My First Try At A Fan Fic

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Hey folks! I¡¦m starting work on a new KP fan fic, but its going to be different from others
Out there (at least I think it will). Not only is it going to involve KP, but it will be a crossover
With Fullmetal Alchemist.

Yes, I can already hear the that ¡s crazy, but hey, in real life I'm known among friends and
Co-workers as crazy Joe! Anyway, here is a link to the teaser, let me know what you think.

www.geocities.com/[e-mail]/teaser.html

All feedback is welcome, as long as its constructive!

[surforst]

Sweet I like Fullmetal. Looking forward to it but honestly I can't see how your going to combine the two right now. I'll have to wait and see I guess. Nice first chapter. Ron and Kim interaction works well and the story is readable and flows well. Short chapter but it gets the story going.

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surforst said:

Sweet I like Fullmetal. Looking forward to it but honestly I can't see how your going to combine the two right now. I'll have to wait and see I guess. Nice first chapter. Ron and Kim interaction works well and the story is readable and flows well. Short chapter but it gets the story going.

Thanks. The part that is up is only a teaser for now.