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Post by RavenStar on Nov 19, 2005 6:16:43 GMT -5
www.fanfiction.net/s/2666366/1/Rated: T Plot: The sequel to Replacement. Now high school graduates, Kim and Shego prepare for a bright future together. Too bad the past was only a dress rehearsal. Don't worry, it gets darker. I promise. Kigo, obviously, but also some MoRon (Ron/Monique -thank you Allaine, for coining that most wonderful term on the kpslash boards...) Enjoy. -RavenStar
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Post by RavenStar on Nov 20, 2005 15:25:04 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Nov 21, 2005 15:45:07 GMT -5
Chapter 3 is up: www.fanfiction.net/s/2666366/3/And I already corrected the the mispellings of "sead" and "Sheila" to "seat" and "Sheela," so you don't need to tip me off to those. It'll take a while for ff.net to update it, though. |
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Post by RavenStar on Nov 23, 2005 22:03:37 GMT -5
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Post by Winterfrost on Nov 24, 2005 6:52:57 GMT -5
I'm going to read it soon. I'm doing so many things at the moment........I don't even have time to continue my own fanfic T-T.
I'm expecting it to be as good as its prequel.
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Post by RavenStar on Nov 26, 2005 1:30:51 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Nov 27, 2005 14:40:36 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Dec 1, 2005 6:43:40 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Dec 9, 2005 18:45:25 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Dec 13, 2005 15:25:04 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Dec 15, 2005 13:49:51 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Dec 20, 2005 5:50:16 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Dec 24, 2005 22:24:05 GMT -5
Chapter 12 is up: www.fanfiction.net/s/2666366/12/I had trouble accessing it for a while before it worked for me, so if you have troubles, either click the refresh button like hell for half an hour or just wait to try again later... Happy Holidays, people! |
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Post by RavenStar on Dec 27, 2005 5:19:40 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Dec 29, 2005 15:32:31 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Jan 1, 2006 1:11:34 GMT -5
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Post by RavenStar on Jan 29, 2006 7:05:01 GMT -5
Okay, after re-reading this story, I wasn’t happy. I mean, it works, but it wasn’t what I wanted it to be fully. So, I’ve gone back, rewritten parts of a few chapters, and added a new chapter that explains a whole lot more. Details about the changes here, but for quick reference for those lazy people: The changes start on Chapter 7, so start with that. Here’s the list of changes: -Chapter 07: A few new lines of dialogue added, some revising and minor editing done. -Chapter 08: Some revising done. -Chapter 09: A few new details added, some revising done. -Chapter 10: Ending expanded. -Chapter 11: Ending expanded. -Chapter 12: A few new details added to various parts -Chapter 13: Major expansions and details added in. -Chapter 14: Brand new. Explains what happens before Team Possible heads to Washington, D.C. -Chapter 15: Previously Chapter 14; moved up. Major expansions and additions, elements rewritten to fit with new stuff. -Chapter 16: Previously Chapter 15; moved up. Major expansions and additions, elements rewritten to fit with new stuff. Everything's marked. Enjoy! |
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