What a Catch

[Carstens Loving Wife]

This is about Kim and Ron

in this story Kim is dating Ron Stoppable but intill there is a new girl at there College and her name is Sarah Andrews and she has her eyes on Ron. Can Kim win her guy back from the new girl who is best friends with Bonnie?

well what do you guy's think?

[surforst]

Win Ron back? You mean Ron actually cheats on Kim or is Kim just being defensive in nature. Was there a fight. Details man!

Anyway sounds promising but if Ron cheats on Kim you got to ask the basic question. Does she want him back? Have to wait till you write it I guess.

[Carstens Loving Wife]

oh no this girl is friend's with Bonnie and Bonnie wants a little revenge after what had happened at the prom so she got this new girl to frilt with Ron to make Kim mad i hope that helps. the chapter will be here soon.

[Winterfrost]

Hmm interesting...................

[surforst]

Carstens said:

oh no this girl is friend's with Bonnie and Bonnie wants a little revenge after what had happened at the prom so she got this new girl to frilt with Ron to make Kim mad i hope that helps. the chapter will be here soon.

So Kim is just jeal'in for no good reason. I love those stories ;D

My whole point of questioning is if Ron does cheat on Kim you have to consider the fact that Kim may not want him back. The thing is how will the girl make Kim feel threatened. Confuse Ron into thinking Kim cheating on him? Get Ron drunk and rape the poor boy? Either would be enough to threaten the relationship and cause good drama. Ron just plain leaving Kim though would of course kill the relationship no matter what happens. No sane person takes back a person who's cheated on them. Something to consider when you write the story.

[aliciamartin]

thanks everybody i hope you'll like it

[aliciamartin]

the frist chapter will be here either Monday or Tuesday because i'm seeing Harry Potter on Sunday