post by Winterfrost on Oct 24, 2005 5:55:46 GMT -5
Yeah you've probably heard this before, but they were ooc a bit before. It improved later though, so all is fine now.
You do need to edit each chapter a bit more for typing errors. Other than that, the story is very interesting. Too bad I as a bit absent-minded when I was reading it. Reading something out of a computer screen always do this to me..
I really dislike, no not your story, but the format ff.net put everyone's story in. It makes it so hard to read without the 'tab' when starting a new paragraph
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wolfmanvi
Yellow Trout
Bonnie=Most Bondiggitty Lady out there.
Posts: 64
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Post by wolfmanvi on Oct 24, 2005 9:02:45 GMT -5
yeah that lack of tab is killing me as a writer. Thanks for input. I should update the past chapters for crapload of errors in them.
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wolfmanvi
Yellow Trout
Bonnie=Most Bondiggitty Lady out there.
Posts: 64
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Post by wolfmanvi on Oct 25, 2005 17:13:04 GMT -5
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Post by shegal92 on Oct 28, 2005 18:05:28 GMT -5
Hello there, wolfman. Sorry I haven't reviewed in awhile. I've been busy. Anyway, your story rocks and I'll review soon, hopefully.
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. ONe accidental action causes a chain of sad events on drakkens birthday. 
