What should I do for my next Fanfic?

[Ishida Mitsunari]

Okay I am just making the finishing touches on Chapter 12 of A New Foe, the last chapter of that story and will probably put it up tomorrow. This means I should start thinking about what to do for the next one. Because I am still new to fanfic writing this one will be in a different format then A New Foe. I got three ideas for my next story but I can't choose which to do, can you help me decide?

Idea 1:

In this one Drakken has Shego steal a weapon known as the "Demensional Cannon". This device is supposed send it's target into another demension. When Kim and Ron show up to stop Drakken the device malfunctions and creates an alternate reality where Drakken and Shego rule as King and Queen and Kim, Ron & Co become a modern Robin Hood and his Band of Merry Men.

Idea 2:

In this one a mystical sect known as "The Black Hand" strikes at Yamaouchi. Sensei contacts Ron before the attack and he arrives too late to save the school, and on his way home Ron is attacked and injured by The Black Hand. Kim finds out from Wade and makes shutting down The Black Hand a personal matter.

Idea 3:

In this one nearly everyone in Middleton start to act wierdly and treat Kim like royalty, even Bonnie! Then makes things wierder a man from the future shows up and tells Kim she must help him save the world from a potienally dark future.

[taechunsa]

Of these three I like the first one the best. (Side note Dimension is spelled with an 'i')

I have read a lot of "revenge" fics lately and I am ready for some team fics instead of solos.

The third one I just don't like as well as the first.

[Ishida Mitsunari]

Oh.... I knew something about the way I spelled dimension was wrong. Thanks Taechunsa, I will take your suggestions into consideration!

[Winterfrost]

I like the first one best.

[Ishida Mitsunari]

Here is a uncomplete BETA of the new fanfic for appraisal


PROLOUGE
The Plan

The Future


The Imperial City,
Middleton



A flood of scientists scurried about in hurry around a massive white machine. The machine looked like a cannon but with a dish where the mouth would be. The room in which the scientists worked was a large oval shaped room with a low ceiling; The Empress did not like high ceilings. Suddenly at the southern end of the room a door opened and all worked stopped. Everyone cowered.

-“She’s coming” whispered one scientist

The woman in question was a shadowy cloaked figure in red flanked on each side by the imposing bulk of the silent green armored Imperial Guard. This woman was known and feared as “The Empress”. For the entire 3 minutes it took for her to walk to the device the only sound in the room was the boots of the Imperial Guard. Once the Empress reached the device she turned to one of the lead scientists, who bowed at her look.

-“Update me” she said.

-“The Adoreator is complete milady. All systems are functional and ready.”

The Empress smiled, a rare and beautiful sight.

-“Excellent…. And the Adjustor?”

At this point the scientist gulped loudly

-“The Adjustor was sabotaged milady… by Ron Stoppable”. At the mention of Ron’s name the normally calm demeanor of the Empress snapped.

-“Ron is still FREE?!” she yelled at the hapless scientists, lifting the one speaking to her off the ground.

-“Please Milady!.... put me down! Get mad at Shelia Gonzales and the police force not me!” begged the scientist.

The Empress set the man down and seemed to be in deep thought for several minutes, at one time reaching into her left pant pocket as if something should be there but isn’t. Finally the Empress spoke again, calmly this time

-“Even with the Adjustor out of operation the plan can still go ahead”

The scientists nodded their assent ‘Yes the plan can still go ahead’ they seemed to think.

[Winterfrost]

Great start! Awaiting the next one!