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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 28, 2005 22:15:18 GMT -5
My new story, got the idea from watching the 70s cult classic movie "The Car" A possesed car bent on killing everyone had desended upon Middleton and Kim and Ron are trying to figure out how to stop it before it kills again. Here is what the car looks like  Chapter 1  www.fanfiction.net/s/2637936/1/ |
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Post by drakkenfan on Oct 28, 2005 22:16:51 GMT -5
Sounds like a cool idea for a fanfic. Are you going to add SADIE into this story?
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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 28, 2005 22:21:34 GMT -5
Nope, and if I did SADIE wouldn't stand a chance. We are talking about a car that is 100% pure evil.
Sadie would be destroyed in a second. I already had 3 characters die, a self driving car would be cake walk.
If you have access to the Movie I suggest you watch it. it is Awsome!!
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Post by drakkenfan on Oct 28, 2005 22:34:05 GMT -5
maybe you should have sadie destroyed? hmm I wonder what 3 characters died. I wouldn't want to read a fic where drakken dies. Any other character death is ok though..
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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 28, 2005 22:48:57 GMT -5
I got the link to the story just below the pic.
I might have Sadie get destroyed, make a good addition to the carnage.
No Drakken doesn't die, he actually will help in stopping the car
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Post by drakkenfan on Oct 28, 2005 23:09:23 GMT -5
I read what you've written so far. It's pretty good, and everyone is in character. I kept smiling as I read it, cause I love all those horror movies where one teen after another gets killed off. Dark humor is my favorite kind. I'm looking forward to chapter 2  |
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Post by kimmyfan48 on Oct 29, 2005 8:24:58 GMT -5
I like the story so far....  |
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Post by captainkodak1 on Oct 29, 2005 9:19:41 GMT -5
AAAHHH Yeeessss, a favorite movie of mine. Always liked this movie. That car does things..... well I'll let you tell the story. I will follow this one closely. Nice to see someone going back and picking a really good movie from the past. If you follow the movie close as you already have there will be action a plenty ahead and the ending WOW. Kim and Ron have never faced forces like they are getting ready to. Good luck.
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Post by drakkenfan on Oct 29, 2005 18:06:29 GMT -5
I was just looking at that movie poster pic, and I thought the name John Marley was Josh Mankey for a second.. lol...
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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 29, 2005 18:21:58 GMT -5
AAAHHH Yeeessss, a favorite movie of mine. Always liked this movie. That car does things..... well I'll let you tell the story. I will follow this one closely. Nice to see someone going back and picking a really good movie from the past. If you follow the movie close as you already have there will be action a plenty ahead and the ending WOW. Kim and Ron have never faced forces like they are getting ready to. Good luck. Thanks Capt! Getting ahold of this movie is a royal pain, but it is worth it. My other movie choice for this was to have Ron fall in love with the 1958 Plymouth Fury "Christine" But it would be totally against everything Ron believes in. And it would be really hard to get Ron to completely ditch Kim for a car. So that was out. I should have chapter 2 of this up sometime soon. |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Oct 30, 2005 14:27:52 GMT -5
Chapter 2 is up! I used drakkenfan's suggestion, Sadie is in this chapter and will be in the next one. You could figure out what happens after that  I am deviating slightly off the original movie just to give it more of a KP feel. Enjoy www.fanfiction.net/s/2637936/2/ |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 2, 2005 22:32:09 GMT -5
Chapter 3 people!! Btw its rated teen if you wanted to know. www.fanfiction.net/s/2637936/3/A few more replies (on here, not FF.net as its already bringing them in) would be nice, maybe? |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 6, 2005 16:24:30 GMT -5
Chapter 4 is up guys, I'd post a link to it but I'm having some email problems. Its should be up there, I hope. Also I have decided that this will have a sequel. This current story will end where the movie ended, then the sequel will pick up from there and run with the idea, bringing in some more movie characters, and maybe some character deaths. Enjoy. |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 7, 2005 17:01:20 GMT -5
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 9, 2005 22:48:22 GMT -5
More massive killing in the tasteful sense? Sure!! www.fanfiction.net/s/2637936/5/Story is still rated teen, BTW Next chapter, the moment you've all been waiting for........ Bonnie Dies!!!!!! If you've seen the movie (captkodack ) You'll know exactly how she gets it. Let this horror train continue!! |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 10, 2005 23:26:45 GMT -5
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Post by surforst on Nov 13, 2005 17:37:00 GMT -5
Like the poster. Decided to post a comment on the forum about this story too. Don't kill my Bonnie! Please! I can't live without her  Now that my hysterical comments are out of the way looking forward to more. Wondering what will happen in the sequel *hint*giant robot truck*hint*. |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 13, 2005 17:43:54 GMT -5
Like the poster. Decided to post a comment on the forum about this story too. Don't kill my Bonnie! Please! I can't live without her Now that my hysterical comments are out of the way looking forward to more. Wondering what will happen in the sequel *hint*giant robot truck*hint*. Don't worry, her death will be quick. ;D And to make you feel better she is taking another charater with her (hint: who helped tell the car off ) No Giant Robot truck! And I don't plan on having Optimus Prime Show up either! To give you a idea of who (or what) will be in the sequel, do a google search for Movie Cars, because another Movie Car will be a intracit part of the sequels story line! |
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Post by surforst on Nov 13, 2005 18:27:55 GMT -5
Don't worry, her death will be quick. ;D And to make you feel better she is taking another charater with her (hint: who helped tell the car off ) No Giant Robot truck! And I don't plan on having Optimus Prime Show up either! To give you a idea of who (or what) will be in the sequel, do a google search for Movie Cars, because another Movie Car will be a intracit part of the sequels story line! Herbie? I can't see that going well. Anyway...I guess if you want to go with second rate vehicles you can exclude Optimus Prime. Its not my life thats on the line *mutters to himself*. I just feel sorry for poor Kim and Ron. *kicks a rock* Though I guess if you want to give the car a chance. Consider Prime can bless large bodies of water *a little known fact* I can't see the car standing a chance. *sigh* I want my crossover! By the way I think Mr. Barkin will be tougher to kill then you think. He's a tough one. Bonnie on the other hand will be easy to take down. |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Nov 15, 2005 17:15:21 GMT -5
Mr. Barkin didn't yell obcenities at the car with Bonnie, Monique did No Herbie, no Optimus Prime. To help you narrow the search down, chech for Movies made in 1983. Another Hint: Stephen King wrote a Book on it first. Should have some more chapters up this weekend, now that the war story is over and done with. |
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