Team Stoppable

[iluvredheads07]

Well Im going to try this fanfiction another shot. I've decided to write a spinoff of the show set in the future. There will be some old characters and a lot of new ones. Well I hope you guys like it.

On a dark night in Washington DC, three men were breaking into the smithsonian institute of History. The men had manged to deactivate the security system around the original Emancipation Proclamtion. The leader of the threesnatched it and made a break for it. But before they got out, a tall red heades boy got in their way. "stop right there, give us the document and we will go easy on you." "Yeah right, and we're gonna listen to a kid" said the man. "Don't forget me," yelled another voice. Out stepped a blonde headed girl with freckles. "You guys are going down" she said. The three man ran for it, and the two kids went agter them. The boy managed knock one of the robbers out with a kung fu kick. Another robber was tripped up by the girl who squeeled with deligth at what she done. The head robber managed to get outside in the getaway van. Before he could get away, the boy shot the van with a freeze ray. The police arrived a few minute later and took the robbers away. "Thanks for stopping them, they would have got away with an important American document" said the officer. "No big, were just doing our job, but we got to get back home," said the boy. "Yeah," said the girl,"Mom's gonna kill us if we are late for dinner, just remeber if your ever in trouble, call us. Team Soppable!"

Team Stoppable- episode 1- "The Next Generation" pt 1

It was morning in the town of Middelton. In a big house near the edge of town, a red headed women headed into the kitchen where a blonde headed man sat. "Good morning honey," said the woman as she kissed him on the lips. "Same to you dear" said the man, "I can't believe we have it all, a house, great jobs, kids. I figured we had both be dead by know, it's really amazing" said the man. This married couple was none other the legendary crime stopping team, Team Possible. A lot had changed after prom night twenty one years ago. After the fight, Ron and Kim ahd finally got together and started dating. Team Possible continued the save the world through their senior year an college and had many adventures. Kim had got accepted to Harvard in majored in International diplomacy. Ron had gone to the local community college and majored in business. They managed to stay in contact with each other through the kimmunicator. Ron proposed to Kim after their senior year, although he lost the ring in his naco. They were married a year later and Kim became pregnent and Team Possible retired. She gave birth to twins,a boy and a girl, named Johnny and Connie. Ron had rejoined Bueno Nacho and in a few years became president of the company. Kim had stayed home during the young years of the twins, and then became a diplomat for the US government. With all their money they bought the biggest house in Middelton and raised their kids.

"Johnny, Connie, come on you'll be late for school" said Kim. "Coming Mom" said Johnny. "Connie will be right out, she's doing her make up." "That girl is way too concerned with her apperance" said her mom. "So were you when you were her age" said Ron. Connie came running down the stairs and ran out the door following Johnny. "Have a good day kids, see you tonight" as their mother yelled at them. The twin walked to school, which was Middelton High. They were in their freshmen year and already develpoed their parents attributes. Johnny was just like his mother, smart and a good leader. He made straight A's, was president of the class, and star forward for the basketball team. Connie, on the other hand, was like her dad, she barely passed her classes, got into trouble, but also was a cheerleader. They were also the next generation of a crime fighting team.

When they got to school, Johnny went right to his first class, but Connie went to hang out at her best friend's locker. Her name was Britney Thompson, a tall brunette with a nice figure, and the daughter of Bonnie Rockwaller. They walked to their class talking about boys and cheerleading. At lunch, Johnny sat with his two friends, chuck and Marcus, playing chess. Just when Johnny was to checkmate Chuck, his crush, Jen Maes, walked by. "Checkmate" yelled Chuck, but Johnny was too stupified to answer. "Just ask her out" said Marcus. "I can't, she'd never go out with me" he said. "Yeah, she's way out of your league" said Connie as she walked by the table. "But out Connie its non of your business" he said. " "Face it Johnny. your a nerd, and head cheerleaders never date nerds" she said. "Well for your information" just then Johnny's kimmunicator went off. "Connie we got a go, we got a mission in New York." "Great, and I was really about to slam you good."
to be continued

[Winterfrost]

Interesting! Although for ease of reading, some seperation of dialogues and descriptive paragraphs would be good. Check for some typos too.
Looks like a good set up. Like the characters too. Draw some pics of them!

[aliciamartin]

wow great story keep it up

[iluvredheads07]

Team Stoppable- The Next Generation- pt.2

While the twins waited for their ride, they changed into their mission gear. The gear was just like their parents was, a black shirt, green kakhies, and black boots. They both waited outside the school for their ride. A jet came landing in front of the school and picked them up. Inside they thanked the driver for the ride. "Thanks for the lift Mr. Green," said Johnny. "It's no problem, after your folks saved my airplane company from bankruptcy," Mr. Green said. "Yeah, well mom was always good at stockbroking," added Connie. Just then the kimmunicator went off, "Whats up Christene?" asked Johnny. "You guys will be New York in a few minutes. The mayorsays that the city charter was stolen" she said. "That's strange, we just stopped some some thieves from stealing another important document," said Johnny. "Wow, these are dumb. They could steal jewels or money, but instead still paper? I'll tell ya, these crooks have no imagination," said Connie.

Christene was the new tech girl and moderator for the teams website. She was part of the GJ branch that run the world's communications. It seems that after Team Possible retired Wade took a job with GJ. He know runs the worlds communications systems and monitors them for gloval threats. He runs a department that has different techies that help agents around the world with providing information. The stoppables were not offically part of GJ, but Wade kept them connected to the system because of old ties.


When the twins arrived, they met the mayor. He told them a man had broken into city hall and made off with the city charter. "Why would he steal that, there is no market for it," said Johnny. "Maybe he wants to cheese off the mayor," said Connie. Johnny gave her a look, "Oh come on, wouldn't you be mad if your homework was stolen," she said. The mayor gave the team a note that read:
If you want the charter back, have Team Stoppable meet me at the docks on the Hudson at night. Have them come alone. D

The two teens went down to the docks at night and waited for the crook to show up. "Lets forget this Johnny, mom's gonna be angry anyway when we come at midnight," said Connie. "No, we owe to the city to get back the city's most imporatant document," he said. "Oh great, here you are being Mr. Hero again. Sometimes I wish I was an only child." "Shh, someone's coming," said Johnny. As the two teens watched, a strange black figure lurked near the dock. The two crept down closer. "Look!" said Connie, "There he is." Just then two big men jumped out and grabbed them. "Aw" said the stranger. "At last, I meet the famous Team Stoppable. Now I can get a chance to test my skills against two martial arts masters." "Actually, Johnny more of a master, Im just here for comic relief," said Connie. Then the starnger moved into the light. He was a tall boy, about the twins age. He had a muscular build, dark hair, and blue skin....
to be continued

[Winterfrost]

I think I know the identity of this foe..................but ther are a couple of things I still have to guess....

[iluvredheads07]

Team Possible- The next Generation- pt. 3

"No, it can't be. No one's seen you for 20 years," said Johnny. "No Mr. Stoppable, I am not Dr. Drakkin. I am his son," said the boy. "Whoa, timeout. Your saying my mom's archenemy had kids? Gross," said Connie. "That's your opinion but I am deadlier than he ever was and I will succed were he failed," said the boy. "What do you want with the city charter?" asked Johnny. "Nothing, I just wanted to bring you out into the open." the boy said. "Well, you got us, but we are not going down without a fight," said Connie. Just then Johnny managed to throw the man holding him off of himself and threw him into the other man freeing Connie. "Connie, go get the charter, I will hold off this guy." said Johnny.

Now being the son of a world famous hero, Johnny had been trained in kung fu by his mother. Johnny had excelled by practicing everyday and was just as good as what his mother was. Connie on the other hand was able to defend herself, but slacked off and was no where as good as what her brother was. "Where's the thing at Johnny?' said Connie. "See the light? it's over there where that big guy is," he replied. "Can't you take him on? I just got my nails done?" she said. "Just Go!" he said. Connie ran off towards the direction and now faced off against the blue skinned boy. The boy ran towards him and threw punches at Johnny. Johnny countered and manged to hit the boy in the stomach. The boy recovered and tried sweep Johnny's face but Johnny dodged it and kicked the boy a good ten feet across the dock. Johnny thought that the boy was all talk and the boy began laughing. Johnny was amazed when the boys hands began to grow blue. "Well I guess you know who my mother was. I am Drago, the doom bringer of the Stoppable clan."

Connie snuck around the dock and saw the man guarding the paper. "He's way to big for me to take on. Maybe there's a gadget that will help," she said. Connie looked threw her backpack,"There's nothing in here except a book, make up and a hardryer. Hairdryer? Oh wait, mom use to have one of these. It was a grappeling gun. I can use this," she said. Connie jumped out and tried to get the gadget to work but it wouldn't shoot. The man started running after her and Connie ran screaming. Connie tripped over a board and the hairdryer went off and tied up the henchmen. Connie walked over and got the charter, "Man, I wish mom was here to see this. I actually did something she could be prouds of."

Drago began to shoot blue energy beams at Johnny. Johnny has to dodge it but he was suprised by a flying kick from Drago. Johnny dodged Drago's punch and managed to trip Drago's feet. Drago then shot a hole underneath Johnny's feet. ohnny managed to hold on to the boards on the dock. "Well, I guess the Stoppables arn't what they are all cracked up to be. You dissapoint me," said Drago. Drago was going to stomp on JOhnny hands to finish him off but Johnny grabbed his leg and used the force to pull himself out of the hole. Connie came running to the scene and backed up Johnny. Just then the police arrived and surrounded Drago. "We will meet again Stoppable" said Drago. He threw a smoke bomb and disapperd. "You alright sis?" said Johnny. "Great we got the paper too bad the bad guy got away." replied Connie

Back at Middelton the twins walked to their class. As they walked, Connie said "Look Johhny, I know I tease you alot about your friends and hobbies but you know I love you because you are my brother. I really shouldn't make fun of your crushes, maybe I can hook you up with Jen." "Don't worry about it. I know your just doing it because of your friends but you have your life and I have mine. But still we will always be bro and sis." said Johnny. "Well Im happy thats over cause Britney coming this way and I can't be seen with you. So buzz off dork" she said. Johnny just smiled as he watched her walk off with Britney, thinking how goofy she was.

In a dark lair, unknown to Global Justice, Drago approaches a daek figure. "Everything went according to plan. Team Stoppable knows about me," said Drago. "Good," said the voice,"Soon they will pay for their parents sins and at last we will be rid of all the Stoppables." The voice laughed maniacally as Drago watched with a smile.

What do you guys think? Would you like to hear the rest of the season or should this be a one shot?

[iluvredheads07]

Here is the next episode:

Connie Stoppable was sitting in family room watching tv. It was around four o'clock, and she knew that her tv time was over. Just then the door flew open and in ran a five year old boy with red hair. Tommy Stoppable was the youngest child of Ron and Kim stoppable and he had just got home form preschool. Tommy's favorite show "Chuckles the Clown" was on. Connie got up because she knew there was no point in arguing with her little brother. Just then Johhny walked in, "Hey, what's tommy doing?" "He watching that stupid clown show," she replied. Johnny then got a horrid look face, "Clown? No,not that, not that!" as he screamed.

Team Stoppable- episode 2- Send in the Clowns

Johnny had ran into the kitchen where his mom had just got home and was preparing supper. "Johhny whats wrong?" she asked. "He saw Chuckles the clown on tv and freaked," said Connie as she walked in. "Oh, the whole clown thing, your still not over that?" asked his mom. Johnny replied, "Of course not. Those horrid painted faces, and the shoes." Connie just looked annoyed at how much of a coward he was.

Meanwhile at the Have a nice day joke factory, a joke inventor is called into the bosses office. "Jack, your jokes arn't funny and we can't sell them," said the boss. "What do you mean?" Jack replied, "My exploding whoopi cushions and joke buzzers are great." "That's it Jack, your whoopi cushions blew a hole in the walls and your buzzer shot 2000 volts into the test body, your a dangerous mind and that we are letting you go," said the boss. Jack said "You can't be serious", "Oh but I am" said the boss. "Security please escort Mr. Sparks out." "That won't be nescesary, I'll leave on my own," as Jack stormed out. Jack Sparks had always been a prankster and loved to play tricks. This had been his dream job but his antics got him fired. As Jack gathered his things he plotted his revenge. "I'll show them. They think I'm dangerous, will I'll show them. I'll show the world how great of a prankster."

The next day at school Johnny and his friends Marcus and Chuck sat in their study hall reading. "Pstt, Johnny," said Marcus, "You should read this book about famous operas its great. Look here's the opera Paggliochio, its about a clown who-" "No, no, no, that's ok" said Johnny. Chuck and Marcus looked at him weird as Johnny went back to doing his geometry homework. Connie was sitting across the room next to her best friend Britney. "Why does your brother look like he's freaking out?" asked Britney. "I don't know, he only freks out around clowns," said Connie. "What a loser," said Britney. "Yeah," said Connie, "Even women with too much make up send him running." Both of the girls laughed at this as Johnny looked on form across the room.

Meanwhile at the Have a Nice Day Joke factory, The police were investigating a break in. The police had found that the factory was in total disarray with streamers and grafitti everywhere. They found the boss tied up in his chair with a pie in his face. And on the tin there was something was written,
This laugh was brought to you by the Prankster
to be continued

[jmt2005791]

good story so far. i like how its going so far. keepup the good work.

[Winterfrost]

New villains! Sparks seems pretty good. Overall, the stories are not bad.

[iluvredheads07]

"Come on Johnny you got to get over this sometime," said Connie ast they walkd home. "A fear of clowns is not healthy. plus it makes you look dorker than you are," said Connie. "I know but I can't stand those painted faces satring at you, as they were looking int oyour soul. Man it just creeps me out," said Johnny. Just then the kimmunicator went off, "Whats up Christene?" "We got a hit," she replied, "The Have a Nice Day joke factory was broken into. There are also reports of similar break ins at joke shops around town." "Looks like we got us a thief," said Johnny. "Yeah, a thief with a bad sense of humor," added Connie.

The twins arrived at the factory and were briefed on the situation. It seems that the victim had just fired an employee named Jack Sparks. A background check was ran on him and they found out that Sparks had failed as a clown in the circus and was banned from ever performing again. He had worked at the factory making pranks, but was fired because his pranks were too dangerous. When Johnny saw the picture he freaked out. "Whats the mater with him?" asked a policeman. "It's a long story," said Connie, "You see, it was about nine years ago. Our parents at took us to the circus for the first time. Johnny loved every part of it, he was awwed by lion tamers and the acrobats. Then the clowns came out and he liked them at first. That is untill they pulled him out of the audience and laughed and homked right at him. He was never the same, and has hated clowns since." "Come on Connie, we got a lead on where he lives."

The twins looked around the apartment where Sparks had lived. They had found old pictures of his clown days and plans for some the weirdest pranks and jokes ever. They even found a letter outlining his plan of revenge. "This guy definently has too much time on his hands. He needs a girlfriend," said Connie. "It seems that he wants to put his competition out of business," added Johnny. "Look's like the only place left is Zach's pranks down in the mall. Come on let's go." "These villians gete weirder and weirder. Whatever happened to the classic mad scientist?" said Connie as she was pulled out of the room by Johnny.

Later at Middelton mall the twins sat and waited for Sparks to show up. It was getting late and Connie had fallen asleep. "Wake up Connie, there he is," said Johnny as he watched Sparks break the window with an extending boxing glove. "Alright let's prank this prankster." The twins suprised Sparks by jumping into the store. "Alright Sparks, your days of pranking are over," said Johnny. "Yeah, and your horrible sense of fashion too," added Connie. "Oh im not Jack Sparks anymore," he said," I am the Prankster!" He turned around to show his painted face. When Johnny saw this he freaked majorly," No, not that, no, NO!"
to be continued

[jmt2005791]

wow i'm hooked can't wait for next installment

[Winterfrost]

Awesome!
Face your fear, Johnny!

[iluvredheads07]

"It's a clown, I hate clowns. Horrible, horrible clowns," shrieked Johnny. "Oh quiet it, it's just another freak with a painted face. Say, wouldn't a better name for you be Jo-," "Copyright issues," interjecked the prankster. "Well its all been fun but I must really be off, but I'll leave you a gift." The prankster took a jack-in-the-box out form his bag and ran. "Come on Johnny, he's getting away," said Connie. Johnny just stood there and wouldn't move. Just then the box opened out popped a jack with boxing gloves and was aiming for the twins. Connie barely got out of the way and Johnny just ducked in time. He realized that he needed to protect his sister. The jack threw punches at him while Johnny managed to hit it in the face but it bounced right back up. Connie realized that if they could get the Jack to twist itself enough that it would get tangled. Connie got its attention and Johnny realized what she was doing and they started to run around it. The jack tried to followed them both but got tangled up and fell over. "Good job, sis. Now lets get that freak." said Johnny.

The prankster had managed to get outside and was running to his get away van when the twins caught up to him. "Alright, the jig is up," said Johnny. "So my jack didn't stop you, well maybe my pie cannon well," said the prankster as he pulled his piezooka out. He fired it at the twins and Johnny managed to dodge it. Connie tried to too but got got hit in the face with a pie. "Raspberry, eww" said Connie. The prankster ran out of pies and pulled out a fish. He threw it at Johnny and missed him. "Is that it?" asked Johnny. Just then he realized that the fish was headed back at him. "Boomerang fish neat huh?" said the prankster. "Come on boy, you now your afraid of me. My face would scare the toughest child, like you." "Did you just call me a child?" said Johnny. "Uh oh, Now your going to get it," said Connie. "What?" asked the prankster as Johnny nailed him right in the face. "No one calls me a child" said Johnny as stood over him.

Later at the Stoppable house, the twins and thier mother were watching tv. "So how did it go tonight kids?" asked their mom. "Great mom. we busted this painted face freak tonight who had a nasty bag of toys," said Connie. "and Johnny was the one who knocked him out." "Really? Im so proud of you Johnny, you finally conqurered your fear," said mom. "Oh it was nothing. He called me a kid, and you know how much I hate that. Not even a clown could call me that," said Johnny. Just then Mr. Stoppable came home with Tommy from the circus. "How was the circus dear?" "Great, Tommy had and I had a great time. He really loved the clowns." Tommy came running in with a painted face and Johnny ran out of the room screaming. Connie laughed,"Well at least good to know some things never change."

[jmt2005791]

very good update. looking forward to more. keep up the good work.