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Post by ultimatenacotoppin on Oct 24, 2005 13:21:38 GMT -5
Hey Yo All! This a fanfiction I've designed to be like an actual season. Each chapter is an episode but events can and will carry over to later episodes. I should be updating weekly so keep your ears open... www.fanfiction.net/s/2619483/1/Read, Review, and Enjoy! |
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Post by jmt2005791 on Oct 24, 2005 15:01:34 GMT -5
you defintely have the talent for writing. these are really good keep up the good work looking forward to next chapter. i enjoyed read it. have nice day
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Post by kimmyfan48 on Oct 24, 2005 15:12:38 GMT -5
I love this story..keep it up!
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Post by ultimatenacotoppin on Nov 7, 2005 18:27:22 GMT -5
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Post by Prof. Demizle on Nov 7, 2005 22:03:53 GMT -5
Probably the best fanfic I've ever read.
Toppin your ability to write dialog has me jelling man. The biggest problem with most fanfics is allot of people, myself included can't write a decent conversation. It's harder than just writing a sentence it takes a well thought out process and structure all of which I found in you fic. Awesome job.
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Post by jmt2005791 on Nov 8, 2005 1:31:47 GMT -5
ohh very good. i can't wait for the next chapter.
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Post by ultimatenacotoppin on Nov 8, 2005 23:59:59 GMT -5
Probably the best fanfic I've ever read. Toppin your ability to write dialog has me jelling man. The biggest problem with most fanfics is allot of people, myself included can't write a decent conversation. It's harder than just writing a sentence it takes a well thought out process and structure all of which I found in you fic. Awesome job. Wow. Many thanks. You are too kind. One trick I like to use is to take on the persona of a character for a day. By forcing myself to think like them, it becomes easy to see what they would say in response to a simple "What's up?" all they way to "...but I love you. Do you love me?". Of everything that I have ever tried to do creatively, I find that writing in Ron's voice is perhaps the most fun I've ever had. I quickly found out that I didn't have to change anything from my voice, because I pretty much say in real life what Ron would. That's when I realized why my friend that is a girl was calling me "Ron" long before I watched an episode of KP. |
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Post by ultimatenacotoppin on Dec 2, 2005 1:48:51 GMT -5
And the shameless self-promotion continues with Episode 05: Amateur Hour: www.fanfiction.net/s/2619483/5/This one's a bit more of a story rather than an episode, but writing in the more visual style didn't give me the backround I wanted for the characters this particular time. However, it will be business as usual in Episode 06: Return to Yamonuchi. |
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Post by jmt2005791 on Dec 2, 2005 3:34:04 GMT -5
nice work on that chapter. it was a bit long but you more the made up that with all of the k/r in it good work. as a whole this story so far is rated a 9.5 on my scale of 1 to 10. 10 being the best fan fiction i've read.
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Post by badgirl35 thinks Alvin is HOT! on Dec 2, 2005 18:38:40 GMT -5
I liked it.
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Post by aliciamartin on Dec 3, 2005 17:40:03 GMT -5
more please there great  |
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Post by ultimatenacotoppin on Jan 16, 2006 22:34:19 GMT -5
Sorry I haven't posted in awhile. The post holiday boom is in full swing for me so it makes it difficult to converse online let alone write. However, I do offer up this copout. Episode 06: www.fanfiction.net/s/2619483/6/ |
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Post by aliciamartin on Jan 18, 2006 10:46:29 GMT -5
nice story great job hope they'll be more soon  |
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Post by Scoutcraft Piratess on Jan 18, 2006 21:23:15 GMT -5
You still must repair your cliffhanger!
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