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Post by zaratan on Jan 5, 2006 2:38:24 GMT -5
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Post by surforst on Jan 11, 2006 6:04:09 GMT -5
Wow this got buried somewhere in here before I could even see it. Guess I spam these forums too much ;D
Anyway you already know I'm suporting this story. Looking forward to more.
*side note - there a chapter two now!*
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Post by aridblue on Jan 11, 2006 7:34:24 GMT -5
*claps hand* Very good. Very good piece of work. Who cares if a Medieval setting is overused, anyway?
On a sidenote, I would think that making the characters speak in medieval English (like thou, thee etc) would make it more authentic... (Oh God, please no, for readability's sake, I was just joking ;D)
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Post by aliciamartin on Jan 11, 2006 10:30:46 GMT -5
awwwwwwww princess Kim got a kiss that is a very sweet story good job  |
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Post by zaratan on Jan 11, 2006 11:37:12 GMT -5
Chapter 2 www.fanfiction.net/s/2737436/2/Yeah, I considered using Olde English, but that would have really ruined the readability. So, I'm trying to stick with speech mannerism, the more formal speak among nobility, and the more standard speak for the peasants. You notice Kimberly slips between them on occasion, but only with Ron. |
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Post by Ezbok58a on Jan 11, 2006 17:01:47 GMT -5
Interesting, very interesting. I like it.
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Post by Kayleigh on Jan 13, 2006 15:47:48 GMT -5
Love it! ;D Great story... unique!  Update soon...  |
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Post by aliciamartin on Jan 18, 2006 17:24:33 GMT -5
great job on chapter two can't wait for more |
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Post by zaratan on Jan 24, 2006 20:29:19 GMT -5
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Post by surforst on Jan 24, 2006 20:32:51 GMT -5
Yeah it was a good read but I got to quote what I wrote in another thread.
Where are the swords! Kill someone already and make us all feel a little better. Even if it's just that drunk down the street who doesn't know when to shut up. Just run him through with a sword already! Then we can go back to the romance. Just once Zaratan that's all I'm asking. Just once!
Ok maybe I really need to get back to my own medieval story its just that I mess the good old feel of KP and swords. It such a good mix after all. ;D
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Post by Undiscovered908 on Jan 24, 2006 20:47:04 GMT -5
AWESOME!!!!cant wait to see the next chapter!!!!!!!!!
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Post by zaratan on Jan 24, 2006 22:12:40 GMT -5
Plenty of action still to come, and I promise lots and lots of swords. But I'm still setting the stage, so you'll have to wait... a couple more chapters.
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Post by beeperking on Jan 27, 2006 21:22:54 GMT -5
Great story! Can't wait to see what you have planned.
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Post by ultimatenacotoppin on Jan 28, 2006 11:08:04 GMT -5
Bump
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Post by zaratan on Feb 15, 2006 20:24:09 GMT -5
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Update soon... 
