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Post by Mariah on Nov 6, 2005 2:25:47 GMT -5
It was a dark and stormy night the wind howled and i herd a scream. I followed it and it became louder and louder. I found nothing and i looked farther but still found nothing i thought something terible happend but i relized i was right.... I found him after all these years and he had finnaly come back on this very day of October 31 known as Halloween. A couple of years ago i had to say goodbye to my one and only true friend his name was Ron Stoppable. On this very day i still visit him at his grave stone and clean it up a bit with new flowers but for some reason i think he is giding me to follow where life takes me. I am Chelsea Go and i am Shego's Sisster and I caused all this sadness to happen. I will tell you how. A couple of years ago i was at my house reading a magazine while all my other sibllings hit and kicked eachother. I decided to go for a walk. I opend the stain glass door and stormed out. I ran but i had no clue why as I ran past the street as a car came rushing by me some one but i wasn't sure who at the time pushed me out of the way and saved me for his own life. It took a minute to get my head back in order as i noticed my one true love laying in the street....dead. I reached for my cell phone and screamed in to it and dialed 911. "hurry up he is dieing hurry you need to save him." i yelled into the phone but you wouldn't have a clue what i was saying. I sat there sitting in the middle of the street next to Ron Bawling as i herd sirenses come closser. I waved my arms as they aprouched us. But you know what happends next Everyone and i mean everyone blaims me for all this. I hid in my room which was like a dungeon for 3 years and i am finally ready to face the world. I got up and slammed my alarm clock everything and i kmean everything is diferent now. I havn't seen either Kim or Monique for 3 years and I will never see Ron again. That is the truth and the whole truth. I grabbed my jeans and black tank top and slipped it on aas i marched out the door not saying anything to Shego. I use to come to Shego with all my problems but now what was i supost to tell her... she hated me. I ran out the door and i was hoping Kim still lived across the street from me as i Rang her door bell. It took a minute till someone answerd it was a girl with orange red hair and she had a purple tank top on with a white mini skirt. "what?" asked kim " looks like you finally faced the music right Chelsea but you are way to late." I knew this was a bad idea i thought Kim Hates my guts and always will even though i did nothing well maybe i did but i wasn't sure. I sighed and looked at the ground. " look Kim this isn't My fault... it is'nt." i said with tears filling my eyes as i ran to my old high school. It might make me feel better.... WRONG it made it wrose. So how do you like it i know it's sad and all but how was it? I worked on this Chapter forever and i hoped you all ingoyed it like i did writing it.
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Post by jmt2005791 on Nov 6, 2005 4:32:53 GMT -5
it's pretty good. wow ron's dead. that's something i've not seen before. keep up the good work.
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Post by Winterfrost on Nov 6, 2005 7:54:41 GMT -5
Fix some typos and some sentence structures could be farther refined. The idea is pretty good.
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Post by Mariah on Nov 6, 2005 23:22:45 GMT -5
thanks guys lol sorry about the tpos i am only 11 lol
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Post by Mariah on Nov 6, 2005 23:45:34 GMT -5
I aprouched my old high school. Man had it changed it was tottaly dark and werid this was the exact same spot i had lost Ron. I was finally here seeing the blood still there from the last time I was here. I walked in the school and they shut it down a year ago. I walked down the hallways remembering the good times and some bad. I herd foot steps aprouch me i ducked into my old locker. It seemed different from the last time i saw it. It had a big dent init and i found a note it read. Dear Chelsea, How can ypu do this. You killed Ron. I thought you were diferent from Shego but i was wrong. You were my best friend but You sank to low and i will never forgive you... never. Kim¢¾ I couldn't belive she also thought i did it. But i didn't. I would never do that to Ron. Ron was my best friend he was always there for me i would never do that. I got out of my locker and kept walking around the school. I herd a squeak from behind me. I bent down and it was Rufus.... I thought he was gone but i guessed wrong. I scooped him up in my arms and walked out of the school and went to Bueno Nacho. Ron and Rufus faveorite place. I bought Rufus alot of food that day at dueno nacho and asked if he belived me. Aperently he did. He was the only one to. We ate and huried to Drakens lair. I slammed the door shut as i ran into my room. I put Rufus on my bed and handed him some more food. Rufus was my one and only friend left in the world now. Everyone including my own sister didn't belive me she was always saying stuff like u liar you so killed ron i saw you with my own eyes. Alot of rummors were going on about me. Like one was she killed him herself and made it look like he got hit but that was the wrost one. I sat there looking at Rufus with tears in my eyes. I just Wish Ron were back. I grabbed my journal and wrote my thoughts all down about what happend and if Ron were here but he will never be back.... at least that's what i think. I shut my journal shut and went to Wade's house. He was my old friend maybe he can help me with something if he didn't belive those nasty lies that were spreading. I ran out of the house and bumped into Jim one of Kim's little brothers. He was sure different he had grown out his hair a little more but that was about it. "hi Chelsea where are you going?" asked Jim I yelled back and said somewhere. I grabbed my skatebourd and headed toward Wade's house. Maybe he can help... or maybe not. hey how was this chapter lol. thanks for the nice reviews.
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Post by jmt2005791 on Nov 7, 2005 22:08:37 GMT -5
pretty good keep up the good work i'm looking for the next installment.
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Post by Mariah on Nov 7, 2005 22:42:54 GMT -5
like i said thanks for the complements! I walked to Wade's house as a cold gush of wind roured passed me. I shiverd. I past my old school and alot of things from the past. I knocked on wade's door. This was the first time i had ever seen wade. I knocked on his door lightly. There stood an older wade. "wade is that you?" i asked inspecting him as he laphed. " It's me!" said wade " hey can u help me with clearing my good name?" I asked " yeah sure." said wade as he grabbed Kim's old Kimunicator and he threw it at me. " what was that for?" i asked anoied he laphed and didn't answer he also pulled down old pics from three years ago when i first came here. I looked at those first. I guess i was a little mean to kim i thought as i looked threw the old pics it had me fighting Kim and one of me and Ron King and Queen at one of the dances with kim scowling in the back round. I sighed Kim would always think i killed Ron there was no hope what's so ever. Wade also looked throught them. He shook his head and said. " Kim will never Belive you just to tell u that." said wade i looked up with tears stinging my eyes. " i know!" i said in a voice you couldn't understand what i was saying. I wish she would forgiven me and belived me but i did nothing.. well yes i did i took Ron from Kim it wasn't my fault! I cried laying back in wades bed. He put the photo's back. "it's hard isn't it?" he asked as i shook my head in return. I couldn't belive what i was looking at then i saw what Wade ad Clenched in between his hands. Kims onld diary from 3 years ago he must of found it when the school evacuated i thought as he hannded it to me as i looked thrrough the pages. One was really mean... it was about me! it said: Dear Diary, I am so ticked ever sence that girl chelsea came here all she cared about was ron this ron that and she STOLE him from me and now he is gone!. He was my best friend and i thought soon to be boyfriend but i was wrong... Chelsea runied that.. FOR GOOD! Kim¢¾ I shut the diary and i sat there crying even harder as i noticed some one who i thought was my friend really wasn't. I stormed out of wades house at the moment and went to bueno nacho to clear my mind. i kept the journal closs by me and rode my skatebourd to Bueno Nacho. So how is it for an 11 year old? well i hoped you liked this chapter people.
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Post by jmt2005791 on Nov 7, 2005 22:50:39 GMT -5
it's good so far you have a few typos but really so do i and i'm 18 so it's nothing that you can't fix later if you choose to. keep up the good work.
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Post by Mariah on Nov 10, 2005 22:28:50 GMT -5
I was on my way to bueno natcho on my skayebourd with my notebook clenched bettween my hands. I slammed face first to the ground as i was thinking when am i ever going to learn to not be a clutz probly never. I got up before anyone noticed that i had fallen to the ground. I touched a ple to help me get my self up. I staranted myself up and was back on track to bueno nacho i came into the stop as i noticed a big poster that i never saw it said We all remember Ron stoppable. I sniffled for a moment and there was posters all inside bueno nacho so i ran out as fast as i can. I cried all my way home i knew as i ran for my house that no one would care. I saw it Ron's old tree house and there was.... KIM uh oh i thought to my self. I sat down next to kim. " umm kim you know what we started off on the wrong foot i am sorry for that but i did not kill ron!" i said" even ask wade." Kim took a deep breath i noticed she wasn't listening complatly she was looking at pictures of her,Ron, and me when i first came here. She let out a huge sigh and turned to me. My eyes began to be watery and i felt it trickle down my cheek. I shuffled through the pictures with kim and after a long period of time she finally said something to me. " Chlesa, I know you want me to belive you but i can't now... at least for now anyway." said Kim I layed there and opend up my journal and began to write.
So how was it lol sorry i havn't updated my interenet wasn't working.
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Post by jmt2005791 on Nov 10, 2005 23:39:26 GMT -5
good update. don't worry about the typo's i been know to spell ron, roon. i can't wait for the next installment.
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Post by drakkenyay on Nov 11, 2005 9:03:48 GMT -5
wow its great and ur only 11 sweet im 13
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Post by Mariah on Nov 11, 2005 11:44:16 GMT -5
thanks lol. here is an update Dear Journal, Here I am in Ron's old tree house and kim finally talked to me she and i havn't been friends sence the acsident but she still dosn't belive me it makes me so mad. I did nothing all i did was walk across the street and i didin't notice a car was coming and Ron pushed me out of the way. At least some people belive me but not... kim Chelsea I shut my journal clossed and stared at the pics. I sighed and went out of the tree house i wasn't ready to look at photos from a year ago. I grabbed my bourd and went strait home. I cried all my way there. But what kim didn't notice was that i took a pic of me,kim, and Ron but.. that's all i have left of him now well besides rufus. I ran up the stairs not caring if Shego caught me when i was half way up the stairs shego called me. I hope she dosn't want me to do anything i will regret that's how she always is i thought. I went into the living room and saw shego laying down staring at the celling. " what shego?" i asked anoied " Well i have a task for you and you need to complete." said shego " yeah what is it?" i asked " well.... you need to get rid of Kim for good this time do you hear me!" asked shego while i shook me head yes. I wish i didn't have shego as a sister i thought. " i will do my best when shall i start?" i asked " NOW!" said shego i ran out of the house and knocked at Kim's door. I wish me and Kim could be firneds we would be friends if it wasn't for Ron's death and Shego i bet... o never mind. I wish me and Kim were friends for once and maybe she will belive me. I waited for someone to aswer as the door knob turned. So how was that? i know i hate it lol well tell me anyways.
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Post by jmt2005791 on Nov 11, 2005 22:26:09 GMT -5
i think it'spretty good. you keep up the good work.
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Post by Mariah on Nov 15, 2005 18:15:28 GMT -5
I am so so so sorry i havn't wrote my story sence friday i been so busy well anyway here is an update.
The door knob slowly turned i was scared i shiverd as the cold air hit me. Tim was standing there smiling for some reason I have always thought he liked me but i guessed right whenever i use to come to kims he would always have like hearts in his eyes but now tim and jim are 15 now i know it's been that long. "hey chelsea i havn't seen much of you lately." said Tm I smiled. " you probly wont anymore." i said he looked cofused " can u just go get kim please tim?" i aksed him sweetly i knew for sure he would say yes. "sure." said tim as he ran upsatirs into his sissters room. She came back with Tim as she galred at me as i thought why did i come again.... o yeah i have to get Kim for shego and why am i doing that Shego is a... EVIL sisster she never lets me do what i want! she is always do this do that and i always have to. But that is over for good at least for.. now. " can we talk?" i asked kim while Tim left. " I am listening." said kim " well i am sorry for stealing ron from you two years ago i thought he was perfect and now.... he is gone and it wasn't my fault belive me Kim it wasn't! I AM SORRY!" I practicly yelled at her whil she nodded" what is that supost to mean?" " Ok i forgive you! I am sorry for being a snot." said Kim i agreed with her on that. " so... now what? o yeah Kim watch out for Shego." i said " why?" she looked very confused. " Just listen to me." i said She rolled her eyes and i walked away. " hey Chelsea how about we go to Ron's Grave later it might make both of us feel better." said kim i turned around. " Sure!" i said as i kept on walking home. Then something tapped me on my sholder as i thought what now?
Like i said i am sorry i havn't updated it a few days i had an audition for a play at my school so sorry. I will update miore but if i don't i will likely do that another day so don't worry my fans lol.
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Post by jmt2005791 on Nov 16, 2005 20:41:28 GMT -5
don't worry about it. you made a good installment. trust me the time between your installments is nothing compared to mine. untill yesturday i hadn't made an installment for about 3 weeks.
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